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Posted: 10 years ago
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Hazar rahein mud ke dekhi
Kahin se koi sada na aayi
Badi wafa se nibhaai tumne
Hamari thodi si bewafai
The relationship is already broken so is the marriage. None of them wanted it to happen but it was bound to happen. With time, circumstances started creating differences, cracks between them, giving birth to misunderstandings. They wanted to fill those cracks but something stopped them.

Jahan se tum mod mud gaye the
Jahan se tum mod mud gaye the
Woh mod ab bhi wahin pade hain
Hum apne pairon mein jaane kitne
Hum apne pairon mein jaane kitne
Bhanwar lapete hue khade hain
Badi wafa se nibhaai tumne
Hamari thodi si bewafai

They became their own enemy. Their EGO was to be blamed. They wanted to reunite but again their ego stopped them. The duo unfortunately did the same thing, waiting for the other one to turn up, to take the first step. Ego became the villain in their love story.

Kahin kisi roz yun bhi hota
Kahin kisi roz yun bhi hota
Hamari haalat tumhari hoti
Jo raatein humne guzari mar ke
Jo raatein humne guzari mar ke
Woh raat tumne guzari hoti
Badi wafa se nibhaai tumne
Hamari thodi si bewafai

Blaming someone is always easy. The easiest thing to do when you don't want to accept that you were wrong. So better put the blame on someone else, at least that would cause no harm to your already inflated EGO. When u can't bear the pain anymore, you wish that that someone gets the share of your pain and agony. You want the same pain you feel, to be felt by that person.

Unhein yeh zid thi ke hum bulaate
Hamein yeh ummeed woh pukarein
Hai naam honthon pe ab bhi lekin
Aawaz mein pad gai daraarein
Hazar rahein mud ke dekhi
Kahin se koi sada na aayi
Badi wafa se nibhaai tumne
Hamari thodi si bewafai
Hamari thodi si bewafai

You wish to be with him again. In the circle of his arms. You yearn for him. But you wouldn't do anything. You hope he would come back to you crawling. You want him to beg to you, to come back to him. You want him to return to you but you have no choice. You will have to wait. Why...??? Again because of your EGO... Your ego wouldn't let you undo the damage done. Your relationship suffered and is still suffering.

"Just like us... Isn't it..??" Abeer said as he sat beside meher.
Meher was listening to some show on FM when this song started playing.
"I guess so..."
Her voice cracked at the end, he knew she was thinking about them. She was emotional after going on the journey of their love.
"Wanna have some coffee...??? We can have a real conversation..." Abeer offered.
"For once" meher accepted it and went to the kitchen.
A cup of coffee... Real conversation... Was it that easy...???
thought abeer with smile on his face and hope in his heart.

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Hope you like it...!!! 😊
Naina
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Naina ! I just listened to the song and it was sooo touching
The lyrics fit so perfectly with MehBeer. I loved how you incorporated feelings into the song. And Abeer asking Meher out at the end was the perfect touch! I wish these two could have a cordial conversation like that in the show for once!
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Originally posted by: -Ishana-

Naina ! I just listened to the song and it was sooo touching heard it for the first time... Is it...?? Actually its one of my all time favourite... Gulzar sahab... This song again is a piece of art by hi!m... The lyrical magic he creates... Its lovely...!!
The lyrics fit so perfectly with MehBeer. Yeah... I realised it when I was listening to it tonight... I loved how you incorporated feelings into the song. Thank you babe...!!! And Abeer asking Meher out at the end was the perfect touch! Aww... Thanks again... 😃 I wish these two could have a cordial conversation like that in the show for once! The CVS aren't creative like us... So no hope...

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Posted: 10 years ago
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Beautiful Song Naina and it perfectly fits Mehbeer
You portrayed their feelings very well.
End part was touching and Abeer offering coffe was ❤️
Thanks for pm in advance .
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Posted: 10 years ago
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all the emotions are put very nicely...
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this i am expecting to be happen in the story...
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in the drama viewers dont know exactly what happened and leads keep hating each other... such times stories like dis are only our shelter...
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thnx fr d pm
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Originally posted by: madhufx9...

Beautiful Song Naina and it perfectly fits Mehbeer

You portrayed their feelings very well.
End part was touching and Abeer offering coffe was ❤️
Thanks for pm in advance .


Thank you madhu...!!!
For the appreciation n that comment... 😉
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Originally posted by: babydolll

all the emotions are put very nicely...

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this i am expecting to be happen in the story...
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in the drama viewers dont know exactly what happened and leads keep hating each other... such times stories like dis are only our shelter...
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thnx fr d pm


Thank you 😃 and I agree with you... Some times these stories are our only shelter...
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Heart touching os
I like the song
Hope this will happen in show
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Loved the end! So nice to see them able to just have a conversation!
Now this is my kind of OS, thanks a bunch for writing it for us!

Also where do you get all these songs I've never heard of from? When I first read the title I read it as "Hazir Rahien" 😆.

-Kriti


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Posted: 10 years ago
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unres

The song choice was perfect for this os! I loved it to the core Naina. Where is the song from?
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