MehBeer+SanDhir SS: Blast To The Past-Part 9-Page 17 - Page 5

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Posted: 10 years ago
#41
Brilliant update ari... ๐Ÿ‘๐Ÿ‘
Mehbeer...!!! They were so cute... Dono sochte bhi same cheez hain ๐Ÿคฃ
Randhir seems quite a chauvinist or its his over confidence speaking... I'm clueless... ๐Ÿ˜ณ
I liked the overall update... Waiting for more...๐Ÿ˜ƒ
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Posted: 10 years ago
#42

Originally posted by: asmaanixx


Of course! Mere bina tumhari stories adhoore jo hai ๐Ÿคฃ haan ek pagal hi dusre ka pagalpan samajh sakta hai ๐Ÿคฃ

Naam tu ne rakha aur tujhe bhi ni pata ๐Ÿคฃ meine nahi rakha ๐Ÿคฃ its a multi-fandom kinda story. sandhir are from sh the previous show i followed โค๏ธ

Dekhte hai tumhare pyaar namune kya rang charha the hai ๐Ÿคฃ

That is so true. Writing comedy is the hardest genre to write in. But don't worry, you'll do a great job. ๐Ÿ‘ thank you thats strong motivation. ๐Ÿ˜†

Oh ho, itni tareefein update ke liye ho ri hai kya? ๐Ÿคฃ ALWAYS ๐Ÿคฃ

And even I got too lazy to go to the 1st page. Jaisa hai acha hai ๐Ÿ˜†๐Ÿ˜› hum ek thali ke chatte batte hai ๐Ÿคฃ

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Posted: 10 years ago
#43

Originally posted by: naina927

Brilliant update ari... ๐Ÿ‘๐Ÿ‘ thank you so much :)

Mehbeer...!!! They were so cute... Dono sochte bhi same cheez hain ๐Ÿคฃ they are adorable โค๏ธ
Randhir seems quite a chauvinist or its his over confidence speaking... I'm clueless... ๐Ÿ˜ณ wo aisa hi hai. grade one mcp . but u'll warm up to him ๐Ÿ˜‰
I liked the overall update... Waiting for more...๐Ÿ˜ƒ

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Posted: 10 years ago
#44

This chapter was surprisingly easy and quick to write like it wrote itself ๐Ÿคฃ. Hope you guys enjoy reading as much as i enjoyed writing.

P.s hope you dont get confused with the future and present mehbeer. if so lemme know what to do? Do i add a color distinction or name them abeer 1 abeer 2 ๐Ÿคฃ


P.p.s sanyukta is sanyu...randhir is rd...i use short forms at times when their names felt too long ๐Ÿคฃ


CHAPTER 2


The four of them landed with a silent bang at the gate of the college meher and abeer studied in, the root of all evil, as they had stated. Colors were flying around everywhere, the faint smell of bhang and different sweets filled the air.The students couldnt be distinguished one from another, everyones faces were smudged with colors, It was the day of 'holi'.

Abeer covered his face with a hoodie while meher covered hers with a dupatta, sanyukta had warned them that no one should see them here while their past selfs were there because it could lead to unknown consequences.

Abeer pointed to randhir his past self and told him that no matter what rd shouldn't let his past self dunk the past meher in the water pool.

"Isi moment se mera shani shuru hua tha" abeer said dramatically making an animated expression.

"How dare you" meher shouted while sanyu made her calm down lest someone hears them. "Shuruwat tumne ki thi. You dumped me into the pool. I want that rectified now" She tried to strangle abeer from a distance but sanyu restrained her.

Just then an auto pulled over and a girl stepped out, shy timid, yet the smile on her face could put sun's shine to shame.

"Wo tum ho" both sandhir asked in union, with their jaws dropped, pointing towards the old meher.

"Is khunkhaar ladki ko dekhke aisa lagta nahi na ke ye kabhi aisi shaant si bhi ho sakti thi" abeer feigned shock.

"Kya karti mai bhi, is jaise namune ko jhelne ke liye mujhe bhi strong hona pada" meher acted like a typical abla nari, but no one bought it. Abeer smirked.

