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Posted: 11 years ago
#61
part - 4
rithvik realising his feelings
a week passed. and they remain as they were

and one day rithvik had to go for a concert in south africa.
he had a late night flight.
(earlier that day)

PR shoot
break time

asha: to aj ka kya plan hai?
rithvik: wat plan
asha: arey south africa jana h na tujhe
rd: haan aaj raat ki flight hai.
asha: oh kitne bje
rd: 12.45 a.m
asha: ok mai aa jaungi terko see off karne
rd: (in a loud voice): pagal ho gyi h kya. itni raat ko akele kaise aaegi. main chala jaunga bacha nhi hu'
asha(little upset): kyu kyu nhi aa sakti main tjhe bie bolne. main bhi bachi nhi hu aa jaungi aur chali bh jaumgi safely pakka promise
rd: nhi yaar itni raat ko akele nhi. manaa kar dabangg na ban
asha: pleeese
rd: tu itni hyper kyu ho rhi h. shoot se nikalne par bie bol dio. its one and the same thing.
asha: haa ye baat bhi sahi h. acha sun jab airport pe ek baar phone kar dena and kal south africa pahunch ke bhi kar dena

rithvik was surprised seeing her sudden caring nature for him...

rd: ruk ruk tujhe kya ho rha h.. itni chinta wo bhi mere lie
asha: haan... nhi.. wo aise hi. matlab.. tu friend hai mera... to

rd: acha acha theek hai relax.. kar dunga call
asha: kitne dino ka trip hai tera
rithvik: 3 din ka
asha: okk


after pr shoot
rithvik dropped asha to her pg
asha: chal bie
rd: haan bie 3 din baad milte hai.
asha:' yaa ok..

she didnt show it to rithvik bt she was upset..
in her pg

kanika: look asha, what i got for you. your favourite momos
asha: momo... she remembers how rithvik calls her momo
asha(to herself): rithvik kaise tease krta h mjhe is naam se.. are yaar fir rithvik abi to milke ayi hu usse. fir ghoom fir ke wohi yaad aa jata h.
kanika: hello madam kis soch me ho aap. mene to socha tha aate hi toot padogi inpe..
asha: nhi yaar tu hi kha mera man nhi h. (she was so upset that even her favourite momos didnt excite her)
kanika(full shocked): wait wait wait. kya kaha tune please say it again
asha: nhi khaane yaar itna issue kyu bnaa rhi h
kanika: (looking at her sad face) kya kuch hua hai kya
asha: nhi hona kya hai kuch bhi to nhi hua
kanika: mujhe pta h. tu fir rithvik se lad ke aayi h na
asha: wait. usse kyu ladungi main. aur agar ladai bhi ki to isse mere momos na khane ka kya connection.
kanika: connection to hai beta
asha: what. just shut up
kanika: bta na kya hua. rd se jhagda hna
asha: fir wohi baat. me usse jhagda kyu karungi veaise bhi aaj wo south africa jaa rha h wo bhi pure 3 din ke lie..(stressing on 3)

now kanika understood what her problem was

kanika: oh to yeh baat hai. koi jaa rha hai aur kisi ko bura lag rha h
asha: tu na..
kanika: acha acha.. me to saare momos kha rhi hu tujhe khana h to kha varna so ja
asha: haa main so rhi hu
kanika: ok bie good night
asha: good night

asha was remebering today's talk with rithvik. she looked at the time. it was 11.45 pm.(abhi tak to use airport pahunch jana chaie tha. pahuncha kyu nhi aur agar pahunch gya to uska phone q nhi ayaa)
suddenly her phone rang it was rd
rd: hey
asha: pahunch gya tu airport.
rd: haa pahunch gya. chal ab mujhe cell switch off karna hai me baad me baat krta hu
before asha could say anythng rithvik cut the phone. although she did not want such short conversation bt she could not do anythng. so she just kept aside her phone and slept.

next day (rithvik in south africa)

he called asha. bt she didnt pick the phone as she was sleeping. rd: so rhi hogi kumbhkaran. baad me cal krunga.
after that he went to the hotel. got freshen up and went for rehearsals for the concert

(asha's pg: 7.45 am)
she got up and immediately checked her phone)
1 missed cal it read
asha: rithvik ka hoga. i guess pahunch gya hoga south africa. damn! main bhi na itni late kyu uthti hu. ek ghanta pehle uth jati atleast usse baat to ho jaati. koi baat nhi abhi cal kar leti hu
she tried bt he didnt pick up.
asha: hadd hai. ab wo phone ni pick kar raaha. uggh
kanika who was listening to all this, smiled
kanika: kya hua asha
asha: umm... aah.. kuch nhi.. tu kab uthi
kanika: tab jab tu iss bat ko leke gussa ho rhi thi ki tune rithvik ka phone pick up ni kia(she said teasingly)
asha: ummm wo...(she couldnt say anythng)
kanika: ab bol de aisa kuch nhi hai. but baby ab seriously bol rhi hu zara soch tu itni hyper kyu hoti hai jab uski call miss kar deti hai, ya tera mood kyu kharab ho jaata hai jab wo aas paas nhi hota.
asha: (irritatingly) ahh kya bakwaas kar rhi h aisa kuch nhi h. me ready ho rhi hu mujhe shoot pe jaana h. bie

at pr shoot
aaj asha aapka bohot lamba scene hai. so islie apko kam break milega.
asha: chalo acha hai. ni to break me bore hoti aaj main.

