Gift of Love- Sushita- New update pg 12

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Posted: 13 years ago

#41

Originally posted by: charmedforlife

Aww...thank you my dearest omana!!!!🤗
Love you😃😃

😊

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sushkita10

@sushkita10

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Posted: 13 years ago

#42

supriya excellent poem👏omana thanks for translating i like most those lines

Only you are the true wish of my heart,

Only you are the word of worship on my lips,

And those my lips, never get tired of singing;

And that which has now become the tune of my breath.❤️

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LoveSushAnki

@LoveSushAnki

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Posted: 13 years ago

#43

Supu diii..🤗🤗..u r fabulous...awesome work..👏

Omana di..🤗

Edited by Devishri - 13 years ago

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charmedforlife

@charmedforlife

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Posted: 13 years ago

#44

Originally posted by: poas
supriya excellent poem👏omana thanks for translating i like most those lines
Only you are the true wish of my heart,

Only you are the word of worship on my lips,

And those my lips, never get tired of singing;

And that which has now become the tune of my breath.❤️

Thank you poppy...🤗actually...the translation has been done by me only...😳but the sole credit of updating and posting and all the hard-work is done by omana only🤗

Edited by charmedforlife - 13 years ago

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charmedforlife

@charmedforlife

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Posted: 13 years ago

#45

Originally posted by: Devishri
Supu diii..🤗🤗..u r fabulous...awesome work..👏

Omana di..🤗

Thank you my baby devi🤗i am so so glad you liked it😃😃😃

here is to omana...from my side as well🤗

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charmedforlife

@charmedforlife

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Posted: 13 years ago

#46

Originally posted by: dhoomdhadaka
Nice one

Thank you anshi...im happy you liked it🤗

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ProudSushantian

@ProudSushantian

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Posted: 13 years ago

#47

Beautiful post Supriya😊 Loved it❤️❤️❤️ U r so talented gr8 work👍🏼
Omana thank you so much😊

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Lumos

@Lumos

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Posted: 13 years ago

#48

How about some Jugal-bandi?😉

Daulat nahin hathon mein mere,

Aur shauhrat ka hai taqaaza,

Magar ban sakta hoon main woh Sahara,

Jo rahega humesha banke tohfa tumhara...

The girls reply...

Tum hi ho is jigar ki dhadkan,

Tum hi ho is taan ka ghehana,

Aakhon mein basi tumari yeh shauhrat,

Hai us chand ke shauhrat se bhi Badkar,

Toh,
Banugi mein tumhari saathi hamesha-
baas ek saathi ban kar,

Cheen na lena yeh khubsurat tohfa-
baas mujhe ek tohfa samajhkar.

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Lumos

@Lumos

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Posted: 13 years ago

#49

Great work supriya...👍🏼

^^The above quoted lines touched me so much that i responded to it in the same style..😊

And once again great composition...👏

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stefanandre

@stefanandre

Dazzler

Posted: 13 years ago

#50

Awesome work Supriya🤗Thank you, Omana, thanks to you as well for posting🤗 keep it coming Supriya.

love both your works although did not comment the first time; such talented young ladies/men on the forum👍🏼👏 Keep it up!

Reading it I was picturing Sushant cause Ankita always says he is such a romantic n me also like romance stuff😳

Omana missing you on the forum, guess when Sushant left, he took away all his dewanees with him😉

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