"Tum dono ka ho gaya ho to mai jake kuch karu" rd said exasperated these two were going to make this experiment very tough.

Stepping out of their hiding spot randhir walked into the college and went to old abeer, to distract him so that he doesn't spot meher. In a little while they were all playing holi.

Meher was going towards her hostel room when a guy who was clearly drunk on bhang or whatever it was caught hold of her hand. She tried to wriggle out of his hold but he was too strong.

"Bura na mano holi hai" he smirked as he was about to pull her towards him while meher resisted with all her might.

Even from their hiding spot abeer could see her cringe, she was on the verge of tears. He was almost about to go out of their hiding spot when meher caught hold of his hand and stopped him.

Sanyukta ran to mehers rescue, the guy was bending towards meher, giving her a sly smile and was about to put color on mehers cheek by rubbing his cheek on hers, when sanyu reached them. Removing mehers hand from the guys hand she pushed meher behind her.

"Pehle ladkiyo ki respect karna seekhlo, holi baad mei khelna" and she delivered a tight slap to his cheek which he had extended forward.

Suddenly everyone stopped playing holi and turned to the source of the sound. The guy was about to hit sanyukta when randhir and abeer reached them. Randhir immediately shielded sanyukta, catching the guys collar raised his hand to punch him.

Abeer instinctively stood before meher, shielding her, because the moment his eyes fell on meher who was slightly shivering, he just couldnt help feeling protective towards this helpless girl.

"Apni bhalai chahta hai to abhi yaha se chala ja" randhir said stressing every word and the guy scrambled away looking at the rage in randhirs eyes.

"I could have protected myself" sanyukta said with fake pride as he turned towards her, but internally feeling glad randhir came in the nick of time.

"Yeah right" randhir said sarcastically. "You cant do anything right without me farzi"

"Hey are you ok?" Abeer turned around and asked her, while maintaining a safe distance so as not to scare her further.

So much drama on the first day was too much for meher, this was not how she pictured her first day of college.

"Are you new? Mai tumhe tumhare hostel tak chod deta hun chalo." Concern was etched on his face, she looked so fragile in her scared state, he just wanted to do something to make her feel ok.

"Hmmm" was all she could muster up before silently following him just to be safe from more drunk guys.

Randhir and sanyukta were left alone to watch their retreating backs, they could see the chemistry of mehbeer from the word go, it was beyond them why these two wanted to forget each other and never fall in love. But since they needed these two for their experiment they kept quite and followed the instructions given to them.

Meher and abeer watched their past selves walk together towards the hostel stunned.

"Ye sab tumhare stupid idea ki wajah se hua. Atleast pool mei dunk karte toh we would be fighting, now you've made us friends" she pointed her finger at his chest and scolded him in irritated whispers.

"Agar tum bina koi problem create kiye hostel room tak nahi ja sakti to isme mujhe blame mat karo ok" he huffed mimicking her irritation. " Ek toh tumhe bachaya meine, aur tumhe hostel safely leke ja raha hun upar se taane suno, bhalai ka to sach mei zamana nahi raha"

"Itne bade nautanki ho na tum abeer" she exclaimed frustrated with his antics. "Now what?"

Randhir and sanyukta had reached them by now.

"Now we re-group. Tum logo ko koi hotel pata hai yaha nazdeek mei?. Lets rent a room and think of our next plan of action." Randhir spoke.

"Hotel kyun..we can stay in my house" Abeer offered.

"And what happens when the hostel wall breaks and everyone comes to live in the house? Or someone spots us there? " meher questioned him.

"Meher tum humesha se hi gumnaam types thi but everyone knows me, especially here. Someone is bound to recognise me in a hotel. I even have the keys to my house with me in my wallet. Baad ki baad mei sochenge"

"He is right. His house is the safest bet. We can do something about your past selves hostel situation later." randhir said after giving abeers words a thought.

"I think abeer has a point its safer" sanyukta cringed at agreeing with guys desperate times call for desperate measures she thought'

"Whatever" meher sighed at being outnumbered and followed them to abeers house.

