Pavitra Rishta Written Update 1st September 2014

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Pavitra Rishta Written Update 1st September 2014


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At a park

Vaishnavi is swinging at a park. Kinnari is there watching her. Kinnari leaves, Vaishnavi calls for her to let her come with her but Kinnnari ignores her and leaves. Vaishnavi says to her doll, mommy where are you? A man comes over to her and says what happened dear, why are you crying? Vaishnavi says I came here with my friend but my Aunty left me here, how will I go home? The man says don't cry, so what if your Aunty is not here? I will take you to your home. Don't cry, you want ice cream? I'll feed you ice cream, come. The man picks her up and says don't cry, have ice cream. Your family will come to get you. Do they know you're here? The man gets ice cream for Vaishnavi. Vaishnavi is sitting down eating ice cream, the man steps aside and calls someone named Ramesh. He tells Ramesh to come to the garden and says I have found a victim.

Deshmukh House in the bedroom

Kinnari's mom is in the bedroom, she has her face covered. Kinnari comes there and says mom! Mom what are you doing? Kinnari's mom tells her that this is a massage relaxer, it was for 100 rupees, I got it cheap. Kinnari says mom you're always after money, what will you do by saving so much money? Kinnari's mom tells her to stop worrying about money and tell me did you do the work that I told you to or not? Kinnari says yes mom, successfully done. Now Vaishnavi is probably alone in the garden swinging. Kinnari's mom says and the rest of the kids? Kinnari says the rest of the kids were with me, I brought them home. Kinnari's mom says no one asked where Vaishnavi was? Kinnari says no mom, not yet. These silly people are probably thinking that she's playing nearby. And yes I saw Naren outside the garden but thank God he didn't ask me anything. Now Vaishnavi is tired after swinging. Kinnari's mom says yes but Vaishnavi not being at home won't stay hidden from the family for long. And what if the whole family starts looking for her and bring her back here? Kinnari says no mom this won't happen, do you think Vaishnavi is still in the garden? She herself will probably look for us and leave the garden and in a city like Bombay people get lost. Manav comes there and says who got lost? Kinnari and her mom stand up, Sonu comes there and says ajoba Vaishnavi came with us to the park but she is back in the garden.

Deshmukh House in the bedroom

Manav says Kinnari you took the kids out, where is Vaishnu? Kinnari's mom says Manav ji Kinnari was just telling me this that Vaishnavi got lost in the garden by mistake, I don't know where Vaishnavi went. Kinnari's mom says Manav ji please try to find out quickly where she is. Kinnari's mom says about Kinnari that she can't even take care of her responsibilities. Manav says which garden did you take her to? Kinnari says Public Garden. Manav immediately leaves from there, Teju comes and says baba where are you going in such a rush? Mansi comes there, Teju asks Sonu what happened? Sonu says Vaishnavi went missing in the garden, ajoba went to look for her.

At the garden/park

Vaishnavi is at the park, the man is still there. He takes out another ice cream from the cooler and asks Vaishnavi if she will have another ice cream. Look it's vanilla ice cream. Vaishnavi says I don't want it, you said my Aunty would come to get me. Why is she not here? The man says so what if she didn't come, I'm here and I will take you to your home. Vaishnavi says do you know where my house is? The man says I don't know but this is the city of Mumbai, it's very easy to find out where places are. Another man(probably Ramesh) comes there and asks Vaishnavi if they should go. Vaishnavi says no I don't want to come, I'll wait here. Ramesh asks if she wants to listen to anything here and says the park will close in a little bit and if you're here for some more time then the police will take you, come with us or else they will take you. The 1st man says to Ramesh, what are you saying, the girl will get scared. The 1st man takes Ramesh aside and says to him quietly, what are you doing? This girl is alone, she is afraid. If you make any noise then our plan will be ruined, you wait here and I will take care of it. The 1st man goes back to Vaishnavi and says dear, that uncle is a little angry so don't pay attention to him. I'm with you, you come with me. Should we go? The man picks Vaishnavi up, the man, Ramesh and Vaishnavi leave the park.

At the park

Manav and Shashank come to the park. There is a security guard over there laying down on his table sleeping, Manav goes to him and says Bhai Saab! The guard wakes up, Shashank asks the security guard if he saw any girl there. The security guard says no there is no child here, and the garden is closed. Manav says how can this be? The little girl came in the garden, you saw her. Try to remember! The security guard says all of the kids left an hour or 2 ago. Manav says how would you know? You were sitting here snoring! The security guard says no saab I was sitting here and by sitting here I fell asleep. Manav says we won't find out this way. Shashank let's go to the police station. The security guard says no saab don't go to the police. If I lose my job I'll come out on the road. Manav says so tell me where is the little girl, did you see her here? The guard says which girl saab? Do you have a photo with you? Manav says we don't have a photo, I'll tell you how the girl looks. Manav says she's a little girl, 10 years old. She was wearing a blue and black color combination dress. Shashank also describes her, Manav adds she had a doll in her hand. The security guard says yes saab there was a girl sitting there having ice cream.

