OS: 'Truth has been completely done!'

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Posted: 13 years ago
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Hello everyone,

I'm going to write OS for the first time. I don't know how to write with difficult words. I'm trying to write with my owns.😊


It starts episode about the conversation between Ovi and Arjun only.😊


Arjun was in the airplane to return Mumbai from South Africa. He deeps in thoughts and worries a lot.

Arjun said to himself: I don't have confident to tell Ovi. How will I make Ovi understand?

He recalled in the flashbacks.

Arjun said to Purvi: I'll tell Ovi truth right! We never separate again. I'll come back to win your heart.

Purvi said nothing and remained silent. She looked sad.


Arjun was back normally. Dk sleeps besides him. They reached Mumbai safely and returned home.


Arjun and DK were sitting on the sofa and was getting relaxed. Arjun slept peacefully on the sofa and had a dream about same flashbacks. His eyes opened and thinks a lot. DK watched his son and asked him questions.


DK: What are you thinking, my son?

Arjun: I can't tell Ovi the truth. Will you able to tell her?

DK listened and kept quiet.

DK: Impossible! I don't have courage to tell her.

Arjun: If my mother lives there, she wishes to tell her right away. I'm responsible for doing between Purvi and Ovi. How will I make them understand?

DK: Don't worry! You must get confidence and take up your strenght. Don't lose your heart. You must tell her everything.

Arjun looks up at his dad and his eyes turns down. His face looks in a difficult way.

Arjun: Oh God! I can't do that. But I am trying to do. My heart feels in a tensed way.

DK: Nothing will be happened! I'm supporting you. Also your beloved mom will support you too. I'm sure that Ovi will understand.

Arjun: That's ok. I'm going to tell her now. I'll call her up to come here.

DK: Sure!


Arjun went to the balcony and dialed his cellphone. In the hotel, Ovi looked her cell which had been rung on. She looks happy on seeing his call. She opened on his call.


Ovi: My Arjun! I really miss you a lot.

Arjun: Hmmm! Ok. Please come to my house now.

Ovi: Yeah! Sure! Anything special for me?

Arjun: Err... Ye.. No.. I want to tell you something which is important.

Ovi: Important? What important things? Tell me clearly.

Arjun: No. I request you to come here alone. Please.

Ovi: Ok! I'm sure I'll be there for half an hour. Bye!

Arjun: Bye!


Ovi switched off her cell and thought about the girl whom she called her. Teju came out of the bathroom and asked Ovi.

Teju: I've heard your voice. Whom did you chat with?

Ovi: Arjun! He requested me to go to his house.

Teju: Wow! Anything special for you?

Ovi: No. He said that he wanted to say something to me. I'm thinking about the girl whom she called.

Teju: Perhaps you are right! Don't worry! Why do you worry? I'm sure that Arjun loves you a lot.

Ovi: I'm not sure. He has been changed a little bit. I'll go alone now. Take care yourself.

Teju: No need to worry. I'm sure that your Arjun wll punish the girl. Take care.

Ovi: Ok!

She smiled at Teju and dressed up nice things and got there by a taxi.


At the house, Arjun looks depressed. DK watches and put his head with his hand. He stroked Arjun's hair and said.

DK: Don't look sad. Be confident. I'm sure that your mom is with you right now.

Arjun hugs tightly and said

Arjun: Yeah! I'm confident. I'm fresh now. I'm going to tell her.

DK (smiled): OK! Did you call her up and come here?

Arjun: Yes!


There's a door bell on the house. They look at it.

Arjun:Aaa. It must be Ovi! I'm sure.


He opened the door and it was Ovi. He welcomed her. Ovi hugged him and gave him a big smile😃 Arjun gave her like that🤔


Arjun: Come here, Ovi.

Ovi: I'm very happy to see you. We are together again.

Arjun looked disturbed and remained silent.

DK: Hi Ovi! How are you?

Ovi: Fine, uncle! You?

DK: OK. I'm worked out. See you later.

Ovi: Yeah! Sure!


DK went to his bedroom and kept hiding and waited to listen the conversation between Ovi and Arjun.


Arjun and Ovi made sit on the sofa. He brought tea and cookies for her.


Ovi: Tell me important things.

Arjun: Oh! Yes! I'm going to tell you something.

Ovi: Do you mean you have found the girl whom she called me?

Arjun: Err... No...

Ovi: Then tell me right now.


Arjun's necks getting sweat and swallowed.

Arjun: Yeah! I'm going to tell you right now.

Ovi: Sure! Tell me!

Arjun: I'm sorry with you! I hope you will understand my feelings.

Ovi(confused): Your feelings? What?

Arjun: I'm a changed man a lot. Sorry! Forgive me!

Ovi: What are you speaking? Why do you speak like that? You are nothing but just same man.

Arjun: No! I'm going to tell you truth right now.

Ovi: Truth? What truth? Speak up!

Arjun: But please don't angry with me when i speak.

Ovi(more shocked): Why am I angry with you? I don't understand this. Tell me clearly.

Arjun: Do you remember when I called you while you were in the filming show? You said you didn't hear my words.

Ovi recalled flashbacks about that. She remembered that.

Ovi: Yes! I remembered. I can't hear your voice. Tell me!

