PR Reloaded- II (FF) Note on pg. 76- do read! - Page 22

Originally posted by: shootingstar27

I absolutely loved it Niki 👍🏼 This is one of your best updates to date. I liked the twist last part and the continuation is just fabulous. *takes a bow*. Thankyou, thankyou.😃

I was so engrossed in reading that when finished I Subpart 3 I was like, thats it?I want more!!! 😆😆😆 😲MORE??? Are you not tired YET!?!

I always saw Archana's ability to focus on the good,forgiving and not holding grudges as her biggest strength.She is a strong person who would go to any lengths for her loved ones. Exactly. Although we made fun of it cos of the way it was shown in the serial, there is actually a lot of strength in Archana's 'shakkar' philosophy- if used properly. Her sweetness and large heartedness, understanding nature and ability to handle relationships are her biggest strength- both in the serial and this story. And these are the same qualities which had made Manav fall in love with her- both in the serial and show. Manav is in good hands 😳 Its nice to read Archu using her brain and putting two and two together on her own.

Loved how Manav was written when he finally found the truth about his mother.His devastation was captured well.There were times I found him to be a bit self righteous in this FF so I'm glad the truth is out and everything is not as it appears to be. Felt like giving Manav a big 🤗.I think you are second in the line to hug Manav (first is me😃), since you commented first.😛

Hope there will be some good news for ArMan in coming installment.Poor souls have suffered enough😉I gave one subtle hint- Ganesh Puja is arriving in the FF. 😃

Originally posted by: bonnefille

Read it and lowved it. Archana is finally towards realizing the truth and with her own efforts.

I think I hate Savita equally in your FF. I was so happy that Manav not only got to know the truth about Savita's abuse on Archana but also the abuse he suffered for so many years in hands of her. Savita has been far more destructive of Manav's life...emotionally sapping him through his childhood. Destructive, yes, but about Manav's childhood I won't say anything right now, bcos this is something which will come up in the flashback in the next part. It is something on which I have not yet written at length in the story till now, I think. I think the next part might actually end up confusing some of you on what type of person Savita actually is.I especially liked Manav saying that he is on his own now...for him to realize his victim-hood and make efforts to come out of it was equally important as for Archana. Victimization of men has never been given serious consideration, neither has the issue broached into deeper coz men have always been considered strong enough to need any kind of support.

Although Varsha has been well sketched in your FF, but I think she's equally selfish as in the serial. So many things have occurred but she still hasn't managed to contact Archana. Her attempts have been feeble...must be frolicking around Delhi coffee shops with Abhimanyu...LOL sorry!! But seriously she should have made more efforts for her sister...what if the divorce had gone through...wouldn't she be responsible for it? Again, that is something about which I've not written in the story in detail cos I focussed on the ArMan story primarily to hurry the story forward and kept Varsha on the backburner, intending to bring it up later as 'Varsha's story'. In fact, many stories are on the backburner right now- Varsha, Sachin, Savita , the twins and a very small part of Shravani's story too. They will open up as the story progresses and join the main story. As of now, all I wrote about Varsha is that she calls home to tell Archana everything, but is caught by Manju who identifies the Delhi code on Archana's mobile. Varsha makes an excuse, but Manju understands that she would try to contact Archana and prove Manav right, so she tells her that Archana has already gone to Manav and is living with him only- she believes him over Ajit. Later she stole Archana's cell.

Beyond that also, why Varsha could never talk to Archana will come up later.

I like the way the story is moving forward...and like Omana said your long update was not good enough for me either...yeh dil maange more!!! Waiting for the next part...and I know you have already started on it considering the flash back. But obviously...no pressure!!! 😃😉Will try.

I love the fact that Arman now are together while the world is against them...it has always been them against the world but this time they are together in the truer sense. All I can say is that the fruits of the struggle will be very sweet in every sense.