Arvi+Sanvi ff WE'RE TOGETHER... ch-1 upd pg 7 - Page 4

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Posted: 12 years ago
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Hey, very well written up

do continue soon and pm me whenver u update
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Posted: 12 years ago
#32

Originally posted by: Ashvikfever

Hey Anisha can't wait for the updates. I have to say ur an excellent writer. I'm a big fan of all ur ffs and os. Plz continue all of them togather

thanks for sooo much praise...aadat hi nahi hain mujhe!!
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Originally posted by: Pihu.k11

Ooopss.. Varna too in umm.. I ship Sanvi 😳

But wud love to read it for Arvi 😃

Purvi likes Varun..??!! No please..
Purvi D diva.. Arjun.. Mr Extrovert.. Ammm..
Looking forward to it.. 😊

soo.. u too watched bff...
n lyk sanvi too.. but m writing sep for sanvi in bff forums...
tried for varna this tym...
n u'll have to wait for the purvi n varun thing!!
will upd soon...
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Posted: 12 years ago
#34

Originally posted by: angel_anisha

Hope u all lyk sanvi ..



are yeh bhi koi kehne ki baat hai..off course we lyk sanvi and i thank u for dis...love ya sweeto...
And update first chappy soon..
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Posted: 12 years ago
#35

Originally posted by: kiranjas



are yeh bhi koi kehne ki baat hai..off course we lyk sanvi and i thank u for dis...love ya sweeto...
And update first chappy soon..


maybe thodi der ho jaaye di..
likhne mein tym lagta hain..
n u c.. my exams coming next week only..
i have prepared rough.. have to type.. will do if possible...
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Ohh diz ff luks intersting coz here sanvi n arvi together .. i wanna read fast soo update ASAP :-D
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Originally posted by: gal.angel

Ohh diz ff luks intersting coz here sanvi n arvi together .. i wanna read fast soo update ASAP :-D

will be updating soon
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Posted: 12 years ago
#38
u made sanvi frm varna gud :D waiting for update
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Originally posted by: palakluvsabhiya

u made sanvi frm varna gud :D waiting for update

happy u lykd it!
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Ch-1

Zindagi aajkal mujhse naaraaz si kyu hain..
Har pal kuchh tootne ka ehsaas sa kyu hain..
Jo hi lagta hai ki sab kuchh haath mein hain...
Agle hi pal sab bikhar jaane ka ehsaas sa kyun hain..?
Zindagi uss kitaab ki jaisi ho gayi hain..
Jiske aakhiri panne fath gaye hain..
AAge kya hoga iska anjaana sa khauf kyun hain?
Zindagi aajkal mujhse...naaraaz si kyun hain...?



She kept her pen aside n closed her diary.
Then. she took her clothes n went inside her bathroom.She came out
wearing this beautiful dress.
[only dress, not actress]

She combed her hair, took her bag n left for college...
but was stopped by an old man.. maybe in his late fifties.
Man: Sanjana ji.. Plss wait here.. Atleast have your breakfast beta.
Sanjana: Hari Kaka, I have told yu hundred times dont put that 'ji' behind my name.
You are elder to me na... Just call me sanju beta... Or else i'll not talk to you..
and she turns her head in a kiddish way.
Hari kaka: Ok beta.. But have ure breakfast... or your fav mango juice...?
Sanju: no kaka.. m gettin late... have to rush..
A small boy comes up to her in his nightsuit n pulls her from below.
Sanju- Sunny...
Sunny- di.. why r u going sooo early... u know na..its Monday morning.. n purvi di
always comes late to college.
Sanju: I know that my lil champ.. But i have some othr work too..n u go to sleep...
its ure holiday na..
Sunny: Yes di..I'll go back to sleep.. Bye..
Sanjana kisses her brother on his cheek n he rubs it off irritatingly which brings
a smile on her face.
Sanjana: Kaka, take care that he completes all his work on time and does not be too
mischievous. I'll be a li'l late.
She leaves.

