AnKen SS~*It started with a friend request*~Intro of Naren Pg4 - Page 3

Originally posted by: pkarvi

actualy dat was a prologue. D story jst startd

Originally posted by: Momrin

Wow such a long chapter..thnx parin..:)

Originally posted by: sushkita931

ok thank u dear,really i m loving anki;s introduction keep writing😃

Originally posted by: parb

I m waiting

Originally posted by: Sahana-

Superb...👍🏼

Originally posted by: Tanyaz

Oh wow , so what is his name ???

What I am really liking about this story is that the characters only have the names but their personalities are totally different ..

Ankita's character is very interesting .You have given beautiful details to your story .Loved the way you described Ankita in the beginning ..

Pari is also nice ...

Looking forward to the next part ...😊

Naren

Now that's what's called a perfect strike!' Naren exclaimed jumping in the air as he took the lead in the game.

He needed to strike one more pin to win. Naren wa a bowling expert in nine-pins. He had won many times before this and was confident that it would be not different that day.

Naren approached the lane taking a 15-pound bowling ball in his right hand. Focused entirely at the pins in front of him, he released the ball carefully. As the ball touched the pins, he held his breathe.

*Bang* All nine pins went down in one go!

He had won the game, which meant he had won two entry passes to a disc, and that too on a Sunday night.

It's time to check out some hot girls tonight at the disc. It's going to be one happening night, Raunaq. Woohoo!' Naren's excitement was at its peak.

Raunaq was equally pepped up and pounced on him with excitement.

Naren was a Mumbaikar who lived for and with his family. He was working with the AK group, a company located near Oshiwara in Jogeshwari. He had a charming personality which could make girls go crazy. His good sense of humour and style always made him a favorite among his friends. Girls especially like him for he was a very good cook. He was very caring and possessive about his closed ones and extremely polite in nature. Everyone wondered how a guy like him was single. However, the truth was that after his break up six years ago, he had simply decided to concentrate on his carrer. Raunaq was probably his only best friend and he shared everything with him, including the girls whom he fantasized. Naren was a party freak and was all geared up for that night after winning passes to Thrive.

Raunaq, let's go for a movie. We can go to the disc after 11 pm,' Naren suggested and Raunaq agreed.

Both got into the driving seat of Raunaq's car and headed towards Infinity Mal..

They were going to catch the 7.30 pm show of the movie Pyaar Ka Punchnaama.

Naren took the low row tickets and Raunaq followed him inside the theatre. The hall had many vacant seats. Naren eyes the couple sitting in the corner row. The movie began and the opening scene itself was so funny that they were rolling in the seats with laughter.

Naren, this guy Liquid is so much like you. The way he is cursing his manager is just how you do it,' Raunaq teased Naren and laughed loudly.

Oh please..I don't curse so much. That too right after drinking tea,' said Naren trying to defend himself.

As soon as they settled down in their seats, Naren noticed a young girl sitting cross-legged in the front row. He said, I wish I get a girl like her in real life. She is so hot.'

Raunaq punched him hard on his shoulders and said, Shut up, you are too much.'

I was kidding yaar. Chuck it. Look at that couple in the corner there. Its hardly been twenty minutes since the movie started and they cant get their hands oof each other,' Naren said laughing.

Lagta hai poora paisa wasool karenge,' they screamed which made the couple more conscious. Realizing they were being watched, they broke their intimate stance and adjusted their clothes.

Everyone started making ooh' and aah' sounds. Poor couple! It looked like they had had enough of their Pyaar ka Punchnaama.

After the movie ended, they decided to eat maska bhurji pav at Khurshid, a famous eatery in Vile Parle. They were regulars at that place during weekends.

Finally then they headed to Thrive, Colaba. It was a typical Thrive weekend night. Since Naren had won free passes, they didn't have to pay a single penny. The cover charges were covered in the pass.

One flame shot please,' Naren ordered at the bar counter. The bartender served it with his usual smile. Raunaq told the waiter to get him the same drink as Naren.

Naren lit a cigarette and started tapping his feet to the music. The crowd was going crazy dancing to the rock music being played by the DJ. Naren was losing control of himself due to the effect of alcohol. But still he ordered a pint of beer.

Drink it on the rocks. Finish it in a go,' Raunaq teased Naren.

Naren took this challenge seriously and finished the entire pint in hardly a minute. He somehow tried to balance himself by holding on to Raunaq's hands.

Don't challenge me. I can complete any task.' Naren gave a wicked smile.

As if you are a Roadie. If so, do you see that girl in the little black dress? I suppose she is alone and drunk too. Go ask her name and talk to her for five minutes,' Raunaq again challenge Naren. This time, it was a serious.

Naren couldn't see her clearly due to the vast distance between them but he could tell she was extremely beautiful and capable of hitting him hard if he misbehaved with her.

Are you crazy? Just look at her. She is one of the prettiest girls I have ever laid eyes on and am sure everyone in this disc is also checking her out. Man! Just look at her. Isn't she perfect? I cant do this. I cant go up to her and talk. I want my body in one piece when I leave this place. If something happen, neither you nor she will save me. Moreover, I don't have any more paid holidays left,' Naren went on and on until Raunaq interrupted him.

Loser!' Raunaq said trying to end the long conversation in just one word.

Naren couldn't take it sitting down now. He took the challenge seriously and started walking towards the girl.

Though his nervousness escalated with each passing second, he approached her nevertheless. She was looking even more sexy up-close. He started dancing beside her. she was too busy dancing to bother about his close proximity to her. looking at it as the right opportunity, he tried to break the ice. He was now grooving along with her. she didn't oppose, maybe because she was just as drunk as him.

Hi. My name is Naren,' he said in a low tone. She missed hearing it due to the loud music being played.

Naren started flirting with her by asking her for a drink.

For a moment, they both stared each other and didn't speak a word. He kept thinking what the girl would say. He didn't want to miss a chance to introduce himself to the most gorgeous girl in the disc. Her black dress was shining in the dim disco lights and her skin was glowing.

Only if you pay for my drink...which means I get to save on my pocket money. But don't try it on me, mister,' she said and they both started laughing.

I'm Naren,' he said bringing his hand forward for formal introduction.

Ankita Mahatre.'

Naren was mesmerized by her voice and the way she talked. He was lost in her eyes, which seduced him to an extent that if he had been one more pint down, he would have kissed her right there. Somehow, he controlled himself. Her touch was enough to floor him.

You don't seem to be a Mumbaikar. Where are you from?' Naren enquired.

I am from Patna. I am here for my graduation. I just took admission in Mumbai for a BMM course,' she added further.

So you are staying alone?' He wanted to know more about her. All the while, he kept staring at her. He had clicked and framed an HD quality picture of her in his mind.

No. I am staying her with my family friend Pari. Pari Kirloskar. She is working in Deshmukh Industries in Mumbai as a manager,' Ankita said finishing off her drink.

In just few minutes, they exchanged their BBM pins. She had completely taken over Naren's mind by then. Naren didn't want to leave the place but had to. Though he had won the challenge, he had lost something to Ankita. He couldn't figure out the reason behind the anxiety he had at that time. Was it love at first sight? Naren kept smiling and Raunaq didn't miss a chance to tease him. Before moving out of the disc, Naren turned back nad his eyes searched for Ankita. But the place was too crowded to spot her. They soon left the place. Wat a night it had turned out to be.

After returning home, still half-drunk, he messaged Ankita on BBM. Before she could reply, he fell on the bed with a thud and was soon fast asleep.

Originally posted by: -Naresh-

Superb introduction of Ankita & naren. Well done parin👏👏👏