At the park

Manav says so where is she?! We're talking about her, where is she?! The security guard says she was at the park for a while, I went to get paan and then when I came back, she had left. Shashank gets angry at the guard, the guard requests him not to scold him and he did not do this deliberately. Manav says look we will have to go to the police and says don't worry, you won't be in trouble but in the future focus on you duty. You should not leave a little girl like this, I don't where Vaishnu could be.

Deshmukh House

Teju, Mansi, Kinnari, her mom and the 3 girls are at their house. Mansi is scolding the 3 kids asking them how could they be so careless. Teju says they are kids, Kinnari you are older and responsible. When you took the kids back how could you leave Vaishnavi there?! Kinnari says I'm really sorry, actually Vaishnavi and I aren't that close and I forgot that I brought her. And also I did not leave her there deliberately, I don't have any rivalry with her. Teju says you also don't treat her as family either, that's why you left her there! When you took her you have the responsibility to bring her back Kinnari, what's wrong with you?! Kinnari's mom says it was by mistake, why are you taking so much tension? Manav ji went to look for her, we'll find her. She must be sitting in the garden. Mansi says and what if we don't find her?! Then what will we say to tai, that we couldn't take care of a child?! Teju says exactly! She just came to Mumbai and she knows nothing about here, the way around here, where home is. She knows nothing and we don't even have her number, even if she wants to come home she can't! All because of you. Teju's phone rings, she picks up her phone. It is Manav, Teju says hello baba did you find Vaishnu? Teju hangs up, Mansi says what happened Atia? Was she found? Teju says Mansi they investigated the whole park but she was nowhere to be found, they went to the police station to write a report. Mansi says Atia I just hope Vaishnu is found.

Deshmukh House

Kinnari says it's my mistake, I should not have taken them. Teju says what's the use? Now go and look for her! Naren comes there, he says to Ashi, hello baby! Ashi runs to Naren, Naren picks her up. Ashi says dada you won't leave by myself will you? Naren kisses her and says no why do you say that? Teju says she is asking because you dropped off all the kids right? Naren says yes why? Teju says so where is Vaishnavi? Where did you leave her, at the park? Naren says I didn't even know Vaishnavi was with the kids. Kinnari says actually sorry I forgot to tell you Vaishnavi was not with us, actually I was having such a headache that it got out of my mind, I'm really sorry. Naren says one minute, why are you worried? Where is Vaishnavi? Mansi says ajoba is gone to look for her because she was nowhere to be found, not even in the garden. He went to file a complaint that she's missing. Naren says what? You should have told me that Vaishnavi came. Don't worry I will go with ajoba and look for her ok? Don't worry. Mansi says why are you so worried, you never leave a chance to hurt tai. Naren says Mansi please, this is not the time to argue. Don't worry I will look for Vaishnavi. Kids are playing in the park, Ashi stay inside. Naren leaves. Mansi says Atia will Vaishnu be found? Did anything happen to her? Teju says don't worry Mansi, Bappa is there and will fix everything. Teju thinks to herself, Mansi I made you understand but just like you I am also afraid. An innocent little girl in a big city, where could she be?

At the police station

Manav and Shashank are at the police station. Manav asks Shashank if Mansi sent a photo. Shashank says yes one minute. Shashank gets out a photo of Vaishnavi and shows it to the police. Manav says Inspector here is my granddaughter Vaishnavi. The police inspector says that is the girl, ok send me her picture to my mobile so I can tell my team to get it printed and I will send this photo to all of the police stations in Mumbai so that it's easy to find the girl. Manav says Inspector she's a little girl, will my granddaughter be found? The police inspector says don't worry, you'll find your child. The police inspector tells one of his workers to get Vaishnavi's photo printed.

Outside

Naren is outside. He thinks to himself, it might have been unintentional but I know made a really big mistake, Ankita loves her daughter Vaishnavi a lot and if anything happens to her I won't forgive myself. I need to do anything to find her. Where could she be? Naren looks worried. There is an old man nearby who is yelling, save me! I want to go home, save me! Naren says Bhai saab why are you yelling to be saved? What happened? The man says I'm not saying that, the kid is saying to save me. Naren goes to the man and says who is saying that? The old man says they kidnap children. Naren says who kidnapped? The man says crazy people do that, will a mature man like me do this? Naren says where do they kidnap them? The man says I won't tell you. Naren says please tell me. The man says why should I tell you? Naren says you were saying for the children to be saved, I will save them. Where do they take them? The man says will you save them for sure? Naren says yes for sure. The man shows Naren a mill in the distance and tells him to go and save the kids.

At the police station

Manav and Shashank are at the police station. Manav asks the inspector if he found out anything. Manav gets a phone call from Naren. Manav says Naren is calling. Manav picks up and says hello, yes Naren. Naren says hello ajoba, I just now found out about Vaishnavi. Manav says you found out? What did you find out, where is she? Naren says he doesn't have time to talk but he will message Manav. Manav says ok send me the message, Manav hangs up. Manav says Inspector, Naren my son in law was looking for Vaishnu, he has found out about Vaishnu. Please come with us. The police inspector says where? Manav says he will message me. The police inspector says ok let's go.

