SS- Parichay ek nayi shurwat-updated pg 3

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Posted: 12 years ago
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Guys given the precap I wanted come up with this...
Siddhi sitting on FN bed... pativrata nari 😡
Abhay enters the room with an evil devilish sort of look
Siddhi realises that morron has stepped in her tension of loosing her maaan increases (itni tension hai toh shaadi kyun ki tu mata rani)
he comes close near to the bed... siddhis fist tightens as if she is going to punch him
abhay smiling woh siddhi actually tu thaki hui hogi na
waise woh indecent kunal tujhse kuch galat to kiya nahi na???
Siddhi: Throws a tight slap look at him with nari shakti types eyes and says in loud voice
haaa mein kunal se soke aayi hu
yes i slept with him consummated for the second time to become mother of his child and have come so? what ? what can u do?
she pushes him with her 2 hands ...and starts ...
u morron, abbe sale, kamine ke baaap, kya kya kya ghoor ke dekhraha hai tu...
u made me break my eldersons heart and my husbands heart by hostaging my second son right...
ok keep him with u ... I dont want my second son. I am a lawyer I can get back my son u rogue.. i m neither ur wife nor u r my husband I M leaving u and ur deewan dracula right now if you can do anything do shows him middle finger and takes a pack which has green colored saree she takes it from kunals room
she goes to changing room changes and drapes that green saree, comes out and says now Mr. ABHAY DEEWAN sala gadheda , wait and watch today you have taken panga with a wife , a mother and u insulted my husband Kunal chopda.
I lost all my respect and I dont deserve such a wonderful persons love in my life . I broke his heart just by getting trapped with u and ur demon mom.
says I have already lodged compalint in women protection cell on kidnapping, attempt to rape and attempt to murder too.
ABHAY AND SULEKHA:
Sulekha shameless lady jumps in without any shame and asks whats wrong siddhi y are u behaving and shouting like this
Abhay stands there like a heartfailure brain dead stone
sulekha asks abhay no response
SUlekha asks siddhi
Siddhi comes forward and GIVES A TIGHT SLAP LEFT RIGHT CENTRE to sulekha and starts
are u a woman? I think u might have had an illegal relation and u have killed ur husband that y u were in jail i thought u to be a kind hearted lady and gave u dignity of a mother but u r a disgrace shit
I m leaving if u dont give me my son no issues police will take care of ur son ..simple as that and leaves .
NEXT DAY
Kunal still cant believe what he saw is true Anand is shattered and nfront of the family
Anand says how can mom do like this. YEsterday tooo I spoke to anand he was saying that Abhay and SUlekha were threatening Mom that they will not leave Him if mom has to come to us she has to leave anand and all
on hearing this Kunal turns bit suspicious looking at ANand and asks what?
ANand repeats the statement again and Veena asks who is this anand?
Seema intervenes and says she is twin brother of our ANand raised by deewans
Veena dumb struck with shock and spine pain she sits on the sofa
KUNAL SUPER DUPER ANGRY AND BURSTS OUT LIKE STORM IN DEEWAN HOUSE
Siddhi Siddhi Siddhi wehre aare u?
Abhay : STOP RIGHT THERE what did u do to siddhi yesterday
KUNAL: CLuelesss look what did i do she married u yesterday so u might be knowing right
ABHAY : KUnal dont act smart YEseterday post u left seema came here and blasted siddhi post which siddhi begged us to go in search of u
later in the middle of the night she came with a pack et in her hand a green color saree given by u and she slapped me my mother and draped in that saree and said she slept with u and all and she left deewan house in the middle of the night.
KUNAL: WHAT MEEE AND SIDDHI CONSUMATED oh oh oh my god oh my god 😆 so in that drunken state I and siddhi Oh my good god ...what a pleasant news thanku thank thank u abhay for htis news coz i was drunk so i didnt realise so i slept with my ex and ur current wife and my life time love my siddhi ...oh no...what a great news
in the mean while
police comes in asking for abhay
Sulekha abhay shocked looking at them and kunal too looked at them as to whats new ramayan is happening...
Police to Abhay:
Mr. Abhay deewan where is ANAND CHOPDA aka ANAND DEEWAN, Siddhi's son
KUNA:L: 😲
Abhay: Police office i dont know anything about anand i m also worred about him
Siddhi comes in saying STOP NONSENSE U ROGUE
KUNAL 😲
Police to siddhi :
Madam u said this crook abhay blackmailed u threatend u and married by taking sign on papers n kidnapped ur son
siddhi: YEs Inspector. he did all that i have mentioned I Have the proof for that and she switches on the mobile recordings based on which they ask him to release ANAND else he will be under trouble anyways as the FIR is filed against him
Sulekha: how can u do this we did so much for you
SIdhdi: Oh pls just shut up u insane selfish lady u kept mty son with u and raised him becoz u r psycho son needed some divertion not for me
UR psycho son has to take me to the location where he held hostage of my son right now
Abhay with no other go takes police siddhi kunal and sulekha tooo to the place adn shows AD
AD crying like hell runs to his mother caallling mooom save me 😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭
Siddhi: BEta nna nana dont cry UR mama is there she will take care see here is ur father tooo and she keeps anands hand in KUnals hand
with utter guilt in her eyes ... and she doesnt ever dare to look at Kunal
Kunal looking at his second son gets tooo emotional and hugs him caresses him places kisses on his forehead ... and turns to abhay and says
Abbey ABHAY nalayak mar ja tu sala nikal yaha se suwar ke bacche
u have given so much pain to my son and my wife
Police takes ABHAY N SULEKHA AWAY
KUNAL TO SIDDHI:
Siddhi woh mein ... y did nt u reveal all this to me?
what do u think of urselves all the time u keep taking decissions on ur own and breaks my heart I m really angry with u upsed with u
SIddhi: I Think Kunal U have to leave with ur second son
Kunal: then what about u ?
Siddhi: SOrry Kunal I Cant come with u now i have to file for divorce wtth that screwed up ass abhay
and i have to live my life i dont say that i dont love u and all ..I LOVE U SO MUCH But i dont deserve to be with u for whatever i did to u
after yesterday i have decided ...definetely i will come to u coz u r my destiny
but i have insulted ur love many times i have insulted our marital relation and even mother hood
so i m punishing my selves by staying away from u and kids.
I have come with papers which says that kids custody is handoverd to you and they will spend time with me only on sundays. till we both reunite.
GIven the state that I m in though in my heart i accept u as my husband I Cant live with you all I Lost that right yesterday. I lost that respect tooo Kunal pls dont deny this
I will meet u tallkto u yet i need some space to forget all that i have done and forgive myself please kunal understand my statek
KUnal proudly looks at her and asks her as to wehre is she staying>? how will she survive?
Siddhi says Dont worry kunal I met dadaji retd judge remember who handled our divorce case years ago..he gave me a job in his firm and also said i can stay in his house as he doesnt have anybody to take care of him also he is adopting me as his daughter.
I m in safe hands with base of survival and she leaves from there
KUnal too reaches chopda house wit this son and explains what all has happend all of them gets cnovinced
Kunal calls someone and says that he already started hs process of reopening ROHITS MURDER CASE
Decides that now enough of drinking and weeping now i have to prove myself as an advocate successful lawyer and have to man up makes ure my kids get the best education luxury facitlites so that if at all siddhi comes back she should have that relief feeling that I stood up for my family. 😛
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Edited by Sreearabhi - 12 years ago

