My contribution to Kunal's diary :)

hey ppl,

hey realy good written...i realy loved last 4 lines ... they r too good...👏👏

hi u write really well.👏

simply superb...👏 loved it...😊

I've tired, god knows i've tired so much,

Originally posted by: sepiasunshine

hey ppl,

I penned this poem ages ago, thought of sharing it as part of kunal's diary. here it goes,

I've tired, god knows i've tired so much,

to close my eyes, to forget your touch,

to erase your smile, to turn off your charms,

to make blank the time spent in your arms.

Call halt to passion, to stop my heart,

don't hear it beating when we part,

stay cold to ardor, to bid it go

shut off my feelings, to tell them no.

But all's in vain, it just won't do,

i can't control my love for you.

instead of dwindling, it just grows

where will it lead to? heaven knows!!

But I've decided there's no way,

to curb its fervor, let it stay

you must believe me when i say,

i just can't help it, the love won't go away.

PS: purvi my creative cells are still at the bottom of the ocean 😉 😆, but i was encouraged enough to go through my rusty diary, n found this decent enough to share it. thanks 😊 for making me remember that i could write something else besides reports n memos 😆

Originally posted by: shamrish

I've tired, god knows i've tired so much,

to close my eyes, to forget your touch,

to erase your smile, to turn off your charms,

to make blank the time spent in your arms.

But I've decided there's no way,

to curb its fervor, let it stay

you must believe me when i say,

i just can't help it, the love won't go away.

Awesome Ramya.. 👍🏼
I liked the above 8 lines very much, not that other 8 were not good.. 👏👏
So after all , Titanic 3D and climbing 1000 stairs did have some effect?? 😉
If you attempt to climb to the top, i guess more rustic diaries probably would be uncovered from the bottom ...😉

PS: purvi my creative cells are still at the bottom of the ocean 😉 😆, but i was encouraged enough to go through my rusty diary, n found this decent enough to share it. thanks 😊 for making me remember that i could write something else besides reports n memos 😆

Purvi, are you reading this??
Do you need any more proof of your inspirational abilities?? 😉.. First Riddhi, then Shobhit and now Ramya... We forumwalas are lucky to get online kavi sammelan...

Originally posted by: purvimehta

Wow!!!👏👏👏..too good Ramya...I knew, the minute you mentioned Titanic...It had to be classic😆😆..one of its kind...see I guess I keep repeating myself...human is indeed talented, a little push and they can spread the colours everywhere..after reading this, I can vouch by the fact that indeed your Titannic was at the bottom of the ocean but its definitely not rusted!!...please do come up with more of these poems..infact I should say, eagerly waiting for the next one!!😊

@Amrish-after reading this poem, you will definitely have to change your views about my poems...this is a real talent..!! it is perfect..Ramya deserves the maha kaviyetri title rather than me...as far as inspiration goes, I have done nothing..talent will emerge sooner or later...sooner the better though😉. thats why I keep forcing you to equally contribute to this kavi sammelan!!😉

Originally posted by: sepiasunshine

thank you so much purvi 😃 like i said earlier i wrote this ages ago, i was full enthu n had great muses to inspire me not to forget plenty of time 😉

am a very slow writer...can't quick think like you 😛 by the time i finish pondering over what to write n end up with it...it will be couple of weeks at least 😛 so don't keep up ur hopes...and plz don't compare my armature writing to the classic titanic, titanic is incomparable to anything 😉

also don't embarrass me saying that i deserve maha kaviyetri title 😳 you are the un-dispute title holder of that 👏 👏 😃