PR Reloaded- II (FF) Note on pg. 76- do read! - Page 58

Hi Niki, 🤗

heyyy.. niki.. what a comebackkk.. awesooomeee...
u know weeks after u updated the previous part.. I started missing this ff sooo much.. I had started reading it again from the begining.. just like I had started watching pr after sush left.. it is kinda refreshing u know.. the tiny things that u hav described.. keepiing the realistic aspect alive.. yet presenting an amazing story.. love it..

okk.. sooo cuming to the present update.. absolutely amazing.. ok I shuld find out somee new words.. as amazing fab have becum tooo common.. but then the little things that u describe..
the way u added the romance part.. with manav planting a kiss on archanas forehead.. awww was all I culd do.. reminded me of one episode wen manav had placed a kiss on archanas forehead.. it was after the leap.. n ankita wore a green Saree n sush black shirt.. that was a cute scene.. n the way u hav incorporated it here.. awesomee...
the way u described manav cribbing.. opening his heart out to archana.. clearly shows how their relation has developed.. from being just an unconsummated marriage.. to two ppl.. understanding each other.. even their silence can be understood..
n also the family members helping them.. specially manav.. how they hav becum one team.. taking care of their own manav.. who had been their support at a point.. yea.. def.. they hav to help him now.. n they understand it well..
I also really like the way ur story is developing.. like it takes care of all details.. a description.. wherein we can toally imagine yeh scene kaise hoga.. n never has it been dragging.. a perfect balance...
overall.. an amazing awesome n fantastic update.. pleasure to read...'
only one complain.. please dont keep us itnaaa waiting for the next part... n yeh as always.. update soon...
we know u too r busy.. but try for a weekly update.. hahaha.. greedy I hav beucm now..
neways waitinnggg...

NIKIII! :D:D:D

Niki

What a lovely update, was missing your FF and our ArMan so much.

Poor Manav, feel so sad for him to see him helpless like this considering for years he was the one looking after everyone - guess he is not used to this but I am sure by the end of the hospital stay, he will enjoy all the attention and fuss he is getting and why not, he totally deserves it.

So nice to see how far ArMan have come and to witness their love, understanding and support growing for each other and now Manav is so happy and relaxed that he has his Archana back in his life for good and he has someone to share all his burdens and worries and he does not have to do it all alone.

Love how you put in the realistic touches of the hospital and how a patient behaves - can totally relate to that and I am sure you must be facing that every day - hats of to all the doctors and hospital staff who have to put up with some difficult patients.

Cool touch with the Pepsi Atom👍🏼 had a big smile on my face when i read that.

Niki, sorry the only beef I have is that it was too short😔 when I printed it out it was only 9 pages, did not want the chapter to end so now waiting patiently and eagerly for the next chapter. Appreciate you updating inspite of you being so busy🤗

Looking for some lovely ArMan moments and Manav getting spoilt and pampered even if it is just during his hospital stay. Feel for Savita and hope the family becomes one big happy family and that they include Savita in all the family discussions.

Miss my ArMan😭 miss Manav😭😭 and miss Sushita.

Niki any chance of you doing a short story on the journey of Sushita from all the segments and off screen stuff we have got😃

Lowved it! Please make the lil boy reveal about the kiss. He could trade some Pepsi Atoms from Archana as well for the secret. Please...pretty please! I wanna imagine Archana blushing. ☺️

niki...

Nikki Dear 🤗,

Thanks a Lot for the Update...Actually No apologies needed from Ur side,Its a Lot of Thanks and 🤗 to be given from Our side for this Lovely Update from U , making time for us besides Ur Busy schedule...

Loved and Liked Ur update...

A Nice update that showed a Gradual Family Bonding and a Nice narration on Manav's first day at Hospital... Could understand how difficult a Person would feel when he was Busy all these years and now became idle or (Vetti officer -- Dont Know whether U Knew the meaning of it😊),
I could really understand it as I have become one(Vetti officer) for a short period...😆...

Anyways whether its a Intense part or a smooth going part or just a Gradual plot,You never fail to leave Ur Imprint on it...
Just like that here too,you have made Ur Trademarks with the New 'Pesi Atom'😃 and the Manav's Cute Kiss to archu with the Cutie pie speculator... I Hope that Boy Get some fun moments of ARMAN too by revealing it...

Nice one, and as always, How much ever U give, we eagerly wait for Ur next update from the moment we read Ur new one... so here too...Same... waiting eagerly Nikki...


The day at first I saw Him on the new pepsi ad, I was thinking was it He, then repeatedly it came on dish channel, the same Day i saw Ur PM and Ur FF part which had the same thing...
So U too gave surprise for us when something new on Sushant came...😊

ThereBy, can I expect the next part today or soon, may be june1😳, since there was news that Sushant going to perform in JDJ is here today...😳

Hey nikki plsss update soon dear we r missing our arman aka sushita as nw a days sushita drought is here

Thanks Niki for all your efforts, this i made especially for you hope u like it..

Just to remind you that readers are waiting for an update! 😳