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Hey everyone:) Hope you are doing well. I have written an OS on ArVi and am posting it now. Its the first time I am posting something I have written, after reading many OS, FF and SS on this and a few other forums, so I thought of giving it a try, therefore please forgive me for any grammatical errors or any other mistakes on my part.


"Arjun!!!" Purvi called him. "Can you please help me tie this ribbon?" Purvi was really frustrated. She was getting late to go to a party with Arjun but something or the other was delaying her. Now it was the saari's blouse. "Uff!" Purvi was really frustrated, moreover, Arjun was not replying to her." Arjun kahaan ho tum?" called out a frustrated Purvi.

Arjun was busy getting ready when his beautiful wife called out to him. However, he decided to disturb her a little until he heard her a few more times. "Oh no!! I am gone! Purvi mujhse bohot naraaz hogi! Ek to main ne hi der karwaadi use aur ab main use jawaab bhi nahin dhe raha hoon!! Ok Mr.Kirloskar, get ready to pacify your darling wife." The moment Arjun steps in his room, a hanger comes flying at his face. Luckily enough, he ducked on time.

"Purvi, what's wrong? Why are you so angry baby?" Arjun asks her walking towards being careful to avoid any objects coming his way."Arjun I have been calling you since long and this is the time you come! You know we have to go to the party and we are already so late! Yet you delay me more by playing pranks! Huh!!"

Arjun barely heard whatever his lovely wife was saying. His entire attention was on her yet he barely heard anything. He was mesmerised by her. She looked breathtakingly beautiful. Her long hair was open with small fringes framing her face. She had very little makeup on her face; her eyes looked even more beautiful due to the black eye liner and kohl and her lips had a shade of pink lipstick.

Purvi was annoyed at Arjun because he was not answering her. After all that she said to him he did not reply. She looked up to him and saw him staring at her. "What?" She asked. Still, no reply came. She went up to him and waved at him, "Arjun! Kahaan kho gaye ho tum??"

"Huh?!" Arjun suddenly realised Purvi was saying something to him. "I am so sorry jaan! Kya keh rahi thi tum?"

"Main pooch rahi thi kahaan kho gae ho tum? Where are you lost Mr. Kirloskar?"

"Oh ok. Bataoon kya? I am lost in the thoughts of my Princess!" Arjun purposely put the emphasis on the word Princess.

"KYA! KAUN HAI WOH ARJUN???" Purvi was literally screaming at him.

The reaction was as expected. His beautiful wife looked even more beautiful when she got angry. Her nose twitched and her cheeks became red. He was lost in her beauty until she nudged him asking him, "kaun hai woh larki Arjun? Who is she? Haan hogi woh nai client Miss Soniya na jiske saath aaj humari meeting thi. Dekh rah ithi main kaise flirt kar rah ithi woh tumhare saath!"

Arjun laughed at her thoughts and had this really sweet Arjun smile on his face (I mean the smile Rithvik gives :P). His wife was jealous and possessive about him. Wow he was a lucky man to get such a loving wife. Arjun decided to clear her misunderstanding. As it is, they were getting very late for the party. Furthermore, he did not want to upset his angry wife even more. He would make her jealous another time.

Purvi was getting irritated. He was smiling at her. Smiling! How dare he after annoying her so much! After talking about being in some princess land?! She was about to shout at him when he pulled her close to him, put his hand on her chin, raised her face, looked into her eyes and said:

"Mrs. Kirloskar," he began, "that princess is none other than you! You are, were and will be my beautiful princess Purvi. And I can never love any woman more than you. You are my wife Purvi and my life. You look beautiful today aur main tumhari isi khoobsurati main kho gaya. And remember one thing Purvi, I love you!"

Purvi had tears in her eyes after hearing what Arjun had to say.

"I love you too Arjun and I am sorry ki maine tum pe shaq kiya. I am really sorry,"

Arjun gave her a kiss on the forehead and pulled her into a tight passionate hug.

Hum tere bin ab reh nahi sakte
Tere bina kya wajood mera (x2)

Tujhse juda gar ho jaayenge
Toh khud se hi ho jaayenge judaa

Kyunki tum hi ho
Ab tum hi ho
Zindagi ab tum hi ho
Chain bhi, mera dard bhi
Meri aashiqui ab tum hi ho

Tera mera rishta hai kaisa
Ik pal door gawara nahi
Tere liye har roz hai jeete
Tujh ko diya mera waqt sabhi
Koi lamha mera na ho tere bina
Har saans pe naam tera

Kyunki tum hi ho
Ab tum hi ho
Zindagi ab tum hi ho


Read more: http://www.lyricsmint.com/2013/03/tum-hi-ho-aashiqui-2.html#ixzz2dqRCzfV9

Arjun then tied the dori of the blouse in the same position and asked her "Chalein Mrs. Kirloskar? Hum already late hain!"

"Yes my dear husband. Chalo. Bohot der ho chuki hai," she replied.

And they went to the party to celebrate the success of a new contract they signed together early that week.



Thank you for reading :)

Criticisms are allowed but please no bashing

Do hit the like button please and please do comment on how you thought it was:)

All suggestions are welcome
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PrincessAshVik thumbnail
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Thank you for reading, liking and commenting:) Have a good day:)
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Loved it! ❤️
Too cute :)
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Originally posted by: AdorableAshVik

Loved it! ❤️

Too cute :)


Thank you:) have a good day
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Thank you for liking and commenting:) have a good day:)
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ahh loved it..its awesome..!!
do wrote more :)
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Thank you for reading and commenting:)
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Originally posted by: ashvikluverrr

ahh loved it..its awesome..!!

do wrote more :)



Thank you for the lovely comment😳 and for reading it. I will surely write more😊
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OMG SMARTIE THIS IS SO PERFECT <3!! 👏

I loved the whole scenario of the thing, how and when it was taking place was just fab.
I really really liked how Arjun called Purvi all of these different cute names like "jaan" or "princess" ahh and speaking of princess, how Purvi got so jealous!! The way she started to automatically blame one person in particular was just too much! 😆 I love how Arjun just stared at her for so long and how he planned to pacify her, and how she got so irritated cause they were late! All in all, this was just on point, the whole thing!

Smartie- you really need to consider starting an FF! You would do great!🤗
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Originally posted by: ilovepr

OMG SMARTIE THIS IS SO PERFECT <3!! 👏 Awww thank you so much😳


I loved the whole scenario of the thing, how and when it was taking place was just fab.
I really really liked how Arjun called Purvi all of these different cute names like "jaan" or "princess" ahh and speaking of princess, how Purvi got so jealous!! The way she started to automatically blame one person in particular was just too much! 😆 I love how Arjun just stared at her for so long and how he planned to pacify her, and how she got so irritated cause they were late! All in all, this was just on point, the whole thing!

Smartie- you really need to consider starting an FF! You would do great!🤗




Thank you so much for such a sweet comment🤗
I am glad you liked it and gave such a detailed comment😳
I would love to write an FF but woh kya hai na am too lazy😳 I would never update on time, but am planning to write one shots😉 If I overcome my laziness😉

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