Mineil-os-Love confession ----(updated on pg 5) - Page 3

Originally posted by: N_sharmaa

It's was good 😆

Thank u

Originally posted by: Srilata.Mineil

It's lovely... ❤️

Thnx

Originally posted by: Vishal_m.neil

Khichdi for passing a time

(Neil niche wait kar raha hai of both sister. They all are going delhi)

Neil: are yaar jaldi karo, kitna time loge dono

Arya: Iam ready neil. Mai kaisi lag rahi hu?

Neil: ekdum princess. Badi madam aur kitna time logi

Arya: heroine apne sasural jane ke liye taiyar ho rahi hai. Time toh lagega na. Sundar jo dikhna hai

Mini: chutanki, bahut bolti ho tum. Are woh to bas kuch extra samaan carry karna tha isliye time lag gaya.

Neil: woh toh dikh raha hai, time samaan carry karne me laga ya kisi aur me. Ab chalo. (Neil whisper to her ear) waise, aaj bahut pretty lag rahi ho.

Mini: shutup. Ab chalo. ( She starts blushing)

Arya: mai corner pe baithungi.

Neil: mai bhi corner pe baithunga.

Mini: ooh ho. Jisko jahan baithna hai baitho. Babes ki mata rani. Aage sabkuch acha ho.. plz plz

(In a car ride, mini holds neil hand)

Neil: mini kya kar rahi ho, arya dekh legi.

Mini: woh so rahi hai. Agar dekhti bhi toh kya. Use sab maloom hai. Shaitan ki nani hai.

(She kept her head on his shoulder)

Neil: but tumne toh bola tha, mini ko impress karna itna asaan nhi hai.

Mini: u... Jao, mujhe tumse baat nhi karni.

Neil: are sorry sorry.. ( he laughs and hug her)

Mini: u better be.

(He kiss on her forehead and they sleep on same posture for rest of the journey)

It was good ❤️

Very very good .👍🏼

Originally posted by: sub_94

Very very good .👍🏼

Thnx

Acche se likha hai. Something I wanted to see in show. How Mineil fell for each other aur woh kaun sa pal tha ? You have written all of it so well👏 show mein kuchh aisa hi mile toh accha hoga.

Read this once again and imagined this beautiful scene on MiNeil

(mini goes in Neil's room to wake him up. She touch his head but notices, he is having a fever. Neil woke up)

Neil: Mini tum mere room me. What happen?

Mini: Woh mai tumhe uthane aayi thi. 9 baj gaye.

Neil: Oh no. Aaj toh restaurant me bahut kaam hai. Mujhe jaldi ready hona padega.

Mini: Neil, listen. I think tumhe fever hai. Aaj restaurant mat jao. Plz take rest. We will manage.

Neil: No it's ok. Bas thodi si weakness hai. You go and get ready. I will be there within 30 minutes.

Mini: But yaar, aisi halat me kaise kaam karoge. No,, take rest.

Neil: Mai kar leta rest. But aapka staff, unme responsibility naam ki koi chiz nhi hai. Ek din bhi restaurant na jao toh woh lazy ho jaate hai. Kaam ko seriously nhi lete. I can't take risk with the restaurant. Iam coming. Now, excuse me, mujhe fresh hona hai.

(Neil goes to bathroom for freshnup)

Mini: yeh bhi na bahut ziddi hai. Aisi halat me bhi isko kaam karna hai. Meri toh sunni hi nhi hai.

(She was really worried for him... Mini hall me uska wait karti hai)

Neil: let's go. Iam ready.

(They both came out.)

Mini: ooh hello. Kya kar rahe ho.

Neil: apni bike le raha

Mini: yadaast na bahut kamjoor hai tumhari. Remember jab mai sick thi toh tumne mujhe apni bike se jabardasti drop kiya tha. Now it's my chance. Rakho bike aur chalo chup chap scooty se.

