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purvi mehta

@purvimehta

Voyager

Posted: 13 years ago

Hello Guys...

What a day it has been..with all this choked up cold and continuous sneeze sessions..!! anyway, enough of my miseries. we will get back to the business, poems!! today's poem of the day is a bit different. I have always wrote poems from Kunals point of view and never really dedicated anything to Kunal. I know that he is a complex personality, but he still deserves a poem too!! This particular one is going to be from Siddhi to Kunal. (hence the title..😛 )what does she really think of him? he is one amazing character with layers of personalities, but since he entered Siddhi's life, for Siddhi he has been her strength, her confidence and her complete support system, her true motivation..I am sure if we look back at the previous episodes, we will come across many instances which will actually prove this..

I have this time changed the language too.. surprisingly...I know many people like poems in Hindi as its a romantic language but I guess me trying my hand at writing in English wont be that bad after all. though, I would like to warn you all, Its been absolute ages since I have written anything in English so please bear with my grammatical mistakes and errors...so, here goes from Siddhi to Kunal...

I met this man across the ocean green,

with the eyes of burning desire, still full of beautiful dreams.

with his strong, hard, rough hands, he came and tapped my back.

and said, 'Life is full of grim, so take it easy as you can'.

I looked at him and thought for a while..

Is he hiding a sorrow behind his beautiful smile.

He tapped my back and asked me to forget my fears,

for life has more to offer than just pain, sorrows and tears.

I met this man at the shore of deep blue sea,

who taught me how to live life and survive the worldly grief!!

-Purvi

😕😕...sorry guys...I know its not the best but sharing, I guess still helps...😊

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Padmini

@d.padmini

Dazzler

Posted: 13 years ago

I don' think it is a dream.. but it might not be the way it is in promo ..
promo are shot separately , like the c-night promo or the Sidhi being shot by rohit promo..
though what was finaly shown to us was different from what was shown in the promo ,the concept or the core of the promo was correct
They did consummate.. but the way way it happened was entirely different
Sidhi was in fact shot but not by rohit
even the promo regarding kunal accepting charges ,,He did accept the charges but to provoke Richa..
So i guess confession is round the corner but will be entirely different from the way it is being shown in promo...

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ramya

@rainbowgirl

Rocker

Posted: 13 years ago

hey Purvi,

its a little melancholic but very well written 👏 👏

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purvi mehta

@purvimehta

Voyager

Posted: 13 years ago

Originally posted by: sepiasunshine
hey Purvi,

its a little melancholic but very well written 👏 👏

I know Ramyaa, I have been discussing melancholic poets since morning...so I guess, I myself ended up with one.😉 moreover I have been in that frame of mind all morning!! plus whenever I write thinking of Kunal Chopra in mind, his sorrows his sullenness, his anger his outbursts take me to his pensive world..😭. anyway..its got a hint of a little affirmation too..I thought of him like a ship in the midst of the ocean with abounding waves...fighting, struggling but not losing hope.

Thank you so much for liking it though!!😃

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Shobhit18

@Shobhit18

Dazzler

Posted: 13 years ago

Hey Purvi,I'm really sad to know that you are suffering from cough &.cold... 😕
Please, do take good care of yourself as you very well know that my & Amrish's active participation largely depends on your creative writings...(Sorry Amrish for dragging you up, but this is what we all were discussing since morning...)

Needless to mention, that I liked your above writing irrespective of how much melancholy it may sound...

As usual, would soon be spaming this brand new post of yours with my torturous writing as I come up with a fresh idea... 🤣

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purvi mehta

@purvimehta

Voyager

Posted: 13 years ago

Originally posted by: sks18
Hey Purvi,I'm really sad to know that you are suffering from cough &.cold... 😕
Please, do take good care of yourself as you very well know that my & Amrish's active participation largely depends on your creative writings...(Sorry Amrish for dragging you up, but this is what we all were discussing since morning...)

Needless to mention, that I liked your above writing irrespective of how much melancholy it may sound...

As usual, would soon be spaming this brand new post of yours with my torturous writing as I come up with a fresh idea... 🤣

Aww thanks Shobhit...I will take good care..the only thing I struggle with when I fall ill is the medication... believe it or no, I have these cold and flu capsules in my hand for the past 2hrs and I am still wondering if I really need them😆😆...thats the tragedy of my life..medicines dont suit me😉..you know what Mr. Raj Kapoor has taught us, the show must go on...!!😆. You are more than welcome to spam my thread as and when you like...you must remember our deal though...poetry kaa jawaab poetry..😆

Thanks for liking my poetry...😃

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shamrish

@shamrish

Rocker

Posted: 13 years ago

Originally posted by: sks18
Hey Purvi,I'm really sad to know that you are suffering from cough &.cold... 😕
Please, do take good care of yourself as you very well know that my & Amrish's active participation largely depends on your creative writings...(Sorry Amrish for dragging you up, but this is what we all were discussing since morning...)

