SINAL OS after court case- part 2 updt page 4

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sgumi82

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Posted: 13 years ago

#21

Originally posted by: pjssrk
great os jst luv the sinal moment hope cv's get us a bit near 2 it

thnx...yeah i wish cv's give us some passionate sinal moments. 😊

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stuti

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Posted: 13 years ago

#22

wow the OS is fab do continue soon..

Edited by stuti123 - 13 years ago

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Sonia Rachel John

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Posted: 13 years ago

#23

Originally posted by: sgumi82

hey dear..i will update it tonight .. abhi thak kuch aage likha bhi nahi naa...

4 din se isi scene ko imagine karti rahi..ab aage sochna hei ...
😳

oye...i've imagined teh 2nd part...but i wanna read ur imaginations...not mine...so cant post it here😆

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sgumi82

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Posted: 13 years ago

#24

Originally posted by: awesumsonia
oye...i've imagined teh 2nd part...but i wanna read ur imaginations...not mine...so cant post it here😆

i don't mind if u wanna do the 2nd part. u are alwayz welcome dear.
do u wanna?

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Sonia Rachel John

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Posted: 13 years ago

#25

Originally posted by: sgumi82

i don't mind if u wanna do the 2nd part. u are alwayz welcome dear.
do u wanna?

nahi nahi...i'll write another OS...but i want to read the 2nd part written by Savi n not by Sona

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sgumi82

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Posted: 13 years ago

#26

Originally posted by: awesumsonia
nahi nahi...i'll write another OS...but i want to read the 2nd part written by Savi n not by Sona

will update the 2nd part tonight for sure. 😳

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-Rojaa-

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Posted: 13 years ago

#27

Great os , I hope we will get to see something like this on coming episodes. Waiting for the next part. Pls upload soon

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Riddhi (Ridzz)

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Posted: 13 years ago

#28

super dear it very fantastic cant wait till next for this part -

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sgumi82

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Posted: 13 years ago

#29

Part 2 :--

Kunal asks: Aur kaha.. as his heart is pounding in pain looking at siddhi who is badly hurt and in pain.
Siddhi puts her hands on both of her shoulders in a cross..looking at kunu...tears roll down her cheeks..( kunal gets what she is trying to say to him)...
She turns her back and removes the hair which is hiding her back...as she moves her hair...kunal gets to see bruises all over her back...he closes his eyes ...not able to see siddhi in that condition.

Siddhi turns to face kunal...
Siddhi: Isliye mei keh rahi thi mei laga lungi.., plzz aap mujhe ointment de dijiye.
Kunal opens his eyes... he looks directly into siddhi's eyes with pain. Siddhi lowers her eyes as she tries to control her tears.
Kunal moves forward, turns siddhi..moves her hair and gently tries to touch the wound. As his fingers touch her tender back...siddhi feels as if someone touched her heart.., and relieving her off the pain.
She closes her eyes, as the emotion of happiness flows out as a tear drop from her eyes.
As he is done with applying the ointment, he touches her shoulder to turn her towards him.
Siddhi ke aasoon dekhte hi uske aankhein bhar aate hei. He tries to slightly mover her saree blouse on her shoulder part ..so as to see the wound. Siddhi turns away her face on the other side,
hesitating at the same time but happy to feel the touch of her love.
Kunal: Ab tum sojao ( waiting for siddhi to look at him)
Siddhi lies on the bed, looking innocently at him. He covers her with the comforter.
He turns around -- about to leave when siddhi holds his hand. Kunal looks back at siddhi
Kunal: Kya baat hei?
siddhi: Kya mei aapse ek sawal puch sakthi hoon.
Kunal: Haan pucho na, ismei puchne wali kya baat hei.
Siddhi: Jab mujhe kidnap kiya gaya tha aur mei yaha ghar pe nahi thi, tho aapne mujhe miss kiya kya?
Kunal heart skips a beat not able to believe what siddhi just said.
Siddhi: Ek sec ke liye bhi aap ne mujhe yaad kiya kya, miss kiya mujhe..bataiye na ?
Kunal:Siddhi tum sojao, hum kal baat karenge. Tum abhi rest karlo.
Kunal walks to his half-bed and lies down...as his eyes still lay on siddhi. A smile crops up his lips just to see his wife safe and in front of his eyes.
(to himself--- kya jawab doo siddhi...kaise bataoo kis tarah mei ne tumhe miss kiya.)

Next morning seema knocks on their door, kunal rushes to open the door. Even before seema could say a word, he makes his way out closing the bedroom door behind him and says
Kunal: seema sshhh... siddhi so rahi hei. Mei nahi chahta ki woh itni subah subah uthe.
Seema: (Very happy to see this avatar of Kunal) thik hei bhaiyaa..mei siddhi ko nahi uthaungi, bus dekhne aayi thi ki woh thik hei ki nahi.
Kunal: Haan kal se thoda better hei pur, use koi nahi uthayega...aur use office bhi jane mat dena. Ek do din aram karne de use. Bahut kamzor dikh rahi hei.
Seema: Kya baat hei kunal bhaiya...biwi ki seva kiye ja raha hei.., waise seva aur bahut pyar karna bhi chahiye...siddhi deserve bhi karti hei.. hei na bhaiya.
Kunal: wahi toh kar raha hoon...
Seema: matlab aap siddhi se pyar karte hei... ( giving a smile)
Kunal: seema...tu baat ka koi bhi matlab nikal deti hei...kuch nahi ho saktha hei tera.
Seema : Sach bolo toh bhi daant padte hei is ghar mei.huh...
kunal: haan haan bus, ab mujhe jane de ..varna office ke liye late hojaunga.
Seema: Kya bhaiya aap siddhi ko chodke office kaise jaa sakthe hei.

kunal: Siddhi nahi jayegi...kaha tha..mei nahi jaunga toh nikal denge office se. waise is case ki wajah se bahut si chutti leli, ab kaam tho karlu thoda sa jiska mujhe tankha milta hei.
Seema walks back into the kitches giving him a angry look.

