Letter to the Rockstar // OS - Page 2

Originally posted by: ournewboyfriend

Ah, yeah I've thought of that already. I won't exactly post the parts on the same thread, but I'll be creating a sort of index, if it makes sense? Is that convenient?

Originally posted by: --Ari--

yay u writing on bd

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Firstly just how can you be talented at everything? HOW? amazing graphics and now amazing stories is there anything you cant do? 😆 Thanks so much man, means a lot coming from you!

The poem/lines at the beginning were so apt for mehbeer 👏 +1 for that. IKR! It's like their current relationship fit into a few lines lol

I loved this ❤️ apart from the fact that it felt a lil too small 😆 I swear, I can't write long stuff. The maximum I've written was a SS six chapters long. I just can't. Even one-shots, max was around 1.5k works. IDK

All of us are so involved in abeer and his POV [cant help it na 😉] we sometimes forget meher is going through so much herself, I loved that u wrote on meher and her dilemma. It shows meher in a whole new light to see her through these words and understand the internal battle she is going through. 😭 I feel for her sometimes, which resulted in this idea. I was trying to figure out what plays in her mind while she closes him off, and yeah

It really is hard, Abeer. I don't think I can survive another day without either murdering you or jumping your bones right there and then.

^^This line i loved the most 🤣 i'd prefer the second one 😉 i'd pay to watch the second one 🤣 LOL GLAD U NOTICED

The ending where she crumbles the paper away was so 😭 TALK TO EACH OTHER ALREADY and end this torture 😭

Write more. soon 😉 I'm gonna start a drabble/ OS series. You'll see pleeenty of me :v

Originally posted by: war_is_peace

loved this piece of writing 👏 well done! 👏

n the letter is never going to reach the rockstar! there is goes..vroom 😆

pls write more...i like ur style😳...n i wudnt mind SS/FF either...the more the merrier 😆

-love

Hiya

Originally posted by: -.serendipity.-

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Amazing! I have read your work before and I think that you improve with every piece of writing. I really enjoyed how you showed Meher's emotions. Almost all the stories are concentrated on Abeer so I was glad to read something different. Keep writing here!