meanwhile rithvik was done wid the rehearsels. so he checked his phone and called asha. bt she didnt pick up.
he tried after every hour. bt she was busy in the shoot. (in evening)
rithvik(frustated): acha beta ab main chala kya gya bhool gyi mujhe. ise to main btata hu.
kya karu kya kru. haan shruti ko call karta hu usse puchta hu kaha busy hai ye.
he called shruti
rithvik: hy shruti..
shruti: hy rithvik. pahunch gye tum south africa
rd: haa bas pahunch gya. tum btao kaha ho. pr ki shoot par kya ho raha h
shruti: ummm actually aj mai shoot pe ni gyi
rd: oh ok bie.

shruti was confused. shruti: ye chahta kya hai. call kyu tha isne mujhe.
then he called ankit hoping that he was on the shoot.. bt he got the same response from ankit too.

rithvik: kahi aaj pr shoot ki off to nhi. to sach me kahi ghoom rahi h aur mjhe ignore kar rhi. bt wo aisa kyu karegi. umm director ko phone krta hu. bt unse kahunga kya. acha chal keh dunga ki kaisa chal raha h etc etc. he tried.. bt that day everyone ws bz in shooting as an important sequence in pr was to be shot.

rithvik almost tried each and every person of pr crew. bt nobody responded..
rithvik: yaar yeh ho kya raha h. sab kaha chale gye..ab to tension ho rhi h.
spot dada ko try karta hu. ab bus yhi reh gye. pls spot dada phine utha lena
he tried an finally he spot boy picked up
rd: haa dada kya hua sab theek to hai?
spot boy: haa sir. sab theek hai aap itna hyper kyu ho rahe hai.
rd: to fir sab kaha hai. koi mera phone kyu ni utha raha.
spot boy: sab yahi hai. aur apka phone kisne ni uthaya
rithvik: asha ne
spot boy: asha madam to subah se shoot kar rhi h. unhe to 5 min ka bhi break nhi mila
rd: acha wo subah se shoot kar rhi h. aur mene socha(he smiled)
spot boy: kya socha
rd: umm kuch nhi. thank you.

so he was finally relaxed aftr knowng ki asha was busy and not ignoring him
he smiled "main bhi na kuch bhi soch leta hu". but ek baar baat ho jaati to acha hota.

he was alone in the room and was thinking about her. al the time they spent together. masti, fights. how they unknowingly cared towards each other. he found a magazine in front of him. he just randomly scrolled it.
at one page it was written "MISSING SOMEONE TOO MUCH, YOU ARE DEFINITELY IN LOVE"

he constantly looked at those words..
kya main negi se...
nahi aisa nhi ho sakta
but fir itna miss kyu kar rha hu.
raat ko neend bhi nhi aati uske bare me sochta rehta hu.
aur saath me hoti hai to aur kisi cheez ki tension nhi rehti.
kya sahi me us momo se pyaar ho gya.

he was thinking about this.
suddenly asha appeared in front of him.
asha: kya hua rithvik
rd: kuch...nhi... tum yaha.. matlab kaise
asha: tmhari confusion door karne ayi hu
rd: confusion...
asha: mujhe bhi yahi lagta h
rd: kya lagta h
asha: ki... tumhe ... mujhse pyaar ho gya...
rd: ni matlab.. he lloked down and again looked up.. she wasnt there
rd: asha.. tum... shit i was dreaming...
dreaming of her?
am i seriously in love with her?

oh damn! yesss i love her


so how was it guyz.. sry for the super late update.. do hit the like button and do comment.. thank you!





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Posted: 11 years ago
#62
Thank god finally you updated I though you forgot about this.
Super duper and mind blowing update. Finally rithvik realized about her lovefor asha hope soon ash a will realize 😊 .
And OMG asha didn't eat momos because she is missing RD 😲 😆 truly unbelievable.
Please update soon.
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Posted: 11 years ago
#63
Yayyy!!!!!! U updated... 🥳

Well dear it was a lovely and beautiful update dear... 😊 Well done dear... This ff is getting betterand better wid each update...N d best part is u r also trying to include d real happenings which Ashvik have mentioned like hw nd when they fall in love etc 👍🏼 👏