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The house was a gift from abeers mom on his last birthday, before he was sent off to college so that he was comfortable. But abeer had always loved being around people and thus the house lay empty near the college campus, while abeer and nisaar stayed on campus in the hostel. He hadnt even bothered to appoint guards to the house.

Sneaking in so that no one noticed them, the four of them entered the house.

A smile immediately adorned both meher and abeers face as they remembered all the moments they had spent in this house together- happier times, simpler times.

"Cool place yaar" randhir patted abeers shoulder as abeer beamed with pride.

"It was a gift from my mom"

Randhirs face immediately fell and he retreated away from the group to a silent corner.

"Forgive him,he has mommy issues" Sanyu said trying to lighten the atmoshphere " she didn't treat him right" sanyukta defended randhir and went to him to console him leaving meher and abeer alone.

They went around the house in a daze setting the furniture right.

"My music room" abeer smiled as he stepped into his bedroom and looked at his music intruments.

"Kitne ghanto tak padhai karti thi mai yaha" meher exclaimed to her-self, going into her bedroom remembering her studious ways before abeer.

Neither of them dared to go to the terrace where they had spent many days and nights in each others bliss-full company after they had got together. It held special memories for them, memories which still had the power to break their facade of hatred.

Finally after an hour of walking down memory lane, and showing randhir and sanyukta around the house, they decided the girls would stay in one room while the guys would stay in another.

"Bohot bhuk lagi hai" sanyukta interrupted abeer who was telling them the details of how abeer, meher, nisaar, sasha and sneha had ended up living in this house. They were trying to decide how best to prevent that, since staying together in this house had led to the closeness between meher and abeer.

"These girls i tell you, so delicate" randhir rolled his eyes

"Hey time travel is hard on the stomach. Its not our fault that you guys have the macho-man syndrome." meher chipped in to sanyu's defence

Randhir decided it was futile to argue and got up the next moment, to go out and get some food.

"Get some groceries as well."

"And something to drink too"

"And some clean clothes too"

"Mujhe pizza khana hai"

He heard 10 more order from the three of them before he had even reached the hall. He turned around in a sudden movement, hitting his foot to the ground

"Jo launga chup chap kha lena, tumhara delivery boy nahi hun mai, neither am i ramu kaka, jo mujhe orders de rahe ho.!! " and he left leaving the trio speechless.

As soon as he banged the door shut they started laughing.

"Ye humesha se aisa tha ya recently kuch hua hai iske saath?" Meher asked in between giggles.

"Usko bachpan mei bohot baar gira diya tha, On his head. Poor chap it messed with his head. He thinks he is gods gift to mankind. " sanyukta joined meher in giggling.

Abeer sat silently and stared at the laughing meher, with a smile on his face, it was innocent moments like these when he failed to understand what went wrong with them and why.

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The guards of the laboratory of FITE were beaten unconscious. All papers and different spare parts of machines lay scrambled on the floor.

He then headed towards their rooms hiding his face so that no one recognises him. But he had no luck in either of their rooms.

Something strikes him.

"Of-course.! The Library.!" He rushes to the library with a evil smirk.

They think they are smarter than me. So obviously they would have hid it in the most unusual spot.

He opened the fattest book of the Spanish section only to have 10-20 sheets of papers with delicate designs and complicated calculations fall down.

"Aha. I have found you at last." He kissed the papers in glee. "Not long before i find you both as well randhir and sanyukta. I hope you are prepared. I am coming. "

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Abeer malhotra lay in his hostel bed with a smile adorned on his face remembering the new girls smile as he had dropped her off to her room in the hostel.

"Thank you" was all she had said but such a sweet voice she had that those two words kept ringing in his ears. She would make an amazing singer for his band. Vowing to find out her name the next day he went to sleep.

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Meher settled into her hostel room and unpacked her stuff and started studying not wanting to waste any time. All thoughts of the earlier incident forgotten.