Arjun: I was trying to call you a lot but failed. Suddenly you appeared me before the engagement day. I'm feeling with someone.

Ovi: What? What do you mean? Someone? Who?

Arjun: I'm going to tell you about the person I love the most before our engagement day. I was tryint to call you but failed.


The screens turns colour into black-white! Ovi is more shocked and her tears were coming down.

Ovi: What? Do you mean you love with someone? Right?

Arjun (in a weak condition) : Yes!

Ovi gets more shocked.

Ovi: How can you cheat me after our engagement day or before engagement day?


Ovi got up from the sofa and shouted at him.

Ovi: WHO??? WHO IS SHE??? TELL ME ANSWER!

Arjun looked up at her and got up.

Arjun:Relax! Wait! But you must understand my feelings.

Ovi:Please be enough! What the hell are you speaking? What do I understand your feelings? Enough! Tell who is she?

Arjun closed his eyes and his heart concentrated to tell her truth.


Arjun: Very well! You know her.

Ovi: I know her? What do you mean?

Arjun: My colleague.

Ovi: Colleague? Do you mean Purvi?

Arjun looked at her eyes after hearing the name.


Arjun closed his eyes and sighed. His head turned down.


Ovi looked more shocked. The screen turned into black-white. And her tears were flowing more like a river.

Ovi: How dare you cheat me? What a cheater you are?

Arjun: No! I'm not that. I want to make you understand.

Ovi: Please be enough! I don't want to hear more time.


DK listened to their conversation and came out of his bedrooms.

DK: I'm sorry with you, dear. Please forgive me. It's not my fault.

Ovi remained silent and doesn't speak any word.

She ran away from there. Arjun and DK looked more shocked. Arjun ran after her. But he failed.

Arjun stroked his hair with his hand and looked tensed. His face zoomed and ended.

The show ends.😊


I'm sorry with you, guys. I don't know how to write difficult words due to my deafness. No one chats with me. So I'm using simple words. I don't know how to write difficult words.


I hope you like this. If you don't like this, please share your thoughts.😊

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soapwatcher1 thumbnail
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Posted: 13 years ago
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I enjoyed it! I liked the DK/ Arjun scenes. Arjun the wimp finally bared his soul!😉

You should write more!
Edited by soapwatcher1 - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Hi Sayeed,
I thought this was very well-written. You know you actually captured Arjun's nervousness and his hemming/hawing to get to the point very perfectly. If the CVs were to have a scene like this in actual PR...the way you have them both behaving is pretty down to the letter! Good job!!! 👍🏼
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Hi Sayeed
I really liked this👍🏼. Patience is needed to write a full scene like this😆 you have it.👍🏼 I could imagine Arjun's face when he was speaking to DK, and later on with Ovi. Also liked the little scene between Ovi and Tej. I liked how Ovi ran away from Arjun's house, after hearing what he had to say. Hope she let's him be and Arjun can marry the woman he loves, Purvi😊
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Posted: 13 years ago
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hey its realy very awsum
i dint feel of any diificult words needed i think d more simple lang u use u connect more to ppl n u did d same thng
i can feel evry word u wrote from arjun's perspective hope he tell in srial too

i want u to cntinue dis post
pllzz i wud realy luv to read it
Edited by aakanksha7 - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
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thank u very much😊

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Posted: 13 years ago
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Originally posted by: soapwatcher1


I enjoyed it! I liked the DK/ Arjun scenes. Arjun the wimp finally bared his soul!😉

You should write more!

thank u very much. but i don't know your name.

i'm trying to do my best.😊

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Posted: 13 years ago
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Originally posted by: archverma10

Hi Sayeed,

I thought this was very well-written. You know you actually captured Arjun's nervousness and his hemming/hawing to get to the point very perfectly. If the CVs were to have a scene like this in actual PR...the way you have them both behaving is pretty down to the letter! Good job!!! 👍🏼

thank u very much😊 yeah! i would like to write my imagination. it's my first time to write OS.😊

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Posted: 13 years ago
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Originally posted by: purethought

Hi Sayeed

I really liked this👍🏼. Patience is needed to write a full scene like this😆 you have it.👍🏼 I could imagine Arjun's face when he was speaking to DK, and later on with Ovi. Also liked the little scene between Ovi and Tej. I liked how Ovi ran away from Arjun's house, after hearing what he had to say. Hope she let's him be and Arjun can marry the woman he loves, Purvi😊

thank you very much, trish!😊 yeah! it's not easy that arjun will marry purvi. there's a big problem of armaan after telling the truth. i'm planning to write OS continues tonight!😃

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Posted: 13 years ago
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Originally posted by: aakanksha7

hey its realy very awsum
i dint feel of any diificult words needed i think d more simple lang u use u connect more to ppl n u did d same thng

i can feel evry word u wrote from arjun's perspective hope he tell in srial too

i want u to cntinue dis post
pllzz i wud realy luv to read it

thank u very much!😊

yeah! no one chats with me in difficult english words. when i learnt some difficult words, after sometimes i forgot everything. it's okay that i'll write in simple words.😊


if you plan any difficult words anything, pls tell me.

Edited by sayeed87 - 13 years ago

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