Badtameez Dil: The Musical || Jar of Hearts - Page 10 - Page 9

Originally posted by: VaticanCameos

Gurleen *hugs*

Dil Khush kar Diya yaar👏

This was so beautiful. Getting to see the inner turmoil of these two people through such beautiful songs was such a delight. We always take so much pleasure in their pain, don't we?😆

This really stirred so many emotions in me. I almost teared up thinking about how much these two have suffered.

The endings were my favourite though. Two people just giving up, but in such radically different ways. Him giving up on love, her giving up her fear and just giving in to her emotions. I always love that closure in a story, where you know no matter what these two aren't going anywhere without each other.

Such a beautiful piece. You're underestimating yourself Gur :*

Originally posted by: hilly

Heey! :D
hope you're ok. The tracks have been soo soo wonderful.. I'm loving everything that you've penned down so far.

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Chand Sitare:- Hrithik! ahaa! :D I legit sung the song along while imagining the song with hrithik and then abeer and meher. This songg is literally 'LOVE' & so is the movieee. siggh* so wonderfully orchested and penned down- but the imagery/atmosphere you created on these two- suited them so well. I was smiling throughout!

Apologize:- omgssh. omgsh. intensity, emotions, the feeels** Abeer assoicated with sadism- is WOW! he pulls it off SO well through your given detail, feels and imagery! The pain, the bittersweet memories were so visible and emotions could be felt. the endingg* :'( He loves her so much & so does she! damn those misunderstandings/miscommunications! </3

Jar of Hearts:- Meher's perspective. Haye. Loved how you have merged her with Apologize's scene. The red umbrella/rain flashbacks in the show has made me curious and wanting to know what could that be about. & so Apologize's abeer went perfectly with the flashback on show - so wonderful. Love how to the point and short in detail you made- which said everything. & from the flashback scene you recounted all the scenes till present of them together. Gosh. Feel for both of of them. Don't know who to shake off first and say you were wrong. Whereas Abeer tried hard enough to reconcile about the divorce/ under the umbrella, get her to look at him and she didn't, except appear cold; on the other hand, she thought he didn't try hard enough to stop her. uggh. stupid heart and egos. bechare dono- have suffered so much in the hands of their dil. & the ending- seperated, poles apart but always together. gaaah.

Read all of them in one go and so brilliant- Loved everything single one. Reading angst breaks my heart but then you make it sound so amazing and attention to detail is just... I hope they reveal everything fast enough. So curious to know it all and that's where fanfic's help a bit- hehe. Loving the tracks and stories.
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Originally posted by: -Ishana-

So I've been a silent reader so long and after reading all these OSs for the fifteenth time, I'm commenting 😆

Your style of writing is truly unique! I love it!
I also love how lengthy they are to, because I love reading these!!!

Now personally, Jar of Hearts is my favorite<3333
But one little thing- I'm damn jealous of how Abeer kissed that other girl in front of Meher 😆

Originally posted by: hilly

@ asmanixx :-
haha! I'm glad to hear that you're doing much better now.
Apologize's song - lovee it and it went so well with Abeer- deff agree on that!

I lovee how you manage to pull out on angst and abeer & Meher- love it even more than romantic stuff. Love your attention to details and all. makes reading so much better and yes, defff counting in your writing style.

I have no idea how to copy/paste messages and reply back as you've done.
could you please let me know. will save me time replying separately!

*btw, when are you updating? I've been really looking frwd to reading moreee! Please do update! xx :))

Don't even mention it.. you deserve the praise! Thankyouuu! there's isn't as interesting stuff as yours to read on the forum!