FF...on sinal updated on pg 3 - Page 2

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Posted: 13 years ago
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Part 3:--

Kunal asks siddhi to go ahead and sleep. Siddhi lies down and closes her eyes still holding onto kunal's hands. Kunal keeps staring at siddhi who is fast asleep
and thinks ...
"Ek pyari si surat Ek masoom sa chehra, Do jheel si aankhein, Kuch meethi baatein, Ek nazuk ada, Kuch masti kuch maza, thodi si shararat, sab se alag sab se juda, jiski hai pyari har ek ada...woh hei meri biwi Mrs.siddhi kunal chopra."

A smile crops up his lips ...he just gets deep down in thoughts looking at siddhi.

Next morning siddhi wakes up to find kunal asleep on the chair beside her bed and she still holding his hands real tight. slowly releases her hands and gets off the bed making sure not to disturb kunal.
After couple of hours kunal wakes to find the room empty, he walks into the living room and finds siddhi helping Seema in the kitchen. He freshens up and comes to living room where everyone is seated for breakfast.
Siddhi is preparing ginger tea for him. He walks upto siddhi and asks her slowly if she is feeling better.
Siddhi : Haan mei thik hoon. aap beithiye mei apke liye adrak wali chai leke aati hoon.

Kunal just nods and walks upto the dining table as the smile is still onn. Seema and Raj are watching this whole scene.

Seema: Kya baat hei aajkal pati pati kis duniya mei reh rahe hei. Siddhi ka toh thik hei hamesha smile karti hei. Magar kunal bhaiya aap... aap kabse smile karne lage.

Kunal: Kyun mei ithna khadoos hoon kya ..smile toh karta hoon hamesha.

In the meantime siddhi gets tea for kunal and gives it to him.

Seema: Haan haan waise subah subah khubsurat biwi itni pyar se chai pilayegi toh smile toh karenge hi naa..

Kunal..Seema...chup nahi beith sakthi...

Seema: haan sab kuch tum karte ho...aur chup mujhe rehna padta hei, its not fair kunal bhaiya.

Raj and seema laugh out and raj asks seema if she and the kids are ready.

Kunal: Kyun kaha jaa rahe ho aap sab log.

Raj: Hum sab tumhare maasi ke ghar jaa rahe hei.

Kunal: Dombivali wali maasi..

Raj: Haan..aur shayad aaj raat wahi pe rukenge. Aapko bhi leke jaate magar kisi ko ghar pe
bhi rehna chahiye naa isliye.
Kunal: Thik hei magar raat ko ajaiye aap sab..ghar pe bore hota hei bacchon ke bina.

Seema: Arey wah kunal bhaiya..., aaj kal aap bore kaha hote hei ...( Kunal gives her a huh look)..mera matlab hei aapko itna fursat kaha.

Kunal: Jaldi jao tum log...

Seema: jaa rahe hei...aap aur siddhi enjoy karlena..koi nahi hei aapko disturb karne ke liye.

Kunal: Seema tu wapas ayegi na kal bataunga tujhe..

They leave as siddhi and kunal are alone at home.
Kunal: Chalo ab shaant se reh saktha hoon aaj ka din.

Siddhi comes and sits on the dining table and starts cutting vegetables for cooking.
She looks at kunal and suddenly her finger gets cut..Siddhi cries out loud.
Kunal rushes towards siddhi and immediately takes her finger and keeps in his mouth.
Siddhi gets surprised and looks at kunal. Kunal just goes and gets some ice and a bandaid.

Kunal: Tu bhi na siddhi..kaha rehta hei tera nazar aaj kal..Ab chot lag gayi na ungli mei. ( He puts a bandaid on her finger).
Siddhi is happy to see kunal taking care of her.

Kunal: Ab tum beitho aur mei khana banaunga.

Siddhi: Nahi mei bana lungi..aap kyun taklif karte hei.

Kunal: Teri ungli kat gayi aur tu ab bhi kaam karna chahti hei..aaj hum dono ke liye pasta banaunga. Tum dekhna kitna accha pasta banata hoon mei.

Siddhi: Thik hei (smiling).

to be cont...

shilpa_maity thumbnail
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Posted: 13 years ago
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@ sgumi82

good job ,,,,,,
how romantic ,,,,,,,,,

its beautiful,,,,
carry on
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Excellent Savi...
Liked way Kunal is taking care of Siddhi, first with rubbing her hand/feet, then enquiry the next day , applying bandaid to finger and then volunteering to cook... We have been shown Kunal taking care of Witcha in FB but not so far for Siddhi...

Wish after this stupid case..CV's take your FF as their next track to bring Sinal closer..
Plz..continue.. This is developing really good...
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Beautiful piece of writing... 👏
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Originally posted by: shilpa_maity

@ sgumi82


good job ,,,,,,
how romantic ,,,,,,,,,

its beautiful,,,,
carry on



Hey thanks for liking it. Yeah working on the next part...guess i have a writing mood today. Well u can call me Savi...😊
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Posted: 13 years ago
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lovely update savi ..cany wait to read the next part ..
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Posted: 13 years ago
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hey savi...nyc update...haaye haaye too romantic...
kunu taking care of sidhi...awww dat was indeed a sweet gesture..
n how he's gonna cook the food...aww ...cho chwwet of him...
n ya dear...Pls PM me when u update it next tym
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Posted: 13 years ago
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@ savi

hello dear
waiting next part ,,,,,,,,,

plz update
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Posted: 13 years ago
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hey savi ..beautiful update dear ..do continue soon..
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Posted: 13 years ago
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hye Savi, sorry for replying so late..Great OS..😉 Do write the next part soon..

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