PR FANFIC
PART 1
It was the Karanjkars' household. "Archana! Did u see my spects?" yelled Baba.
"Archu, get Punni ready for school" called out Manju. "Archu Thai, is my tiffin ready?", asked Versha from her room." Oh God!, thai did u see my pink salwar?" shouted Vaishali. Sulochana, who was returning from temple saw her daughter Archana running here and there doing all the work. Archana was a girl of 25 yet unmarried because she is not educated. She is only 8th standard. She left her studies to take care of her ill mother.
"I should get her married soon" thought Sulochana with a sigh. After finishing all the work Archu came to Sulochana ,"I'm going to temple aai. Today is Sankashti na."
"ok beta" said Sulochana.
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It was the Deshmukhs' household. Savita aai was yelling at her neighbour, "How dare you put your clothes infront of my house?". The neighbour replied,"Arre thai there is no place to put that is why I put it here." Savita, "If there is no place then put it on your head". "Thai, this is too much." The argument was going on. Manav, who was getting ready to go to garage came and took his aai in. Just then his brother Sachin came out, "Dada, today is my interview." Manav gives money for his use and wishes him all the best. Just then his sister Vandita came , "Dada, tomorrow is the last date for paying fees in college." "Don't worry Vandu I will get the money ready". Saying this, Manav left for temple before going to garage as that day was Sankashti.
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Archana and Manav walked towards the temple and they reached the place where Bappa's idol was there. They closed their eyes to pray. They opened their eyes simultaneously to see a flower falling from Bappa's feet. The Pundit looked at them both and said " Bappa has given blessings for you both. May you both live happily forever." At this, both were surprised and looked at each other. Manav was completely mesmerized by her beautiful eyes that he just kept staring at her. Archana had a feeling that she had already met him sometime before. Their eye lock was broken when they heard the temple bell ringing. They went away in their ways. Both could not understand what kind of feeling they were undergoing.
Archana went down the temple thinking about the guy she just met at the temple. Manav was completely taken away by her beauty. He was in a thought that he did not realize a car coming towards him with high speed. It seems that the driver has drunk. The car was getting near Manav. It was the last minute he noticed that the car was about to hit him?????.
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Hey friends, this is my first fanfic. Please comment on it. Shall I continue or not?