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Posted: 10 years ago
#71

Originally posted by: war_is_peace

res you know i love you right? 😆 tere comments give me inspiration to write better 🤣 your love for this story makes me love you even more *aa gale lag ja* 🤣

unresd


tere sandhir se kuch nahi hone waala 🤣 sab kuch mere abeer ko hi karna padega 🤣 mere sandhir ne already bahut kaand kar rakhe hai 🤣 you just wait and watch 🤣

the past mehbeer are so into each other and crying and vulnerable already...i am thinking tu agle agle update mein kiss de degi 🤣 aise kaise. bina tadap ke maza kaha 🤣

future mehbeer...poor things 😭
tu unko unke khudke videos dikha rahi hai...soyenge kaise mere babies ? 😭 new heights of sadism 🤣
mehbeer consoling each other 🥺 that hug was just ❤️ i loved writing that scene ❤️ my terrace is my fav spot. so its a special connection.
so i am confused what abeer meant by 'i promise there wont be a heart break again' ?
and confused what meher understood by this! 😎

two things - either abeer already wants to be back together or he just meant that he wont let the love grow and lead towards heart break 😭...but, i know wat abeer meant...i really do mujhe bhi batana what you understood. i will write accordingly 🤣

sandhir are stalking past mehbeer ke saath saath future mehbeer too 🤣 haan my poor babies have so much mehnat to do 🤣
waise me thinks future mehbeer mein toh kiss ho sakta hai since lots must have already happend 😉 🤣 lets see 😉

ps - yest i slept off after reading 🤣 cell se comment karne ka patience nahi tha ..i miss the emos u know 😆 me too 🤣

pss - agla update better be a laugh riot 🤣 😡i will try 🤣 no promises though 🤣


ek minnute...yeh sandhir ka plan B kya hai??? 😲 😲 i so dont trust sanyu 🤣 you shouldnt 🤣 finally someone noticed the details i've been trying to sneek in 🤣

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Posted: 10 years ago
#72

Originally posted by: war_is_peace

unresd 🤣

ab agla update de 😈


coming soon 😆 working on like three updates 🤣
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Posted: 10 years ago
#73

Originally posted by: war_is_peace


haan you write for me...i will bug u everywhere😆...woh alag baat hai that u dont respond 😭 HC fan hun. uska kaminapan kahi toh dikhega 🤣

IKR! premeer ! i cant help it! 😒 they are tooo ☺️ ☺️ i wanna pull their cheeks right! 😛 you can have heers cheeks mujhe bas prem chaiye ❤️

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Posted: 10 years ago
#74

Originally posted by: IttiSiKriti

RES

Going out rn, will be out majority of today and tomorrow but you bet Ranbir Kapoor's cute butt that I'll be back and be reading this <3

*UnRes*

Sorry, forgot about this. Ranbir's cute butt will just have to be donated to the needy (TRP Aunty's with no spice left in their lives). you just made the trp aunties day 🤣 let us hope they give us some trp in daan for that neki 🤣

Anyways, thanks for reminding me. Kinda not in a good mood, hopefully this will make it better :) I was just kidding 😆 I am happy as long as you read 😆

Prologue:

Oh wait. Is this going to be an actual time machine story? My mood's feeling better already due to the anticipation and excitement. Ari aisa khwab tumhe hi aa sakta hai lol. YAYYY this makes me happy that i made you happy. and oh well it started out with a crazy idea but then i thought chalo karte hai 🤣 and here it is. 🤣 my baby ❤️ 😳

And aw, Randhir and Sanyukta the same as ever. I used to watch Sadda Haq way back in the day actually.
early days of sh were gold ❤️ i so missed writing on them. i started this just so i can write on sandhir in a way 😆
""To pehle kyun nahi bataya" both randhir and sanyukta scolded them"--had me like 🤣. That is soo them.
i know crazy they are. my OTP for life ❤️ 😳 🤣 no one can be remotely as crazy 🤣

OMG This ACTUALLY is blast to the past. Like really. Wow. Ok woman you've got me hooked. *pats self of back* job well done 🤣

Part 1:

"Ya humein pagal bana rahe ho?" meher completed thinking about walking away.

