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sunidhi

@MadloverofRD

Voyager

Posted: 11 years ago

#111

Originally posted by: PrincessAshVik
Interesting:):) Very interesting:)
I somewhat knew Purvi will refuse to feed Pia.
And I have a feeling that this, I mean Purvi neglecting Pia may create a rift between Arjun and Purvi...
Let's see what you have planned:):)
Thanks for the PM:):)

Thank you so much Sara. I am glad you liked it 😊 😊

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sunidhi

@MadloverofRD

Voyager

Posted: 11 years ago

#112

CHAPTER-5

Hello guys hope you all are doing well.

Time passed by and purvi tried to become good mother for pia and give her the love which she requiers.but at the same time the love of arjun and purvi grew more stronger as arjun knew purvi is not wrong she tries everything to forgot past and accept pia and whenever she become weak doing so arjun handle her. as time dont wait for anyone so time passed and it has been 4 years after pia entered in their family.

Everything is same except few things. pari and pia are best friends and can do anything for each other. but pari has a small baby name buzer he is a dog and pari loves him as her child but pia fears from him. as purvi tries giving mother love to pia but sometimes she cant and this lead to make pia sad and think that her mother dont love her. but pari as also she dont know anythig then also tries everything to make purvi and pia closer.

AFTER 4 YEARS

Early Morning

Both arjun and purvi are sleeping. after sometime purvi wakes up and see that her husband is peacefully with a smile on his face. she stares at him lovingly and kiss his forhead and moves to washroom for freshn up. after that she moves outside and as always dk is sitting on dining table reading newspaper so she moves towards dk and bends down to take his blessings.

P:good morning papa

DK:good morning beta

Then they moves towards the temple of their house. purvi does aarti. then purvi goes to kitchen where breakfast is ready by servant. she serves dk breakfast and then he leaves for office.Then she moves towards pari room to wake her up so that she can go to school

IN PARI AND PIA ROOM

Purvi enters inside and see her two daughters sleeping peacefully on their seperate beds. she moves towards pari and start waking her up by careesing her hair.

P:pari doll wake up you have to go to school.

P:good morning mamma

saying this she kissed purvi cheek and purvi also kissed back.purvi then takes pari into her hands and takes her to bathroom.

After sometime pari comes out running and jump on the bed, covered with towel and she is shivering due to cold and purvi comes after her. on the other side arjun wakes up and he knows where purvi is so started moving towards the room.

P:mumma fast

purvi takes pari clothes from her cupbourd and started moving towards her but then arjun comes inside.pari is shocked to see arjun there.

P:papa why do you come inside you dont have manners to knock first and then come inside a girl room look i am changing go outside go fast.

both arjun and purvi are shocked to listen these words from pari. but purvi has a naughty smile on her face she go closer to pari and removes her towel and then both arjun and purvi start laughing. pari is again shocked and she started crying.

P:mumma you cheated i will not talk to you now.

A(smiling and comes closer to pari):baby look who i am your papa na then why are you behaving like this you are so small and i have to knock before i enter my angels room no na then

P:sorry papa i will not do this again but mumma cheated me na then.

saying this she again started making faces and after that all three started laughing and hug each other. but by laughing sound pia wakes up. but then only buzer enter inside and sites near pia bed and pia started crying seeing him. listening pia crying they break the hug and see buzer sitting near pia bed. purvi cant able to see pia cry so she goes to pia and hugs her tightly and moves her hand at pia back to calm her and started saying go buzer from here look she is crying go. buzer moves from there sadly and goes near pari she hugs him and he again becames happy. as buzer moved pia get calm. but by seeing this arjun became very happy. suddenly purvi realizes what she is doing and moves towards pari and make her wear clothes and then take her to her room to do other things of her dressing. then again pia became sad but seeing arjun she became happy and hugs arjun.

Then arjun thinks purvi you love her so much that you cant see her crying but i dont know why you fears to show that love to her. but i know one day this only hindrance between you two will also break.

On the other side pari is also happy for pia. now she has two works to do making pia and purvi come closer and take out buzer fear from pia.

sorry for the grammatical mistakes.

And guess guys how will pari complete her two missions.

Please like it and give me your feedbacks to encourage me.Please

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RadhikaMishra

@RadhikaMishra

Explorer

Posted: 11 years ago

#113

Yippeee!!!!! m first! loved ur concept and ur writing too.. keep it up. thnx for d pm..😊

Love,

Radhika😊

Edited by RadhikaMishra - 11 years ago

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sunidhi

@MadloverofRD

Voyager

Posted: 11 years ago

#114

Originally posted by: RadhikaMishra
Yippeee!!!!! m first! loved ur concept and ur writing too.. keep it up. thnx for d pm..😊


Love,
Radhika😊

Thank you so much radhika 😊 😊

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khushichopra

@khushichopra

Beginner

Posted: 11 years ago

#115

Awesome update Go ahead dear...
Waiting for next update
and also we want more arjun and purvi scenes plzzz

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978187

Hibernated

Posted: 11 years ago

#116

oh no i missed the first position 😭.

sunidhi very nice update dear . you know instead of that idiotic 20 years leap , fekta should have taken a small leap of 4-5 years and could have shown arvi being parents of two kids and playing around with them but fekta 😡

anyways coming to the update , i liked the way you showed that how arjun understands purvi's feelings without speaking 😳, loved how pari was scolding her dad 😆 , aaww.. poor buzzer got a good scolding from purvi for coming near pia . i am sure pari will surely do something so that purvi blurts out her love for pia 😉 she is a smart arvi kid.

i even loved how purvi was protective towards pia

eagerly waitinng for your next update and i know it will also be best like your previous updates 👍🏼.

HOPE WE COULD GET SOME ARVI ROMANCE IN BETWEEN .☺️ you know na what i mean 😉

take care .😃

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sunidhi

@MadloverofRD

Voyager

Posted: 11 years ago

#117

Originally posted by: khushichopra
Awesome update Go ahead dear...
Waiting for next update
and also we want more arjun and purvi scenes plzzz

Thank you so much and definitely I will try to give more arvi scenes. 😊 😊

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sunidhi

@MadloverofRD

Voyager

Posted: 11 years ago

#118

Originally posted by: ashvikian4life
oh no i missed the first position😭.
sunidhi very nice update dear . you know instead of that idiotic 20 years leap , fekta should have taken a small leap of 4-5 years and could have shown arvi being parents of two kids and playing around with thembut fekta😡

anyways coming to the update , i liked the way you showed that how arjun understands purvi's feelings without speaking 😳, loved how pari was scolding her dad😆, aaww.. poor buzzer got a good scolding from purvi for coming near pia. i am sure pari will surely do something so that purvi blurts out her love for pia😉she is a smart arvi kid.

i even loved how purvi was protective towards pia

eagerly waitinng for your next update and i know it will also be best like your previous updates👍🏼.

HOPE WE COULD GET SOME ARVI ROMANCE IN BETWEEN .☺️you know na what i mean😉
take care .😃

Thank you so much shreya for the beautiful and lovely comment 😊 😊 .
And coming to romance I don't know I have never written such kind of scenes as I am so small to write these but will try.