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Posted: 10 years ago
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Originally posted by: desire_nikki

really beautiful os..
loved it..


Thank you! Glad you liked it!
Zainab & Kriti

Originally posted by: fiza1995

Small yet beautiful work of urs.

I loved loved loved it. It goes straight in my favourites.
Thanks for the pm :)


Aww thank you! Happy to hear you liked it!
And that's very sweet of you to say, thanks once again!
Also, no problem for the PM :)

Zainab & Kriti

Originally posted by: naina927

Brilliant it was..!!! But too short..

I want more...


Nainaa!! Thanks man! We'll try to write another one soon! :)

Zainab & Kriti


Originally posted by: mistofshadows

Short but I loved it. There was a figment of comfort in it.
Kriti- I am glad u wrote another piece. Love ur writings. Thanks for the PM.
Zainab- I am glad Kriti forced u into this. U both r complimentary writers.


Thanks! Glad you liked it and aww you're so sweet! Don't worry you'll definitely see more of Team Lost in Transit.
And no problem for the PM <3

Zainab & Kriti

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Posted: 10 years ago
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I think i was one of the firsts to read this. But damn this OS was so freaking beautiful i was lost for words and i took time to write a comment worthy of this. I read it again today to comment and i am lost again.

This is so so so fabulous. Every sentence, every word its just perfect. It is essentially about them realising their feelings and finding each other again yet it has this deep deep sadistic touch to it which makes it so AH-MA-ZING.


There are so many lines that have touched me. you've penned it down so beautifully. But if i had to mention each one of them here then the comment would get longer than the update 🤣 there were so many moments though that had me, when abeer realised she still had him, the way he knelt before her, how he recognised her silence, how she finally accepted she needed him, and the end conclusion that a piece a paper cant cut bonds, the way you described their divorce was so ❤️ .


The title for one is so perfect and intriguing and depicts their situation to the T. You've both done a fabulous job at it. And if your collaborations brings out such master pieces i want more collabs 😉

Amazing sadistic stuff makes me happy 😆 and inspires me. so keep em coming.

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Posted: 10 years ago
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Amazing work guys! Looking forward to some more collabs!
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Posted: 10 years ago
#14
Nice ...thanks for pm 😊
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Originally posted by: --Ari--


Thanks.😳



Well that was the plan. Kriti, high five here, we pulled it off😆

I think i was one of the firsts to read this. But damn this OS was so freaking beautiful i was lost for words and i took time to write a comment worthy of this. I read it again today to comment and i am lost again.

Aww..That's so sweet of you. We really do appreciate the fact that you took the time to write such a thoughtful comment. You're a real cutie.🤗

This is so so so fabulous. Every sentence, every word its just perfect. It is essentially about them realising their feelings and finding each other again yet it has this deep deep sadistic touch to it which makes it so AH-MA-ZING.

Thank you dear. Thank goodness, that was the plan! We're glad that we were able to execute our idea in a way that the reader understood. Seriously, just what an writer wants to hear; that their message was understood!

There are so many lines that have touched me. you've penned it down so beautifully. But if i had to mention each one of them here then the comment would get longer than the update 🤣 there were so many moments though that had me, when abeer realised she still had him, the way he knelt before her, how he recognised her silence, how she finally accepted she needed him, and the end conclusion that a piece a paper cant cut bonds, the way you described their divorce was so ❤️ .

Lol. Don't worry we won't make you go through that trouble. We believe you.😆

The title for one is so perfect and intriguing and depicts their situation to the T. You've both done a fabulous job at it. And if your collaborations brings out such master pieces i want more collabs 😉

Shukriya. Honestly, titles is all on Kriti. The woman knows her stuff. Names and I don't go very well together.🤣
You're so sweet, really. We will definitely try.😃

Amazing sadistic stuff makes me happy 😆 and inspires me. so keep em coming.

I know we're your coming from. I love it myself.
Yes ma'am! You all have to bother this one over here (ahem..ahem..Kriti) to get her butt working. She's so lazy I tell ya.😆

Anyways, thank you, once again for this humungo, sweet comment. We genuinely appreciate your thoughts and comments. ❤️

Kriti & Zainab

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Posted: 10 years ago
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Thanks dear. 🤗
Kriti & Zainab

Originally posted by: -.serendipity.-

Amazing work guys! Looking forward to some more collabs!


Thanks a ton. 🤗
We will definitely try our best.😃
Krit & Zainab

Originally posted by: -silentbang-

Nice ...thanks for pm 😊


Thank you.🤗
It was no problem at all.
Kriti & Zainab

Edited by beauty14 - 10 years ago

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