^ That 🤣
Ooh why do I feel like koi na koi garbar toh 100% hone hi waali hai. 😆 Yeh machine fool-proof nahi hai na? Right? 😆

Love Abeer's cheekiness.
abeers cheekiness is his best quality cant leave that out 🤣 machine fool proof hai. sandhir and mehbeer nahi hai 🤣🤣

Part 2:

""Kya karti mai bhi, is jaise namune ko jhelne ke liye mujhe bhi strong hona pada" meher acted like a typical abla nari, but no one bought it. Abeer smirked."

🤣 Pyaar khatam karne nikle the, dosti ko acceleration de di. idiots they are 🤣🤣

"Usko bachpan mei bohot baar gira diya tha, On his head. Poor chap it messed with his head. He thinks he is gods gift to mankind. " sanyukta joined meher in giggling.

Ari!! This sense of humor of yours is murderous 🤣 *takes a bow* thank you 🤣 it is so taxing to write funny. glad it came right 😆

Oh my god, who's breaking into the lab? Found you both? Why are they looking for MehBeer? Randhir-Sanyukta? What? Ho kya raha hai? Are they going to be stuck?? 😲😲 KRITI GIRL I LOVE YOU TO INFINITY FOR THIS 🤣 this was my lame ass attempt at thriller. glad someone noticed it admist the romance and drama 🤣 it is goanna be an interesting ride i can promise you 😳😉

Part 3:

🤣 Isse kehte hai epic fail, Sanyu aur RD ko badi si saabashi mili hogi 😆. my babies tried ok 🤣🤣
Haha aww, Love story end karne aye the, but like Abeer saw, these two were bound to be together.
Kinda like A Walk to Remember Hayyee kisse compare kar diya. that book had so many feels ❤️ one of my favs ❤️



Part 4:
🤣 LOL Bechari SanDhir be daya aa rahi hai. mujhe bhi 🤣 MehBeer just can't stay away from each other. present/past/future that is one thing which can never change 🤣 Aaah them spending time together and Tanha Dil and omadslfjaslkdfj this is beautiful. thank you so much. 😳And there's more 😳😆 Hayyo Rabba.

AWW MEHER don't cry, and Abeer went to comfort her, MY BABIES. 😭🤗

Thank you Ari for this, I left with a much better mood than I came in with and I LOVE time-travel stories. Like LOVE. Aww thank you kriti. this means alot. especially coming from an amazing writer like you. i am glad this story could make your mood better. love you for this :-*

Love,

Kriti ❤️

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Posted: 10 years ago
#75

Before i start off this update i want to dedicate it to someone special. Hiyuuu this one is for you :-* For making me excited about writing this story. For loving this craziness of mine as much as i love it. Your comments on this story make me wanna work harder on it and write better. Thank you so much for everything. Escpecially for bearing me when i pull a 'HC' and dissapear 🤣 I love you :-* You are one of THE best fangirling partners 😳 Hope you like this one 😆

P.s i struggle so bad with describing stuff. Took a little inspiration from arjuhi salsa dance 🤣 So yeah that happened and i am sorry if that came out like shit 😆


CHAPTER 5

"Randhir we can't do that without knowing what will be the consequences." Sanyukta said worrying about Plan B as she held on to randhir's hand to stop her own from shaking.

"Sanyu we have only 1 week left we can't wait any longer." Randhir said trying to remain calm for sanyu's sake. Plan A was supposed to guide them on how to go forward with Plan B but now with the complicated situation MehBeer had gotten themselves and everyone in, they had to go in blind. There was no other option or time left for any other plan.

"Then what about them?" Sanyukta asked gesturing to meher and abeer who were still sitting holding on to each other. Abeer was getting off the parapet wall and then giving his hand to meher, as he supported her while bringing her down. But they didn't move as they got to the floor, they continued staring into each other's eyes holding on to each other. Sanyukta's heart broke seeing them, she wanted to help them so bad, but this was more important.

"We can't help them until they want to help themselves." Randhir said giving a final helpless glance towards meher and abeer before dragging sanyukta away.

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Lafzon se jo tha pareh
Khaali pann ko jo bhare
Kuch toh tha tere mere darmiyaan

There was so much they wanted to say to each other, so many wounds that had to be bandaged and healed. But words abandoned them.

Rishte ko kya modh doon
Naata yeh ab todh doon
Ya phir yunhi chodh doon, darmiyaan

And so they stood still, staring into each other's eyes searching for answers they couldn't find within themselves.