Needless to mention, that I liked your above writing irrespective of how much melancholy it may sound...

As usual, would soon be spaming this brand new post of yours with my torturous writing as I come up with a fresh idea... 🤣

@Purvi, sorry to hear about your lingering sickness. Hope it is not spring allergies as they tend to last longer... take care ...Lots of ginger tea...

I liked your "Man of dreams " poem from Siddhi's POV... Again needless to say , relaxation and enjoyment is what we get on such threads like your's... which is missing these days in epi... I know lot of folks are excited with the new promo but as usual after this court case i have stopped getting excited..

@Shobhit : No worries Shobhit... You are bang on ... Purvi is inspiration for both of us...
I have other's too which i named in the other thread...

But as i also mentioned, Purvi writes so good when she is angry , frustrated, sick, headache etc...
Imagine what we would all get when she is fit and fine and healthy... Christmas, Diwali gift??

When Purvi Sahiba has given the permission to spam her thread, do you need any more permission?

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purvi mehta

@purvimehta

Voyager

Posted: 13 years ago

Originally posted by: shamrish

@Purvi, sorry to hear about your lingering sickness. Hope it is not spring allergies as they tend to last longer... take care ...Lots of ginger tea...

I liked your "Man of dreams " poem from Siddhi's POV... Again needless to say , relaxation and enjoyment is what we get on such threads like your's... which is missing these days in epi... I know lot of folks are excited with the new promo but as usual after this court case i have stopped getting excited..

@Shobhit : No worries Shobhit... You are bang on ... Purvi is inspiration for both of us...
I have other's too which i named in the other thread...

But as i also mentioned, Purvi writes so good when she is angry , frustrated, sick, headache etc...
Imagine what we would all get when she is fit and fine and healthy... Christmas, Diwali gift??

When Purvi Sahiba has given the permission to spam her thread, do you need any more permission?

thank you Amrish!! I think its a kind of flu bug that is on a round..I am hoping its not allergies of any sorts..the weather has been really funny too...last week its been bright and sunny...then it snowed for couple of days and now...its freezing cold...rough and windy...

that reminds me of William Shakespeare's poem that I read while at school...something like..'come hither come hither come hither...here shall he see no enemy but winter and rough weather!!😉. As I have said before, I think I can only write when I am feeling dull...remember reverse psychology!!..otherwise..I am just a lame Jane..😉

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Fariyal

@Fariyal

Dazzler

Posted: 13 years ago

Originally posted by: purvimehta
thank you Amrish!! I think its a kind of flu bug that is on a round..I am hoping its not allergies of any sorts..the weather has been really funny too...last week its been bright and sunny...then it snowed for couple of days and now...its freezing cold...rough and windy...
that reminds me of William Shakespeare's poem that I read while at school...something like..'come Hither come Hither come Hither...here shall he see no enemy but winter and rough weather!!😉. As I have said before, I think I can only write when I am feeling dull...remember reverse psychology!!..otherwise..I am just a lame Jane..😉

Under the greenwood tree

Who loves to lie with me,

And turn his merry note

Unto the sweet bird's throat,

Come hither, come hither, come hither.

Here shall he see

No enemy

But winter & rough weather.

"As you like it"...Act 2

Im so glad someone else here likes Shakespeare too😃

Wish you a speedy recovery Purvi, its all that pollen in the air, Im down with allergies too.

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purvi mehta

@purvimehta

Voyager

Posted: 13 years ago

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Originally posted by: Fariyal

Under the greenwood tree
Who loves to lie with me,
And turn his merry note
Unto the sweet bird's throat,
Come hither, come hither, come hither.
Here shall he see
No enemy
But winter & rough weather.

"As you like it"...Act 2
Im so glad someone else here likes Shakespeare too😃

Wish you a speedy recovery Purvi, its all that pollen in the air, Im down with allergies too.

@bold-hahaha perfect Fari.!! 😛

yup... Shakespeare has been one of my favourites right from school days..thank you for reminding me this poem..I am trying to mind it since morning..I could only think..come hither, come hither, come hither...forgot the greenwood tree..lol.

@green- thank you for that... I hope you feel better too!! do take care of yourself..

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