Kunal is all ready.. he walks to the bed and looks at siddhi who is still asleep.
He moves his hand, touches her forehead talks to himself ( apna khayal rakhna siddhi, mei jaldi ajaungi aaj).

He walks out of his room, looks at seema in the kitchen--
Kunal: seema..zara siddhi ka khyal rakhna.. use koi kaam karne mat dena . plzz. Mei office ke liye nikal raha hoon.
Seema: Haan hum sab siddhi ka dekh baal karenge, aap jaiye. Tension mat lena bhaiya.
Kunal smiles in return and walks out of the door.

After an hour siddhi wakes up, turns around in search of kunal. She does not find him around.
She thinks ...kaha gaye hei kunal...walks into the living room
Siddhi: Seema bhabhi..kunal kaha hei?
Seema: Arey siddhi tu uth gayi hei, kaise feel kar rahi hei?
Siddhi: Mei thik hoon bhabhi, bus thodasa weakness hei aur kuch nahi. Waise kunal kaha hei..?
Seema: kunal bhaiya office gaye hei, tum fresh up karle..breakfast ready hei.
Siddhi ( thinking..office chale gaye, mujhe uthaya kyun nahi)...feels little down..and walks away to her room.

In the afternoon during lunch time kunal calls seema to find out abt siddhi.
Seema: Haan bhaiya siddhi thik hei, aap siddhi ko hi phone kariye naa..
Kunal: arey mei use disturb nahi karna chahta hoon..isliye tumhe phone kiya.
Seema: haan haan...boliye aur jhoot boliye..mei pagal hoon jo dono miya biwi ke beech phas gayi.
Kunal laughs and hangs the phone.
Kunal is happy to know siddhi is safe and sound at home.
Its almost 5.00 pm in the evening..Siddhi is getting bored in her room..so she just thinks to go on to the terrace for some fresh air.
She goes without informing seema who is occupied with her kids in their room.

Kunal walks into the house and rushes to his room to see siddhi.
He looks around the room, does not find siddhi..so looks around the whole house..and calls out for seema.
Kunal: Seema...siddhi kaha hei ?
Seema: aapke kamre mei hi hogi.
Kunal: Arey woh waha nahi hei..pura ghar dundh liya kahi nahi hei.
Seema: Toh uske cell pe call kijiye naa..
Kunal tries to reach siddhi's cellphone..but they just hear the phone ringing in their bedroom.
Kunal: Arey siddhi ka mobile toh yehi hei...
Seema: Mei dekhti hoon aaju baju kahi gayi hogi..she walks out to the street to look around.
Kunal becomes restless ...not able to have a control over his anger and concern.
Seema walks back into the house saying..nahi kahi pe bhi nahi hei bhaiya.
Kunal says he will check if she is on the terrace.
Kunal reaches the terrace, as soon as he finds siddhi there...just enjoying the light breeze..he gets relieved.

Siddhi turns back to see kunal.
Siddhi: Arey aap,agaye office se. ( walks towards him)
Kunal gives her a serious stare..grabs her by her hand and takes her downstairs.
Siddhi not able to understand what happened to kunal all of a sudden.
He takes her to their bedroom and closes the door.

Siddhi: Kya baat hei kunal, aap itne gusse mei kyun hei?
Kunal tries to cool down..but not able to help himself...
Kunal: ( in a serious tone says) tum aise kyun karti hei siddhi?
Siddhi: Mei ne kya kiya ...mujhe kuch samajh nahi aa raha hei?
Kunal: yehi toh problem hei..tu kuch samajhti nahi..
Siddhi: kya?
Kunal: mei office se ghar aaya..dekha toh tu ghar pe nahi hei..tumhara mobile bhi yehi hei...kisiko yeh nahi pata tu kaha pe hei..tera tabiyat bhi thik nahi hei
aur puchti ho..tune kya kiya.
Siddhi: woh mei thoda fresh air ke liye terrace pe gayi..aur kuch nahi.
Kunal: Seema ko batake jaati...kahi dikhayi nahi dii..toh tumhe pata hei mujh pe kya guzra hei?
Siddhi is shocked to see kunal ..as he was getting restless..
Siddhi: mei thodi der ke liye dikhayi nahi di tohh...aapko itna farak kyun pad raha hei?
/kunal looses his cool..and yells out : haan tu yehi sochti hei na ki mujhe koi farak nahi padtha, mei bata du tumhe ki..tu galat sochti hei.

Siddhi dumb struck..looks at kunal.

to.be.continued...

savi...😊

Note: Apologies for any typo errors.

Edited by sgumi82 - 13 years ago