After Manav is free, how many like the track below

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ChiggyWiggy

@ChiggyWiggy

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Posted: 15 years ago

#11

Simplyyyy Awesome !!!

I loved the complete story. Was mesmerized with the turn of events in here. What a beautiful writing style.. Sooo loved it... i could actually see savita tai speaking out the lines written here...

Kudos to the writers.

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Vera

@Archanafan

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Posted: 15 years ago

#12

Thanks ChiggyWiggy, we will add more ideas and try to bring them to the attention of the creative heads of the show.

But wondering how to do that! No idea at all.

I think the show might be helped by new, fresh ideas...

Have a great day and take care!

Vera

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Vera

@Archanafan

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Posted: 15 years ago

#13

An exciting track revolving around Shravni will be posted soon...

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Jasmine10

@Jasmine10

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Posted: 15 years ago

#14

Interesting ideas and very good writing.

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Aarti

@helloaamir

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Posted: 15 years ago

#15

Hey! Good job on both of them, but I liked the first idea better :) I like that Aai will find out that Girish was lying to them because he wants Shrav to get married, and Manav will realize he doesnt have to marry her... :)

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Priya

@nycsweetie

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Posted: 15 years ago

#16

g8 ideas but i like #1 better....would def like to see it implemented in the show

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zaara10

@zaara10

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Posted: 15 years ago

#17

great ideas for the show!!! wish the cvs were as creative and smart as u! i was hooked on every word written, and could just picture it all as i read it. the child dying is really sad, but i understand it would be important for the storyline. in an idea i had, i was thinking shravni should "die" and leave the baby for manav and archu to raise, then later, we find out shravni's not dead and comes back to claim the baby.... i just hope they move the story towards an archu-manav marriage soon, so we can see post-marital issues. there's plenty of story if the cvs do it right!!!

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tisha.sha

@tisha.sha

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Posted: 15 years ago

#18

i like ittttttttttt👏

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Writer42

@Writer42

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Posted: 15 years ago

#19

Originally posted by: Archanafan
We have one more storyline for Shravni and Manav and it will be quite a surprise. A twist, so to speak.

Will post it soon for all of you to have fun reading.

Thanks for all the positive comments.

Looking forward to it. Great writing. I hope the writers pick up on your superbly creative tracks and ideas.