||❤️Onir&Purvi AT#2❤️||Kuch Toh Hai Tujhse Raabta - Page 105

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.Sunshine. thumbnail
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Posted: 12 years ago
School was fine. We had to go just to get our records corrected and projects had to be submitted :)
So I had only half day school :)
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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: Arch.Archu

School was fine. We had to go just to get our records corrected and projects had to be submitted :)
So I had only half day school :)



How long is full day? When is your exam?
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Posted: 12 years ago
guys i dont know what will happen 14th february as PVR writer so unpredictable and also these days very very unromantic 😆 too much boring than me 😭 so i just want to imagine 14th February episode in my dream land so i already reached in dream land and my dream start here ;

14th February

karnazkar house at morning

purvi wake up 1st and onir sleeping ,purvi takes shower and also make breakfast for onir then purvi come with tea and she hit him softly and onir wake up and he is shock ,surprised and he is unconditionally happy and he take tea then purvi gave towel and told to onir that take shower and get fast ready ,onir surprisingly shock then she smile and goes at kitchen again .

onir comes in kitchen .
onir; what are you doing ?
purvi;nothing
onir ;nothing ?
purvi ;aray go and sit at table , i am coming .
onir;but you cant take heavy things ,give me these things , i am here for you .
purvi;yeah you are with me ,and i know if i will fall then you will catch me so whats the problem when my pati here , smile 😃
onir; but what are you doing ?
purvi ;you are just impossible ,go go go
onir ;reluctant onir goes but looks back again and again
purvi ; go

at dining table
purvi start to serve , onir happily surprisingly shocked as purvi made everything what onir like ,
onir ; what are you did ?
purvi ; what ?
onir ; whats the needed ?
purvi ; today 14th February
onir ; 14th February ? what it is ?
purvi ;boring gynocologist
onir ;what ?
purvi ; dint you never heard about it ?
onir ; no
purvi ; what ? 😡
onir ; tell me na , what it is ?
purvi ;no need it , you carry on and purvi about to leave
onir ; where are you go ?
purvi ; i am going to hell , any problem ?
onir ; ekkks lots of problem
purvi ; what problem ?
onir ;you are my wife and you cant go there , my wife cant go at least not in hell 😆
purvi ; 😡 and left

evening

purvi very very heartbroken by onirs ignoring behavior suddenly onir enters in room , purvi start to ignore him but onir stand in front of purvi with a packet , purvi surprised and happy wala smile , onir gave that packet to purvi and purvi took it and opened it , it is sari and it is pink ( i dont know purvis favorite coulour but i think most of the girl like pink without me so may be she also like pink ),purvis heart start to then
onir ' do you like it ?
purvi ;speechless
onir ; what happened ? dont you like it ?
purvi ; can you please go outside ?
onir ; why ?
purvi ; go
onir ; okay

after few minutes purvi comes out from room with a packet and she looks just gorgeous and onirs heart start to . and suddenly onir realized he is not in dream land and said to purvi '''bahut sudar lagrahi ho ''' 😳 then purvi gave him a packet ( purvi bought a shirt for onir 2 days ago for this day ) and shock pe shock , onir take it and opened it and it is a green shirt , onirs look 😃 purvi said go and wear it , and onir wear shirt and he just looks simple hot purvis real dude today .

they both start to blashing then
purvi ; lets go
onir; where ?
purvi ; pani puri ?
onir ; okay

then they reach at pani purri shop (i dont know about pani puri shop at all )
they start to take take pani puri , they finished and start to walking , suddenly rain start and purvi just stand there , onir wanted to take her but she not moved and also she caught onirs hand , onir shock , what happened purvi ?
cant you stand with me here onir ? i can stand with you purvi everywhere softly said onir . then purvi said ,stand here with me then they hugged each other for the 1st time
finish episode


guys i am very bad at romantic wala writing 😆, i can write for fun but i tried it coz once archu told me trying for something romantic wala fun and also i thought 14th february coming but PVR writer unromantic than me 😆 , he even can reveal secret at that romantic wala day 😡 so i write it ,
it is too bad i know but just tried with my imagination .😃


.Sunshine. thumbnail
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Posted: 12 years ago
I never got to comment on your 2nd poem so here it is.

I of course loved it <3 You bring out the feelings so beautifully <3
I loved how Onir's meaning of 'heart skipping a beat' changed over time. Loved how he describes love as 'neurons sending chemicals to brains' and then later on compares it to the vastness of the ocean <3
zonan thumbnail
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Posted: 12 years ago
hey guys what's up.

abhi i read your poem..they are just beautiful. loved it ❤️.


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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: Arch.Archu

Really? :S I didn't feel anything like that.


hehehe i can feel as eyeglass is my another life , regular research it is 😆
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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: Arch.Archu

I never got to comment on your 2nd poem so here it is.

I of course loved it <3 You bring out the feelings so beautifully <3
I loved how Onir's meaning of 'heart skipping a beat' changed over time. Loved how he describes love as 'neurons sending chemicals to brains' and then later on compares it to the vastness of the ocean <3



Thank u...😃 even i liked writting those lines...well i just love writting...😆
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Posted: 12 years ago
just 10 page , guys finish this
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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: sipokobusak

hey guys what's up.

abhi i read your poem..they are just beautiful. loved it ❤️.




Thanks sipo...😃

How was work? If u dont mind me asking where are u from?
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Posted: 12 years ago
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