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purvi mehta

@purvimehta

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Posted: 13 years ago

madhushala ke inn chalakte paimano se mera shaayad purana naata hain!! kabhi duniya se kabhi khud se chupte chupate..

inn raahon mein kai baar aana hua.kai suni unsuni baatein, jasbatein..iss jagah pe aakar saare ghav khurad jaate hain!!

par aaj!! aaj kuchbhi nahin...naa koi aasun hai na dard na zakhm.aajj!! aaj hua hai sirf anth!! anth kunal chopra kaa..

aaj kunal chopra pe yeh aarop hai ki usne apne chote bhai anand ki hatya ki hai, taaki uske pyar ko haasil kar sakr..jo aaj mere ghar mein mere biwi banke mere intezaar mein aansoon bahaye baithi hai..mujhpe ye ilzaam hai ki,maine apni biwi ke saath jabardasti karneki koshish ki kyunki mein apni uss premika ka balatkar kar nahi paya ...jise mein kisi zamane mein apni jaan se bhi jyada chahta tha!! kaash ye saali zindagi meri na hoti...meri na hoti to mein hasta!!! hasta kudrat ke iss khel pe..kaanon mein abb bhi thakral ki chikhein gunj rahi hai.. ankhon mein aasoon kuch iss tarah sukh gaye hai ki angarey banke mere tan ko jala rahe hain..aaj pehli baar kunal chopra usi adaalat mein bebass khada tha jahan kabhi usne kitne logon ko insaaf dilaya hai!!aaj ye bebassi iss baat ki hai ki meri apni biwi mere samne beizzat ki jaa rahi thi!! kya jo kuch uss raat hamare beech hua, woh zabardasti thi? kya maine apni biwi ka faayda uthane ki koshish ki? jin lamhon mein woh meri bahon mein kaanch ki tarah toot chuki thi, jin lamhon mein maine uski bahon mein phir se jeena sikha tha, aaj thakral ne usi rishtey ko baajaaru bataya!!uski khamoshi uske aansoon uski tadap mujhe chubti hai mujhe tadpati hai..unn aankhon se aansoon mujhe gawara nahin..aaj thakral aur richa pe aanewala gussa bhi uss dard se badhakar nahin tha jo mein siddhi ke liye mehsoos

kar raha tha..mera rome rome jaise keh raha ho ki mein use apni bahon mein samalu aur iss zalim duniya se kahin door le jau