Deshmukh House in the bedroom

Kinnari and her mom are in the bedroom. Kinnari's mom is packing her clothes, Kinnari says I've never seen a mother so scared like you, your daughter is in a problem and you're leaving her? Kinnari's mom says I will get in trouble, did you not hear Teju calling Manav ji and saying Vaishnavi is found? If anyone finds out that I am the mastermind of the plan then I will be in big trouble and they will throw me out of here. They might even report me to the police. Kinnari says will they throw you out? And me, will they worship me? Mom. Kinnari's mom says why are you afraid? They won't do anything to you, you are the daughter in law of the Karmarkar family, understand? And if they do anything what will they do at the most? They will just lecture you or slap you. You were also a part of this plan. Kinnari says mom slap? No my face will get ruined, I won't let this happen. Mom do something. Kinnari's mom says I don't know, she takes her suitcase and leaves. Kinnari thinks to herself, Bappa please help me, Vaishnavi should not be found out and if she's found out then I should not be exposed, please take care of that Bappa, please.

Deshmukh House

Kinnari's mom is in the house. She is walking quietly, Teju is asleep. She wakes up, she asks Kinnari's mom where are you going? Kinnari's mom stops and says I'm going to Nagpur. Teju says so late at night? Why do you need to go right now? You go in the morning. Kinnari's mom thinks to herself, if I stay here until tomorrow I will be caught. Teju asks if she said anything. Kinnari's mom says no actually Kinnari's papa got very ill so I have to go urgently, keep informing be about Vaishnavi. I'm very worried about her, Kinnari is so guilty she can't face anyone. Teju I know you guys have a very big heart, please forgive my daughter. Teju says it's ok Aunty, mistakes happen, what can we do? Is Kinnari's papa really ill? By looking at you, you look really tense, like you did a crime and you were caught. Kinnari's mom thinks to herself, what if I get caught right here? Kinnari says no, no Tejaswini dear it's nothing like that, he is very ill so I'm tensed. Teju says oh. Kinnari's mom says ok I'm going. Teju says ok. Kinnari's mom leaves. Teju thinks to herself, her behavior sounds odd, I have a doubt that.

Inside a hut

Naren goes inside the hut where there are many goons. The goons are sitting down, when they see Naren they stand up and demand to know who he is. They hold guns up. Naren says I'm here to get a child. The goon says ok but you're not a police? Naren says if I was a police inspector I would not come with my whole team. Now tell me. The gunda tells one of his men to get the kids. The kids come, Naren asks for the handicapped kids. The gunda tells the other gunda to get today's batch of kids. They come, Vaishnavi is included. She sees Naren and says uncle, you? The 2 gundas immediately hold up their guns and aim at Naren. Naren holds up his hands and throws the gun down, Naren starts fighting with the gundas. The gundas and Naren are hitting each other hard, the police inspectors come there and yell to stop! They get to the goons, Manav and Shashank come there too. The police inspectors arrest the goons, rest of the kids are saved. Naren picks up Vaishnavi. Manav says let's go.

Deshmukh House

Ankita, Vaishnavi, Teju, Manav and Naren are in the main room. Ankita asks Vaishnavi if she's ok and if she got hurt. Vaishnavi says I'm fine choti ma. Ankita says does anyone go like that without informing? Did those goons do anything bad to you? Tell me did anyone say anything to you? Please tell me, you know everyone here was so worried. Vaishnavi says I was also afraid but Naren uncle saved me. Manav says yes Ankita those gundas could have done anything but still Naren went there, he put his life at risk to save Vaishnu. Manav strokes Vaishnavi and leaves. Teju leaves the room. Naren says I will also head out. Ankita says Naren sir, thank you. The favor you did for me. Naren says there's no need to say thank you, this was my duty. I know I have done very wrong to you, if I could do anything for you I would feel good, see you. Naren leaves. Vaishnavi says choti ma I miss papa a lot, let's go to him. Ankita says Vaishnavi we can't meet papa right now, he's very ill. Once he's better we'll go to meet him, ok? Vaishnavi says when will he get better? Ankita says very soon, ok? Vaishnavi says ok. Naren has heard this and he thinks to himself, I'm sorry Ankita, I know I have done very wrong with you, I don't know if I'll ever be able to make up for this or not. I hope everything's ok soon.

Precap: Ankita and Rushali are in the room. Ankita tells Rushali that Ashi has a very high fever. Rushali says I know that's why I'm calling. I called Naren and he didn't pick up the phone. Ankita picks up Ashi, Rushali tells Ankita to stop it. Ankita says don't worry I'll take her to the doctor. Rushali says you can't take her! Ankita says I will take her! And no one can stop me! Rushali looks shocked.


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