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Posted: 10 years ago
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[Abeer POV]


You are everything I wanted
The scars, all I'll ever know


You always were, are, and will be everything that I would ever want, no matter how much I try to convince myself that you're not. But those deep, scathing scars that you gave me all those years ago stop me from running back into your arms.


If I told you you were right
Would you take my hand tonight?
If I told you reasons why
Would you leave your life and ride?
And ride


Now, after all this time, if I keep aside my ego and accept my mistakes. Will you take my hand and pull me out of this darkness one more time? If I tell you the reason I left you... will you believe me? Will you leave this lying life behind and come with me?


You saw all my pieces broken
This darkness that I could never show


You saw me at my worst and still didn't walk away. No, my darkness wasn't the reason you pushed my arms away from your warmth. But, if not that... then what was the reason? I want to know. I need to know. I want to kiss away all those wounds in your heart and heal them. But you're just not letting me. And it kills me when you push me away.


If I told you you were right
Would you take my hand tonight?
If I told you reasons why
Would you leave your life and ride?
And ride


...


Please do not copy this write-up.

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Posted: 10 years ago
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great job.. love it! 👍🏼❤️
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This is so beautiful I loved it so nice 😳
Very nice song very well written 😃

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Posted: 10 years ago
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Very finely written. How you express feelings of Abeer are very perfect.
Keep it on!

Anjali 😊
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Comment edited on page one :)
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Great start! Can't wait for more!
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This was really beautiful !
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Couldn't have been more perfect.
Abeer expressing himself thru music.
Great going 👏
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I just love the way you write
All your stories are great

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