Neil: as u wish mini madam. (He was happy to go with her)

Mini: baith gaye. Now hold me.

Neil: what, are u mad. Never. Log kya kahenge. Already mohalle walo ne baate bnana suro kar dia hai.

Mini: I don't care. Hold me tightly. Agar gir gaye na, toh uthane bhi nhi aaongi mai. Now hold. ( He holds her waist.) Yaha nhi, shoulder pe pakdo.

Neil: Ajeeb ladki hai. Pehle khud bolti hai hold me I don't care. Aur ab mna kar rahi.

Mini: shutup. Hold my shoulder. ( He hold her and then they both goes to the restaurant.)

(After reaching restaurant)

Mini: Neil, plz aaj work mat karo. You genuinely need rest. Mere cabin me rest kar lo. Rest of the staff will manage the restaurant. Tabtak mai Dr. ko bulati hu.

Neil: Nhi, dr ko mat bulao. Iam fine. Aur aapke staff se kaam toh rehne hi do. Sab drama artist hai. Woh simpy, uska kab dil tut jaye aur use ghar jana ho. Kisi ko nhi pta. Nd aajkal tumhe meri itni fikar Q hone lagi.

Mini: Fikar. Mujhe haq hai tumhari fikar karna ka Because i....

Neil: i.... i kya .....

Mini: kya i... i.. iam your friend cum landlady cum boss. Aur in sabke naate tumhari care karna mera haq hai.

Neil: ooh ... Mujhe lga ki tum kuch aur bologi.

Mini: kuch aur kya bologi. Tum na jyada dimag mat chalao. Already tabiyat kharab hai. Rest toh karna hai nhi. Meri toh kabhi sunna hai nhi. Jao... Go to the kitchen, tumhara woh kabse wait kar rahi hai. Apna nhi toh uska hi rakh lo dhyan.

Neil: ok fine..... Ja hi raha tha mai.

(He goes with a smiling face. Speaks 2 himself)

Neil: tumhare i ka matlab I Love U tha mini

(Mini was watching him go)

Mini: mujhe tumhe I love u bolna tha Neil. Tumse gale lagkar jabardasti rest karwana tha. But ... U...

Apni feelings tumse share karne ki himmat mujhe kab aayegi, pta nhi....

( She goes 2 her cabin with heavy heart)

(Coffee pite pite mini goes into flashback. Initially kaise dono ek dusre se ladte the. Mini ka neil ko fire karna. Neil ke ghar jaake usko jagakar warning dena that stay away from arya. How she taunt her that u don't know the pain to loosing someone. At this moment she really feels bad that neil had a bitter experience of loosing family more than her. Then she remembers, how neil lifts her when she was sick. Kaise usne cake bnaya tha. Usko apne ghar as a tenant lana. Arya mini ka jhagda. Neil ka mini ko support karna. Uski problem sunna and motivate karna. Accident news, toe ring and holi moment. All this were started to appear in her mind. She was happy as finally she has fallen for love. Suddenly she heard someone crying in the restaurant.)

(Simpy was crying. Usko firse kisine reject kar diya. All staff were consoling her except Neil as he was busy in kitchen.)

Geeta: Ro mat simpy. Isse better ladka tujhe mil jayega.

Mini: kya hua simpy didi. Why r u crying.

Simpy: Mini madam. Kal jo ladka dekhkar gaya tha. Usne bhi reject kar dia mujhe. Sab hi mujhe reject kar rahe. Usko mere ghusse se problem hai. Aap hi bolo madam. Maine kabhi ghussa kiya kya.

(Mini was watching Neil. He was smiling by seeing her. She remembers how he told her, tumhara staff kaamchor hai and simpy ka kabhi bhi dil tut jata hai. She starts to feel anger on simpy and rest staff.)

Mini: Dekho simpy di....

(Suddenly neil faints. Mini run towards him. He falls on ground.)

Mini: Neil. Plz aakhe kholo. Neil. Neil. (She starts to cry). Khurshid miya, sundar, neil ko mere cabin me le jao. (She wipes tear.)