But when she closed her eyes to fall asleep, the same incident kept recurring in her nightmares, the guy got closer and closer, and then suddenly there was him he was standing before her, almost shielding her from the bad guy's visions, he turned around, his chocolate brown eyes met her hazel orbs and she relaxed immediately feeling safe, she then fell asleep without any nightmare with a smile to her face.


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PART 3

Edited by --Ari-- - 10 years ago
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Posted: 10 years ago
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congratulations for finishing one ch ๐Ÿ˜†
i totally loved it. ๐Ÿคฃ
and no there's no confusion yet about past n present mehbeer ๐Ÿ‘

abeer got protective about meher...and both are dreaming about each other now...gai bhains paani mein ๐Ÿคฃ

and i loved that they have come to stay at abeer's house...saari memories yaad ki ...ab dono miss karenge ek doosre ko ๐Ÿ˜† tu brilliant hai ๐Ÿ˜› ๐Ÿ‘

sandhir playing cupid n spoiling their own game unintentionally ๐Ÿคฃ

ps - next ch chahiye mujhe! abhi abhi abhi ๐Ÿ˜ก ๐Ÿ˜†
Edited by war_is_peace - 10 years ago
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Posted: 10 years ago
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First of all really sorry for the delay. I almost forget I had to unres...
Secondly, it was a brilliant update... The turn the story is taking... Super se upar ๐Ÿ‘ how interesting is the concept of past mehbeer n present mehbeer together... A treat ๐Ÿ˜ƒ
Thirdly, I laughed through out the update. Abeer is the reason you know... His sense of humour n one liners... ๐Ÿ˜†
"Isi moment se mera shani shuru hua tha"
"Is khunkhaar ladki ko dekhke aisa lagta nahi na ke ye kabhi aisi shaant si bhi ho sakti thi"
Meher tum humesha se hi gumnaam types thi ๐Ÿคฃ
And then the unexpected, old abeer saves old meher. They became friends n soon they will end up falling in love... Yeyyy ๐Ÿ˜ƒ thank you sandhir...!!! ๐Ÿ˜ƒ
Randhir saved santyukta n how she reacted... We girls are just the same... ๐Ÿ˜† Bechara banda help karne aaye toh vella, chauvinist aur desperate... Help na kare toh fuddu aur darpok. What to do...?? ๐Ÿ˜ณ
Meher n sanyukta suddenly act like bffs... Im liking it... Girls meet n they chatter ๐Ÿ˜†
Now mehbeer living in the same house, history will repeat itself... I'm sure ๐Ÿ˜ƒ
Thank you for the update babe... Good work...!!! ๐Ÿ‘
Edited by naina927 - 10 years ago
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Originally posted by: war_is_peace

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congratulations for finishing one ch ๐Ÿ˜†
it is an achievement ๐Ÿคฃ

i totally loved it. ๐Ÿคฃ tere comments se hi to i know if i've done good or not ๐Ÿคฃ
and no there's no confusion yet about past n present mehbeer ๐Ÿ‘ thank god. numbering them would;ve been wierd ๐Ÿ˜†

abeer got protective about meher...and both are dreaming about each other now...gai bhains paani mein ๐Ÿคฃ abhi to bas shuruwat hai ๐Ÿ˜‰

and i loved that they have come to stay at abeer's house...saari memories yaad ki ...ab dono miss karenge ek doosre ko ๐Ÿ˜† tu brilliant hai ๐Ÿ˜› ๐Ÿ‘ aage aage dekho hota hai kya. and thank you for the hausla afzai ๐Ÿคฃ

sandhir playing cupid n spoiling their own game unintentionally ๐Ÿคฃ haan wo dono pagal hai ๐Ÿคฃ

ps - next ch chahiye mujhe! abhi abhi abhi ๐Ÿ˜ก ๐Ÿ˜†

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Posted: 10 years ago
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thank you so much. glad you liked it ๐Ÿ˜†
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Hawww I forgot to unres...
Will do it today...!!!
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Originally posted by: naina927

Hawww I forgot to unres...

Will do it today...!!!


better late than never ๐Ÿคฃ

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