The Raging Storm (ARVI) - Chpt 22 - Page 98 - Page 38

Originally posted by: ArVirocks

yeeep i missed your update soo much when i saw this i literally started jumoing for joy 😃

Originally posted by: salvatore-nina

Fantastic update Laurie!

London is on my list of must visits but I am also excited to see London through Purvi's eyes. I love the innocence and excitement she feels when looking out at everything.

I knew when that lady in the elevator said she was stopping of at the third floor, that Arjun or Purvi, one of them would see each other as the woman got off. Poor Arjun thinks he was imagining things when his lady love has just entered the building and back into his life. Oh, by the way, isn't Karan's apartment on the third floor as well? I wonder if he and Arjun will meet before Arjun-Purvi come to see each other.

I loved it when Purvi was thinking of Karan as KD. She sees him as a friend now and seems very comfortable with even thinking of him with his nickname.

I loved this chapter as I loved all your other chapters and can't wait for Arjun and Purvi to meet face to face. In all this excitement for their meeting, I'm kind of feeling bad for Karan. I want to see him in the story further even after ARVI gets back together. I think he's a great friend to Purvi and can become a good friend to Arjun as well since AK doesn't seem to have very many close guy friends and Sachin doesn't count. Please give me some assurance that we will see more of Karan in the story as well!

Wonderful update once again Laurie. Now I can't wait for Chapter 10.

Originally posted by: soapwatcher1

Laurie, awesome! You have done it again! You are a writer in disguise, this is no amateur's work, the evocative descriptions of their living quarters, the details are too good. I loved this chapter, it was light and airy, you can feel the lightening of Purvi's heart, bodes well for a very happy ending! The roof top garden appears dreamy, exudes a sense of impending romance (ooh, can't wait!). Not much of Arjun in this chapter and Karan is slipping into the background too (I think that is a good thing, dreamboat that Karan is, Arjun is still the hero!!)

This chapter was peaceful, light, I can feel it in my bones, good things are about to happen! Thank you, my friend! Dil maange more and you please beyond measure every single time!

PS: Is London one of your favorite haunts? you seem to know the place like the back of your hand!!

Originally posted by: soapwatcher1

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All nine chapters were amazing! Cannot wait for the 10th!

Originally posted by: vgiri

Loved it Laurie.. added a great feel to my Saturday evening,, thx

"Oh yaar. Work, work, work - you sound like Arjun, you know that? Both of you are like two halves of the same whole!" and Purvi's chocking.. Nice touch..

Tej falling for KD!!! yeah who won't...

Elevator scene... initially thought Arjun got the glimpse of Purvi's presence in the elevator..so he actually didnt see her.. just felt her presence..nice

I am not very familiar with London.. but just checked out Butlers Wharf..wow...

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Originally posted by: arrrviiiluverrr

this ws a amazing chapter..ws so excited...all of your 9 chapters were amazing as evrr..nw waiting for ur 10 th chapter whr i think finally arjun and purvi will meet...
plzz update soon

Originally posted by: purethought

Super story Laurie.

Amazing descriptions all around, and the setting is just fabulous. London😍

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I wanted the 9th chapter to never end. Even though Karan is a very charismatic character, I can't wait for Arjun to meet Purvi. What will he make of P.D and K.D, the names? (he's gonna be furiously jealous😆)

I liked how Purvi heard Arjun's name and he, hers. 😳 Such things do happen even in real life; when two people are so in love, one instinctively knows if the other is in vicinity. 😳

Originally posted by: aakanksha7

hey laurie,

wat an update realy awsum superb👏👏

was desperately waitin fo ur update⭐️

i was literaly imaginin each word u describe😍

do cntinue soon👍🏼

Originally posted by: abhimg

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LOVELY Laurie...LOVE the MAGIC FARAWAY FLATS 😉

Brilliant...the story gives hope...its turning positive...cannot wait for the next one..

Like Vilasini said- 2 halves of the same whole...that says it all, doesn't it for our favorite jodi, Arjun and Purvi...thank you Laurie for this wonderful treat...

Chapter 21...cannot wait to read and re-read all your chapters...

Yes, you do love London and know it like the back of your hand...

Cannot wait for the Arjun Purvi encounter...thank you again such a pleasure to read this.

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Originally posted by: jamkarajj

Laurie dear, I.ve started to feel that i'm Purvi. Your story has moved me so much that i wish that I can turn back the clock!

This chapter is so light and refreshing for a weekend. Your a great expressionist my friend ! Thanks for the update.