Benaam rishta woh
Benaam rishta woh, bechain karta jo
Ho na sake jo beyaan, darmiyaan
Kuch toh tha tere mere darmiyaan

Rain started pouring to fill the silences between them with its melody. Meher started to run towards the shelter to take cover but abeer held on to her hand.

Aankhon mein tere saaye
Chahoon toh ho na paaye
Yaadon se teri faasla haye

"For old time's sake?" he asked with a smile trying to mask the pain his eyes were communicating to her as he turned her around.

Jaake bhi tu na jaaye
Thehri tu dil mein haye
Hasrat si banke kyun bhala

She turned around with an expression he hadn't seen in the longest time. Of adoration, love, empathy, like she knew what he was feeling, like she was feeling it too. And in that moment abeer realised these feelings were there all along. He just hadn't looked deep enough, she was always there.

Kyun yaad karta hoon
Mitt ta hoon banta hoon
Mujhko to laaye yeh kahan

All the memories of their rain dances on this terrace accompanied abeer as he pulled at her waist bringing her closer and started swaying the both of them around to the silent music the rain was playing.

He twirled her around and then brought her closer to him. Closer then she was before. As their bodies clashed, he held onto her with all his might. Not wanting to ever let her go.

Chalte thay jinpe hum tum
Raaste woh saare hai ghum

Ab dhoondhu kaise manzilein

They had come here to erase every path of them coming towards each other, for forgetting each other. But now as he dipped her and bent forwards towards her, all he could think of was of ways to make it alright. He wanted to erase all her pain and replace it with happiness.


Yeh raatein hain jaise maatam
Aaate hain din bhi gumsum
Roothi hain saari mehfilein.

With every inch abeer came closer meher's heart broke with a new flashback of an old memory.

She remembered how she waited for him at the door whole night when he had left her in the middle of the night in anger.

She remembered him signing the divorce papers and throwing them at her face.

She remembered how he had walked away leaving her standing alone in rain.

She remembered crying for days wishing him back.

She remembered not breathing properly for weeks.

And lastly with him only inches away she remembered the most painful of them all, she remembered how he had broken her beyond repair. How she was never the same after him. He had taken her smile, love and happiness with him leaving behind only a shell of a person who broke a little further on the inside every day but kept faking strength for her family hoping it became her truth. But it never did.


Itna sataayo na, yun yaad aao na
Bann jaaye aansu bhi zubaan

As his lips lightly touched hers she came out of her trance and immediately straightened herself. Even with rain drops drenching her from head to toe abeer could see the traces of tears from her eyes.

She loved him more than herself, a love she was never able to forget. But the pain he had caused her was something she wouldn't be able to go through another time.

"Too. Much. Pain" were the only broken words she was able to speak up before running away from him, from the terrace filled with their memories and the pain being with him bought.

He watched standing alone in rain as she went away from him and disappeared into the house, leaving him standing alone in the rain. Just like he had left her.

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"Randhir please, we can't leave them just like this. Let us do something for them" sanyu begged rd her heart not wanting to leave meher and abeer at this stage where they both were so close to each other yet so far away. Abeer was breaking down on the terrace while meher had locked herself up in her room.

"Sanyu you know we don't have time for this. Our flight for delhi leaves in 3 hours. We are more needed there." Randhir tried to reason.

"Please mere liye." She requested. He couldn't say no to that, everything he was doing was for her.

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"We are leaving in a few hours for some urgent work in delhi. We need to talk to you now."

They sent the same text to both meher and abeer. Within 10 minutes both of them were in the hall.

"What? Why? How? Where?"

Both of them spoke in unison without letting sanyu or rd speak.

"We are need to be in F.I.T.E right now, to right some wrongs" randhir said with a emotionless expression with his eyes only on sanyukta, she looked like she would break down any moment. He knew the thought of going to delhi and facing what they had done 10 years back was killing her on the inside.

"But what about us?" meher asked.

"We will be back in a week" randhir said with the same blank expression still eyeing sanyu with caution.

"But till we are back" sanyu spoke keeping her voice even, she needed meher and abeer to understand "We need you both to decide what you want, if you want to stay together or not. Only once you take your decision and we act on it can we leave. And we leave as soon as we are back. So please think about it this one week. Like really think about it" sanyu pleaded hoping they took the right decision. She wanted this time travel to atleast set one love story right.

