The Raging Storm (ARVI) - Chpt 22 - Page 98 - Page 45

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Posted: 13 years ago

Dont have to be careful with me..just be the way you are... i was just clarifiying...after the debacle episode today, dont feel like laughing though... :(

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Posted: 13 years ago

Originally posted by: nalonynnej

So being a romantic is hereditary? 😆 Your mom is right; they just don't make men like they used to. 😍
Love the scene whe Purvi sings "I'm Too Sexy For My Shirt." Hahaha. 🤣
Wished this fantasy was reality. Can't wait for Arjun and Purvi's real life encounter. 😊

Thank you 😃
My dad likes to think so 😆
That song is so much fun isn't it? 😆
Enjoy the rest coming up!
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Posted: 13 years ago
You took us to wnother world, laurie..i got so caught up reading it...very well done... Didnt mind the length at all. We can always read more!!!
Hope u find someone like ur dad !!![/QUOTE]
Thanks Jyothi 😳
It really was a fun chapter to write - so many hidden treasures too 😉
@bold - From your mouth to God's ears 🤗 🤣
Enjoy!
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Posted: 13 years ago

Originally posted by: salvatore-nina

Oh my goodness, Laurie I can't decide if this is your best chapter yet! It was so great. I feel like I'm in ARVI Heaven.


Almost the entire chapter was on Arjun and Purvi and it was so well done. I love their telepathic connection. Every time they communicate, it's so intense. If these two keep meeting and romancing telepathically and getting my heart jumping, then I wonder what will happen when they actually come face to face. Although Arjun and Purvi haven't met yet face to face, I am content with the telepathic meeting of the souls. And, my goodness they kissed! 😍 ☺️ This stuff is just too intense for PR CVs to even think about, but I love how you handled it.

👏 This one's for you. Keep at it Laurie. You are creating a masterpiece here.
👏 And this one's for your Dad for being your inspiration which led to you writing a terrific and wonderfully Arvilicious chapter!

Thanks Nina 😃
The telepathy had to come full circle - to know that they can connect with each other if needed 😉
I hope I can do the actual meeting justice - so many ideas and I can't decide on which on yet 😆
Thanks for reading and hope you enjoy the rest.
BTW - my dad is loving his 15 minutes of fame - so thanks for the applause 😃
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Posted: 13 years ago

Originally posted by: ArVirocks

This chapter was hands down my favorite chapter it was soo funny and romantic 😊❤️

It was like Arviland 😊

Thanks ArVirocks! 😃
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Posted: 13 years ago

Originally posted by: arrrviiiluverrr

marvellous...!!!!
it ws THE BEST chapter...
luvd their cute convo wid each other...their being jealous and i luvd dat kiss..!!!
it ws lyk present there and watching dem doing all dis...u r creating a masterpiece...!!!
ws waiting 4 ur chapter frm so mny days...wen it finally came i ws lyk jumping up nd down at 5:30 am in da morning...read it twice...and wil read mny more tyms coz i relly lovd it to da core...
plz update soon...

Thank you 😃
Wow - waiting for days? I think I like the sound of that! 😆 just kidding.
I'm happy you like it that much - it makes the writing experience all the more enjoyable for me 😃
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Posted: 13 years ago

Originally posted by: Rose_7

loving your FF

read it all in one go
it's so addicting
continue soon

Welcome Rose_7 and thank you for your comment 😃
Will do and hope you enjoy the rest! 😃
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Posted: 13 years ago

Originally posted by: abhimg

😆Dear Laurie Karma,

Arre ur Dad is too good for giving u this stroke of genius...👏👏
What a very perfect song for a perfect Jodi and a perfect book by you...
Yet again you have outdone yourself, but this Is MARVELLOUS, Delicious, what a romantic, heart warming, soul replenishing, realistic, wholistic experience that was...and only at first read, am crazzzy to re-read it again and relish and 😍...
Oh, Laurie, thank you, well worth the wait and many thanx to ur Mom and Dad😃😃

Ab intezaar hai humare Laurie aur Karan ka, kab Karan will use his port key chain...kab aayegi humari Laurie...and will she meet Purvi at all before?

Thanks Abhi 🤗
My dad is loving this attention 😆 He is busy giving himself pats on his back as we speak 😆 My crazy papa 🤗
I appreciate your continous feedback and support. It means alot 😳
Not to worry - Karan can't stay away from Laurie 😉
Enjoy the rest coming up!
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Posted: 13 years ago

Originally posted by: Luckyforever

Come out from dreams.
Its too much.

Welcome Luckyforever and thank you for the comment 😃
I appreciate the good advice. This dream was actually a precursor to what happens next.
Hope you enjoy the rest coming up!
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Posted: 13 years ago

Originally posted by: purethought

Laurie,

This is so beautiful! If the dreams they're having are so real, what will the real thing be like😲😍
I read your chapter first thing in the morning, and it made me smile so much. 😊 I loved every bit of it👏.
Thanks a lot for sharing this..👏
Waiting for the next chapter. 😍
Trish

Thanks Trish 😃
I have a few scenarios I'm toying with and once it's finalized I'm hoping for magic too 😉
Enjoy!

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