Mini: Listen simpy di. It's enough now. Aap restaurant kaam karne aate ho. Personal life ke problem ko ghar par rakho. Akele aapki life me problems nhi hai. 1 baar theek hai, 2 baar theek hai. Lekin yeh toh hadd ho gayi. Aapne ise har baar ka natak bna liya hai. Aur aap sab bhi, restaurant me itna kaam hai, kaam chodkar lag gaye inhe manane. Neil ki tabiyat kharab hai. Mai subhah se use rest karne ko insest kar rahi. But uske liye pehli priority kaam hai. Agar aap log kaam karoge hi nhi, toh restaurant kaise chalega. Sirf uss akele ke bharose chod doge kya.

Simpy: par Mini madam. Rishta tutne ka dard toh hota hai na.

Mini: Iam warning you last time simpy di. Kaam karne aati ho, kaam karo. Aur aap sab bhi, agar mujhe koi kaam chodkar baaki kaam karte dikha, toh agle din se use restaurant aane ki jarurat nhi. Aur ha, neil ab 2 din restaurant nhi aayega. Uske nhi rehte bhi, mujhe saare kaam proper chaiye, i don't want a single complaint. Now go and get back 2 work.

(Mini calls a Dr. and she gets back 2 cabin.)

Mini: Neil Dr is coming. Subhah se bol rahi tumhe, take rest. But tumhe toh meri sunni hi nhi hai. Sunoge bhi q lagti hi kya hu mai tumhari. Meri feelings ki parvah toh hai nhi tumhe. Kabhi socha hai, agar tumhe kuch ho jaye toh mera kya hoga. I want an answer neil. (She starts to cry.)

(Neil wipes her tears and hug her.)

Neil: Iam sorry mini. Mai tumhari har baat manunga, but plz don't cry. Mai tumhe rote hue nhi dekh sakta. Tumhari feelings ki mujhe bhi bahut parvah hai mini. Tum mere heart ki sabse close ho. But mini, mujhe restaurant ki bhi chinta hai. Agar mai kaam nhi karunga toh restaurant kaise chalega. Aur restaurant na chale toh hamare financial needs kaise pure honge.

Mini: Now plz, you don't worry for the restaurant. Aaj maine staff ki ache se class li hai. I need u more than the restaurant. Agar tum mere saath ho, toh mujhe kisi baat ki chinta nhi hai. I know, if we both are together, we can manage all crisis.

Neil: I will always be there for you mini, promise. (He hugs her tightly.)

(Then Dr. Arrives and check neil. He gives him injection and medicines.)

Dr: aap medicines time pe lena. Also, tumhe 2 din strictly rest lena hai.

Mini: Ab toh sunna na Dr ne kya kaha. Rest lena hai strictly. Thanx Dr...

(Dr leaves.)

Neil: Ok madam. I will. Anything else u want me to take.

Mini: As of now nothing. But you don't know. Chalo ghar. You need rest.

Neil: ok but tumhe bhi mere saath ghar par rahena hoga. Ok...

Mini: ok baba...

( She was happy to spend a time with him. They both leaves.)

{ Show is off air and we will not get any mineil moment now. Apne emotions ko bahut hi control karke likha hai maine. Hope u all will like it.}

This was so beautiful . Neil going in Mini's scooty something me and @zalima wanted to seem so thank you for giving it here . Mini flashback was beautiful their journey Neil's smile to Mini and again indirect love you confession thing in MiNeil style was beautiful .

Originally posted by: N_sharmaa

This was so beautiful . Neil going in Mini's scooty something me and @zalima wanted to seem so thank you for giving it here . Mini flashback was beautiful their journey Neil's smile to Mini and again indirect love you confession thing in MiNeil style was beautiful .

Thnx... There were many such scenes we fans wanted. But now, it's not possible.

Hope, mineil comes with a new show.