"And we want you to start by seeing the rest of the recording" randhir continued "This time though instead of thinking of your past think of the present they are making, how happy they are, you can be that happy if you give yourselves a chance" he finished.

Meher and abeer were in too much shock to even react or protest after all the information they had just received. RD and sanyu pushed them on to the couch and hit play on the paused recording which RD had got.

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*Recording*

Randhir was in the library trying to see if this good for nothing college had any good book on engineering structures he could borrow for the construction of the hostel wall. But to no benefit. Just then he heard abeer's voice, randhir smiled thinking atleast he could hang out with abeer for a bit instead of going back to that mad house.

He had only started moving out of the books rack when he heard meher's laughter. Randhir stopped in his place as he eyed meher and beside each other wrestling over a book which meher was trying to open and abeer was trying to close. Their hands were on each other's as they tried to claw away the other's hand from the book and their eyes never left each other. Randhir opened his handy cam and started recording.

"Abeer you do realise that study session needs to contain some amount of studying right?" She tried to look angry but came off as cute and adorable instead.

"SOME being the operational word there." Abeer frowned. "You and I have very different definitions of SOME Miss. Purohit we have been at this since 3 hours. A short break won't do your brain cells any permanent damage.! " he exclaimed

"It is the teacher's definition of SOME that counts" meher said with a smug expression.

"Meher yaar" Abeer pouted as he pulled the book over from under her hands and put the book over his head frustrated cursing the moment he had asked her to teach him. Why couldn't he have just asked her to join his band.

"You are such a kid" meher pulled at his cheeks.

"Oh yeah?" he cocked his eye brow shoving the book aside on to the table and pushing his chair backwards in a swift motion. "Can a kid do this?" he asked resting his weight on one knee as he knelt before her, his hand out stretched towards her.

Her face was a mixture of alarmed and confused.

"Every good musician needs to know how to dance to their tunes mi'lady. Please give me the honor of this dance" before she had a chance to react he took her hand in his pulled her from her seat as he started humming.

Jab mila tu ru turu tu ru turu tu...

He held on to her fingers with his own, leading her as she followed him.

Na thi kami na justuju ru turu tu..

Her left foot went backward with his right foot coming forward. Her right foot came forward with his left foot going backwards.

Aur aadhe aadhe pal hue phir poore yun

And then they came back to their original position in perfect sync like they were doing this all their life.

Jab mila tu ru turu tu ru turu tu

Extending his leg diagonally he pulled her to the opposite end as he took her place and she took his in an effortless twirl as a naughty smile engulfed his lips.

He was trying so hard to make her smile yet he could see that she still was shaken with the whole "tanha dil" experience the song had hit her harder then he'd expected and she was going back into a shell. Something which abeer didn't want. So he continued with the song something he couldnt tell her through words.

Tu aadhe se dil ko, jo layegi bhi toh
Main sau khwaishon se hi bhar doonga woh

Twirling her around he finally pulled her into him.

She crossed her hands as he caught hold of her left hand with his right and right with his left. They continued moving to him humming.

Kare na yakeen toh, abhi ke abi tu
Toh aake aazma

As they parted and came back to their original positions holding palms. He took a step backward and she followed his lead taking a step back and then taking two steps forward they came closer to each other, only the palms they held in between them.

Jab mila tu ru turu tu ru turu tu...

Na thi kami na justuju ru turu tu..

Taking hold of her waist with one hand and supporting her head with another he gave her a final dip while she held on to him for dear life.

Aur aadhe aadhe pal hue phir poore yun

Jab mila tu ru turu tu ru turu tu

Abeer was all smiles as he completed the song and pulled her up to a standing position beside him and meher couldn't keep a check on her happiness anymore as her sparkling eyes gave it all away while her erratic heartbeat only added to it.

"Would you say no to a dance again?" abeer asked with a cheeky grin as he pat himself on the back saying "mission sucessfull".

"I will say yes only if I get to lead next time" meher winked at him. "and if you finish this chapter of business economics" she laughed as abeer groaned.

"There is no distracting you" he said grumpily taking his place on the study table as she re-opened their books.

*end of recording*

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"I wish the old scars could be erased." They both thought in unison.

"I wish i could be with that smiling meher who had a spark in her eyes" abeer wished to himself.