Cuming to d update...Ahhh such a cute scene btw Ashvik Asha requesting Rithvik dat she also want to cum to see off Rd at airport...Bt Rd as always being caring nd protective towards her n not giving into her request. He tried to make her understand dat it vl get late n then Ashu saying dat he had to call her aftr reaching airport n then South Africa...They care fr each other so much...Awww 😳
OMG wat im reading... Ashu refused Momos 😲 All she cud remember was Rithvik n hw he used to call her 'Dehradun Ki Momo' 😳 Hehehe...even her roomie Kanika gets shocked at it n hw she easily get it dat Asha was upset bcoz RD was leaving to SA fr 3days 😆
Haayye...My Ashu cant sleep...All she cud do was luking at her mobile n waiting fr RD call. N she got so happy wen RD called her n then again get upset bcoz they cudnt have long convo...Aww Then getting angry bcoz she was sleeping wen Rd called frm SA...
On the other hand Rd thinking Ashu is ignoring him n having fun in India widout him...U mistook ur Ashu Rd 😉 😉 N he getting restless n call everyone on d sets to knw abt Asha...bt alas everyone got confused 😆 Bt getting relieved wen Spot dada said Ashu is busy shooting..So sweet 😳
N d realization of luv was so simple yet beautiful. Asha herself came to make Rd realize his luv fr her ❤️ Lovely it was 😳

Do continue soon dear...Waiting fr Asha's realization of luv fr Rd...Thanx fr d pm 😊
Edited by similuvashvik - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
#64
OMG!!!
So cute!!!
Both r missing each oder!!! Awww!!!
N rd tried calling her n wen she didnt pick up...he tried every1!!!
Den spot dada comes to his rescue!! 😃
Asha ko break nahi mila ye jaan k janab k mann mein laddu phoot rahe hai!! 😆
Asha ne momos ko reject kiya!!! OMG!!!! 😲

U write v well!!!
Continue soon!!! 😃
jasminerahul thumbnail
Posted: 11 years ago
#65
Ritvik in Africa.they r missing each other.ritvik being estless n dreaming of asha.sweet.he is in luv
Dreamer3003 thumbnail
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Posted: 11 years ago
#66
wowww awesomeee part👏
both missing each other and rithvik realising his love😉
loved ittt😊
continue soon⭐️
divya11bhatia thumbnail
Posted: 11 years ago
#67

Originally posted by: similuvashvik

Yayyy!!!!!! U updated... 🥳

Well dear it was a lovely and beautiful update dear... 😊 Well done dear... This ff is getting betterand better wid each update...N d best part is u r also trying to include d real happenings which Ashvik have mentioned like hw nd when they fall in love etc 👍🏼 👏

Cuming to d update...Ahhh such a cute scene btw Ashvik Asha requesting Rithvik dat she also want to cum to see off Rd at airport...Bt Rd as always being caring nd protective towards her n not giving into her request. He tried to make her understand dat it vl get late n then Ashu saying dat he had to call her aftr reaching airport n then South Africa...They care fr each other so much...Awww 😳
OMG wat im reading... Ashu refused Momos 😲 All she cud remember was Rithvik n hw he used to call her 'Dehradun Ki Momo' 😳 Hehehe...even her roomie Kanika gets shocked at it n hw she easily get it dat Asha was upset bcoz RD was leaving to SA fr 3days 😆
Haayye...My Ashu cant sleep...All she cud do was luking at her mobile n waiting fr RD call. N she got so happy wen RD called her n then again get upset bcoz they cudnt have long convo...Aww Then getting angry bcoz she was sleeping wen Rd called frm SA...
On the other hand Rd thinking Ashu is ignoring him n having fun in India widout him...U mistook ur Ashu Rd 😉 😉 N he getting restless n call everyone on d sets to knw abt Asha...bt alas everyone got confused 😆 Bt getting relieved wen Spot dada said Ashu is busy shooting..So sweet 😳
N d realization of luv was so simple yet beautiful. Asha herself came to make Rd realize his luv fr her ❤️ Lovely it was 😳

Do continue soon dear...Waiting fr Asha's realization of luv fr Rd...Thanx fr d pm 😊



Thank u sooo much dear for such awesome comments. They really inspire me to writw more.. thanks fr loving itt so much..
divya11bhatia thumbnail
Posted: 11 years ago
#68

Originally posted by: kreya204

OMG!!!
So cute!!!
Both r missing each oder!!! Awww!!!
N rd tried calling her n wen she didnt pick up...he tried every1!!!
Den spot dada comes to his rescue!! 😃
Asha ko break nahi mila ye jaan k janab k mann mein laddu phoot rahe hai!! 😆
Asha ne momos ko reject kiya!!! OMG!!!! 😲

U write v well!!!
Continue soon!!! 😃



Thanks a lott dearie.. i am glad u are likng it
divya11bhatia thumbnail
Posted: 11 years ago
#69
Thanks a lot everyone..at one pt of time i seriously thought of discontinuing this ss.. bt then all ur comments inspired me to writr furthur.. and nw i guess next part will be the last one. Then this ss will get ovr. This was my frst evrr writng. So i thank al of you who took out their precious time nd read the ss.. thnk u all u guys are the best
divya11bhatia thumbnail
Posted: 11 years ago
#70

Originally posted by: aishu3003

wowww awesomeee part👏

both missing each other and rithvik realising his love😉
loved ittt😊
continue soon⭐️



Thanks fr ur precious comments :)

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