A huge, lavish bungalow with too many rooms.
The main hall with a big..long dining hall. Walls decorated with famous n rich paintings and
hangings while their is sofa and sitting arrangement near the entrance. A swimming pool
and a beatiful garden add up to the house's beauty.
A temple in the bunglow where aarti [prayer] is going on.
A lady.. Middle-aged woman rather.. singing a melodious aarti.
The camera rolls upward to a lavish, messy room where rock music is being played...
A girl wearing shorts and a tee is dancing and performing aerobics.
She is disturbed by a knock on the door.
She irritatingly switches the music system off
and says:What the... What was the emergency that u cud not resist
spoiling my day.. dear brother?
She said in a sarcastic way.
man- I just came to call you down.. But, i guess u will be taking an year or so..
Girl- Sachin...
Sachin- Oh purvi plss.. At least pay some respect to me.I am your ELDER brother!
am not a fool to leave aie's aarti and come up here just to bear your tantrums!
Purvi: So why the hell are you here? and if you're such a great brother... nope...
ELDER Brother...Then u must have known that i keep my schedule a bit late on mondays...
But.. alas! you're not aware of that unlike my even not so important friends...
Sachin- What do u want..? I jus made a mistake that I came up here.. Now pls.
get ready fast and come down.. m going..
Purvi- very well.. why r u waiting.. just get lost! [says frankly!]
he goes off...

Scene change.
Another big house with the same things inside as above.
A handsome guy working out in gym and looking super hot!
Sweat rolls out on his muscles and he takes deeep breathes...
Time goes on.. he does push-ups, crunches... n more[ i dont know more ;-p]
Dont waste time in guessing.. he's our PRITHVI!
Prithvi gets ready and looks soo dashing and handsome wearing a
red t-shirt with blue jeans that any girl wud fall for
him right-away.

He reaches downstairs where his parents are having breakfast.
Many servants are bringing food and taking some dishes away for refill.
others are doing some other work like setting up of house.. cleaning etc.

Prithvi- Hey mom.. heyy dad!
and he gives a side hug to his dad who is sitting.
Goes to his mother and keeps hand on her shoulder.
And says- well dad.. dont u think sumone is very excited today?But am verry scared..
What if she forgets us? [acts as if crying ]
His mom moves his shoulder away and slaps him lovingly.
Mom- You lil dramebaaz... why do u think i'll forget you? Arjun is your brother...
and u shud be happy that he is returning .. TODAY! I will love both of you...Equally!
Prithvi- Yes ma... and did u actually think that I will be jealous of him for ur love?
Oh please![Raising up his collars in style and winks]
Dad- yes mom's superhero.. i know that.. now have ure breakfast n go to college.. Sanjana
will be waiting no... [teasingly]
Prithvi- Dad...!!!!
Dad- After all you are the cultural secretary while she is the general secretary. So she said
that she has some important work.. Go fast... Nothing else ashna...
Yes, prithvi's dad very well knew about his son's life as prithvi was very attached to him
and shared everything with him.. For suggestions..advices.. and solutions to his
problems.. Prithvi just loved his dad... n vice versa. But. his mom was not aware abt any
such thing in prithvi's life. Mostly because she was soo involved in her other son, Arjun's life.
This sometimes irritated prithvi as he felt that she cares tooo much about arjun... Like
prithvi was not her son only!
Prithvi Left for the college.

Back at purvi's house.
Purvi has got ready by now and is looking very pretty.
Archana, her mother or aie.. as she calls her, comes there.
Purvi -[happily] aie... you're here.. why did u come here.. i was going to come down only!
Archana- I wanted to talk to u in private.
Purvi- Why? what happened aie?
Archana- What has happened to you purvi? I had sent sachin to bring you down...
I knew taht its monday but a special pooja was to be performed today so that's why
i called you. and you? you insulted him? He is your elder brother after all!

Purvi- Elder brother! no aie.. he's only your son.. not my brother.. and i always wonder why
he's ur son too...?
Archana- Purvi!
Purvi- Aie how can i forgot what he and his family did to you.. baba...
I dont want to have any discussion over this topic.. And am leaving..

She goes down and has her breakfast... takes prasad from her aie and then takes her
blessings.
purvi- Whe will baba return? Was it necessary for him to take dada with him..?
Archana- You know na... he has gone for an imp deal.. it may take tym..
Purvi- K... I'll call him... or send a message.. Bye..
She waves 'bye' to her grandfather and leaves...

Precap- Arjun's entry.

THE END

Thats it guys...
Chapter I finished..Hope u all liked it.
If u lyk it.. do comment..
n criticism is also welcome here!
if u dont want pm's kindly pm that to me or scrap.







Edited by angel_anisha - 12 years ago

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