"I wish i could be with that abeer who could always make me smile" meher wishfully told herself.

"WISH GRANTED." Destiny whispered to them as the hostel wall broke down and sanyukta, randhir parted for delhi with hugs, tears, best wishes and promises of making everything alright.


PART 6

Edited by -TeekhiMishti- - 10 years ago
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Posted: 10 years ago
#76
Res

I know I know... I promised I will unres in the morning. But late than never... Right...??
Hawww... Sandhir are planning to leave mehbeer alone in the past...!!! Not that I would mind them staying alone in the guest house... But yeah dono ke dimag mein kya chal raha hai... Haayeee sanyukta really cares for mehbeer and she wants them to get back together. She also ships mehbeer... Very cool...!!!
"We can't help them until they want to help themselves." Randhir said giving a final helpless glance towards meher and abeer before dragging sanyukta away
Banda bolta ek dum sahi baat hai... Straight to the point. 👏
First tell me do you like the song 'benaam rishta'..?? Because I love it...!! ❤️ now its all the more special...!!! Mehbeer dance... Reminded me of the song from movie mast 'chora chori chart pe milenge toh khelenge prem game... On the roof in the rain" haha... 🤣 🤣
They had come here to erase every path of them coming towards each other, for forgetting each other. But now as he dipped her and bent forwards towards her, all he could think of was of ways to make it alright. He wanted to erase all her pain and replace it with happiness.
Awww... ❤️
Another thing I loved was how who incorporated the rain scene promo. Abeer left meher in the rain and now meher left abeer standing all alone in the rain. 👏
The flashback...!!! Can mehbeer get any more sweet,cute and lovable...??? Though that depends on you...!!! 😉 Again a dance sequence...!!! Lagta hai lkpi bahut meherbaan hai humpe... 😆

"I wish the old scars could be erased." They both thought in unison.

"I wish i could be with that smiling meher who had a spark in her eyes" abeer wished to himself.

"I wish i could be with that abeer who could always make me smile" meher wishfully told herself.

"WISH GRANTED." Destiny whispered to them as the hostel wall broke down and sanyukta, randhir parted for delhi with hugs, tears, best wishes and promises of making everything alright.

The highlight of the chappy...!!!!! ⭐️




Edited by naina927 - 10 years ago
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Posted: 10 years ago
#77
res till tonight 🤣

unresd
mujhe pehle hi shak tha..yeh sandhir bade selfish hain...kaam toh hota nahi and ab khudka kaam niptaane jaa rahe hain 🤣 i wonder waha kaunse zhande gaadh aayenge 🤣


"We can't help them until they want to help themselves." Randhir said giving a final helpless glance towards meher and abeer before dragging sanyukta away.

yeh ek line ke liye muah 😛


Lafzon se jo tha pareh
Khaali pann ko jo bhare
Kuch toh tha tere mere darmiyaan


^^^ i love this song
par iss song se HC yaad aa gaya...
'kuch toh hai tere mere darmiyaan' chances hai HC will star in this one..

and i loved the rain dance ... all the more because i love this song...thankies

ab dono recording dekh rahe hain...aww poor things are soon going to kiss 'for old time sake' and *ahem* 'for old time sake' 🤣


abeer n meher are only dancing all through this update 🤣 thak gaye honge mere babies😭 next update mein thoda khaana khilaa dena...sandhir ki farewell party samajh ke 🤣

arre waah wall broke?!! 👏 matlab sanyu ne yeh wala kaam bhi thik se nahi kiya? 🤣 ya did she spoil it intentionally ?😆


-oho i c...toh ab old mehbeer and new mehbeer in the same house? 🤣 🤣 🤣
matlab new mehbeer haath mein haath liye will hide in the house 🤣

ps - next 3 updates ..u shud be done with 😆 mujhe toh yahi kaha tha tuune 🤣

Edited by war_is_peace - 10 years ago
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Posted: 10 years ago
#78

lemme remove the first part then 🤣
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Posted: 10 years ago
#79
It was so awesome so intimate. Justloved it! Plzz update soon.:D
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Originally posted by: ananya925

It was so awesome so intimate. Justloved it! Plzz update soon.:D


Aww am glad that came out right. thank you so much for reading and liking. especially cause this story is really special for my ❤️ might just update by tonight another chapter if i am done procrastinating 😆

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