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Posted: 12 years ago
#2

Wonderful beautifully written

I m wondering given the current state of the show how can some one snap out a track thats moves to bring back life in to it.
Seriously EKTA should hire u as a creative head
I have read all ur FFs SS OS
I have been a silent reader in thie forum since the day i joined the forum but today ur SS made me and forced me to write ths comment and ur efforts to bring life to parichay are just amazing
what should i say dear ...about u ... I have been through your profile u r such a commandable writer even in management i m left spechless .
GReat job sree
please pM me the next update.
Edited by ram05 - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
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hi

you left me speechless. haha. loved it. keep it up

norzar
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Originally posted by: norzar

hi


you left me speechless. haha. loved it. keep it up

norzar

Norene,
How come our brains are thinking super faster and logical than theirs? I wonder ROFL
And also , if we can come up with such tracks why not they?
if they show a woman standing up for her self esteem to redeem herself and a Man who was shown to be fallen types if he stands up for his family and tries to look at life with hope
I Bet TRPs will shoot dear.
But these insane a-z morons dont do i know
sree
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Posted: 12 years ago
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👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏

Wonderful fantabulous and marvellous dashing sort of update i must say sreeI Have a doubt.. you dont get sleep during nights? 😉😃😆

Daily I m seeing you very active day n nights GOD hatss off to ur love on this parichay

Woah you cleared the entire mess in the story line with one chutki but those pimps arent
apply for creative head job with BT
we will get amazing tracks alteast gender insult doesnt happen
OMG todays show wasso heart wrenching sick cvs n ekta😡
lets not take her name here 🤢
but wonderful some thing like this should happen in show tooo
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Originally posted by: smgayatri72

👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏

Wonderful fantabulous and marvellous dashing sort of update i must say sree

I Have a doubt.. you dont get sleep during nights? 😉😃😆

Daily I m seeing you very active day n nights GOD hatss off to ur love on this parichay

Woah you cleared the entire mess in the story line with one chutki but those pimps arent
apply for creative head job with BT
we will get amazing tracks alteast gender insult doesnt happen
OMG todays show wasso heart wrenching sick cvs n ekta😡
lets not take her name here 🤢
but wonderful some thing like this should happen in show tooo

THanks Gayatri,
great that you loved it.
Me applying as Cv? that to for BT?
I will slap her and come out even if she offers me a job LOL
Cant bear that ladies name also
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Originally posted by: ram05

Wonderful beautifully written

I m wondering given the current state of the show how can some one snap out a track thats moves to bring back life in to it.
Seriously EKTA should hire u as a creative head
I have read all ur FFs SS OS
I have been a silent reader in thie forum since the day i joined the forum but today ur SS made me and forced me to write ths comment and ur efforts to bring life to parichay are just amazing
what should i say dear ...about u ... I have been through your profile u r such a commandable writer even in management i m left spechless .
GReat job sree
please pM me the next update.

Thanks ram,
am glad that you liked this take
thank u so much that u liked my mgmt articles tooo
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Akka sach mein wat a FF 👏 i m dying to sth lik tis nw. Those women have really left us fume a lot and itna ghussa aa rahi hain ki saamne mili use tappad maraoon
N siddhi ne uss so called GM aur chipkoo ko tappad maari my wish thi ki they get it frm kc
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Originally posted by: sinan_sinal

Akka sach mein wat a FF 👏 i m dying to sth lik tis nw. Those women have really left us fume a lot and itna ghussa aa rahi hain ki saamne mili use tappad maraoon
N siddhi ne uss so called GM aur chipkoo ko tappad maari my wish thi ki they get it frm kc

Hahahah I Know sindhu, we rfrustrated to the core. with that frustration i wrote this u know throught out the night i was sending petitons to all news channels n so on women orgs.
DIdnt sleep til now i will try to sleep.
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Posted: 12 years ago
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i like it bt this s not happen...bcoz cvs not do this...

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