Kehte hain yeh ishq jise... - Page 3

Originally posted by: BHAVI1972

Khamoshi khud ek saja hain

jo wakt per kaho nahi woh kya baat hain?

Baat jo dil mein ho, woh zuban tak na aye to woh kya baat hain?

Originally posted by: BHAVI1972

Khamoshi khud ek saja hain

jo wakt per kaho nahi woh kya baat hain?

Baat jo dil mein ho, woh zuban tak na aye to woh kya baat hain?

Originally posted by: sks18

@ Bhavi: Wah wah... 👏

So, you finally seem to have wakened the poet in you... good!!!!!

I'd like to share something too...

"Kuch fasle sirf aakho se hote hai,

Dil ke fasle do baato se hote hai,

Koi lakh bhulane ki koshish kare,

Par kuch rishte khatam sirf sanso se hote hai..."

Originally posted by: sks18

@ Riddhi: You are a good poet, just need a bit of confidence in you.

Here's something from my side for you on taking some pains for replying in a poetic way...

"Jo safar ki shuruwat karte hai,

Woh manzil ko paar karte hai,

Ek baar chalne ka housla rakho,

Musafiron ka to raste bhi intezar karte hai..."

Shobhit

haye haye shobit jee what a poem too good i cant think dis even in my dreams also 😛

Originally posted by: purvimehta

Ridz tu toh bahot lucky hai yaar...yeh shobhit jaise mahaan lekhak ne kabhi mujhe bhi itnaa motivate nahin kiya jitna yeh tere talent ko motivate kar raha hai...issi baat pe ek aur ho jaaye!!😉😆

tumne mujhe movitivation diya
jaise besahare ko sahara mila
pyaar chodo
humein toh acha dildar mila
ishhq vishq kuch nahi hota
hota hain sirf sacha yaar
jisse ho jaatta hain haule se pyaar

its too bad

Hey sorry Purvi - for spamming your thread i know we have your permission but still feel bad that we post here some utpatang thing which is no where close to your hard work -

Originally posted by: purvimehta

Wah wah wah!!

Aarz kiya hai...

Kabhi kabhi yun bhi hamne aapne jee ko behlayaa hai..

kabhi kabhi yun bhi hamne aapne jee ko behlayaa hai

jo baat hum khud kabhi nahi samjhe woh auron ko samjhaaya hai

yeh mir aur ghaalib ke sheron ne kiskaa saath nibhaaya hai

sastee geeton ko likh likh kar hamne ghar banvaaya hai!!

Originally posted by: Mages

beauitful poem...love it completely...n i am surprised to see that Mr Akdoo Kunal Chopra is such a romantic guy...uff he melts me...i hope he confess his love soon to his wife...but then i am a bit greedy for SiNal romantic moments...so i can wait for at least a week...

Originally posted by: sandy118

haye haye shobit jee what a poem too good i cant think dis even in my dreams also 😛