shayad iss waqt, mujhe uske paas jaakar usse poochna chahiye, ki kya usse sach mein aisa hi mehsoos hota hai!!
balaatkar!! uski umeedon ka, uske maan ka uske vishwaas ka? ya phir kya usne bhi wahi mehsoos kiya, jo maine kiya!!
wahi pyar wahi jasbaat...jo jismaani milan se jyaada do aatmaaon ka milan tha! poochna chahta hoon usse, ki kya woh
bhi wahi mehsoos karti hai, jo main mehsoos karta hoon. kya woh lamhe woh raat aur uske baad aane waali kai bechain tadapti
tanha ratein,uske armanon ko usi tarah jalatii hai, jaise mujhe!! kya mujhe uske kareeb paakar, woh bhi usi tarah din se pehle
jaag chuki thi, jiss tarah main? aaj bhi mujhe yaad hai woh subah uska neend mein muskurata hua chehra, usse dekh mujhe yun laga
jaise maine usse duniya ki sari khushi de di ho..yahi to main hamesha chahta tha!! uss din usse iss tarah dekh kar jo sukoon
mujhe mehsoos hua...woh bayan bhi kya kiya jaaye!! uska woh chehra..maang se fisla hua sindoor woh aankhon se faila hua kaajal jo
uske chehre pe mere hoton ke nishaan bana chuka tha..mere hoton pe achanak ek hulki si muskaan cha gayi, jab woh karwat lete hue
mere paas aa gayi, aur paas. uski haathon ki ungliyan tab bhi mere haathon ki ungliyon mein mili hui thi.hamnein jo kho kar paya
tha usmein mein uski bechaini aur hichak mehsoos kar paa raha tha. maine usse bahon mein yun sama liya, jaise uske darr ko sehla
raha tha...haan mein usika hoon sirf usika. mein usse batana chahta tha...ki mein hamesha se usika tha, tabb bhi jab richa ne mere
nashe mein hone ka faayda uthana chaha, meri jubaan pe sirf tumhara naam tha siddhi.mein usse poochna chahta tha..ki kya uss raat woh
hotel aayi thi...kya usne mujhe richa ke saath dekha? kya usne suna, ki mein sirf usse pyar karta hoon..haan, sirf siddhi se. mein
usse poochna chahta hoon, ki kya usne mehsoos kiya ki jin lamhon mein main usmein doob raha tha, aisa laga, mano dil chikh chikh kar
keh raha ho, ki haan, haan mujhse bhool hui..mein sirf tumhara hoon, sirf tumhe chahta hoon. haan, uss raat maine apni hi banayi seema
rekha ko paar kiya tha, mein anand ka gunhegaar ho gaya tha.apni maryada bhula di maine aur thaan liya ki abb inn aankhon se kabhi aansoon
nahin behne doon ga.shaayad mujhe usse poochna chahiye, ki taalak ka faisla karne par jo maayoosi mujhe mehsoos hui, kya usne bhi woh
mehsoon ki? kya uski ankhein bhi meri tarah wahi khwab sanjoh rahi thi..ki kash woh kuch kahe, kuch to kahein!! mujhe rokle yeh karnese
haan, mujhe bhi tumse pyaar hain.jo kuch hamare beech kal raat hua, woh uski bhi zindagi ka sabse khoobsurat lamha tha!! unn khamosh
palon mein, hamne hamara sab kuch ek dusre ko saup diya tha..kya taalak ke kagaaz dasthkhat karte waqt, usne meri aankhon mein woh
gussa woh bebasi nahin dekhi? usne mujhe kyon nahin roka, kyun? kyun nahin keh diya, ki woh bhi mujhse bahot pyar karti hai. ki,
anand uska beeta hua kal tha aur mein uska aaj hoon, aanewala kal hoon.kya usne kabhi mere unn hathon ko thartharate dekha, jinse maine
usse apne aansoon paunchne ke liye romaal diya,kyun usne woh taklif mehsoos nahin ki, jo mujhe tab hui jab usne apne aansoonon ki wajah
mujhe na batakar parivaar ka bahana kiya.haan, mein usse poochna chahta hoon yeh sab, yeh saare sawaal jo adhure, unkahe reh gaye hain.
huh!! dusre din mere darwaje pe dastak to hui, magar unn sawalon ke jawab ki nahin, par uss apraadh bodh ki, jo mere dil-o-dimaag ke
kisi kone mein daba hua tha.anand ki barsi!! mein anand ki barsi bhool gaya tha.usse gaye hue saal beet chuka hai, ek bhi din usse
yaad kiya bina nahin gaya. par,uss raat ne bahut kuch badal diya tha, mujhe badal diya tha. jo tufaan maine apne andar samet liya tha,
woh uss din dad ki darwaje par padne wali dastak se phir se umad pada.inhin raahon pe chalte chalte, maine socha ki shaayad woh mujhe
kuch kehna chahti ho par keh na paayi ho,par ghar lautkar dekha to woh anand ki tasweer se lipti hui roh rahi thi!! yun laga, mano
kisi shaant nadi mein baad aa gayi ho. mujhe aapne saare sawalon ka jawab mil chuka tha, magar andar kahin mujhe yakin tha, ki shaayad
main usse samaj nahin paaya. shayad woh sach mein mujhise pyar karti hain.
Par aajj!! aaj adaalat mein uski khamoshi sab kuch keh gayi.aaj mujhe apne saare sawalon ke jawaab mil chuke hain.aaj mujhe nafrat hain
nafrat hain aapne aap se, kyun? kyun maine phir mohabbat karne ki zurrat ki? kya diya hai iss ishq ne? yeh bebasi aur yeh tanhaai.
nafrat hain mujhe aapne aap se, yeh sochne ke liye ki, abb meri duniya mein naa hi siddhi hogi aur naa hi uska pyaar.abb 6 mahine bhi iss
dard ko seh sakunga ya nahin ye nahin pata.
abb yeh sab likhte likhte yeh yakin ho chala hai ki sab kuch thik kabhi nahin hoga. ab hamari duniya hamesha ke liye alag alag ho jayegi.hamare
rishtey ka koi aane wala kal nahin. aaj kunal chopra phir se badal gaya. jo kunal chopra siddhi ke pyar ke aage sir jhukata tha, woh
aaj mar chuka hai.kuch bacha hai, to sirf uska saaya, jo hokar bhi nahin hai. aaj kunal chopra ka naya janam hua hai jis mein naa koi siddhi
hain aur naa hin koi richa.

Kunal Chopra

22nd February 2012

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Pooja

@poshah

Voyager

Posted: 13 years ago

@purvi - loved the hindi version.. the only part i didnt like..same in english is the sad ending..and it leaves a very sad taste..I dont want and neither think kunal can be like this ever..He can never say we have no future together..bus those para stopped me from commenting..

Agree, the words are hers, yours is translation, i liked both..but the min it became sad..i felt it was too pessismistic--that doesnt take away your writing-fab writing..just too sad for me..For me Kunal is a loser but he will fight back,.,

we have amazing writers..what these serials do isnt it ?👏👏👏

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sgumi82

@sgumi82

Voyager

Posted: 13 years ago

Hey purvi...

Three cheers for u girl.

More detailed reply coming later ( will come back later and fill this space)

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purvi mehta

@purvimehta

Voyager

Posted: 13 years ago

Originally posted by: poshah
@purvi - loved the hindi version.. the only part i didnt like..same in english is the sad ending..and it leaves a very sad taste..I dont want and neither think kunal can be like this ever..He can never say we have no future together..bus those para stopped me from commenting..

Agree, the words are hers, yours is translation, i liked both..but the min it became sad..i felt it was too pessismistic--that doesnt take away your writing-fab writing..just too sad for me..For me Kunal is a loser but he will fight back,.,

we have amazing writers..what these serials do isnt it ?👏👏👏

hi Pooja

Thanx for liking it. I know that end is a bit sad ...and i hated being pessimist, but thinking from a point of view of a man who has fallen not once but twice, the emotions as of now are going to be negative.

the man is broken and shattered he has no hopes. obviously things will change with him, once the misunderstandings are cleared and thats why i added his name and date at the end. this is a temporary phase in his life and things will definitely change for better, but i liked how Kshiti could actually feel the pain and the emotions kunal must be going through at this point of time!! 😊

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Pooja

@poshah

Voyager

Posted: 13 years ago

hey Purvi, I personally think that if someone is in love..he/she will never give up hope/wish for being together unless he/she is like Richa. And neither regret being in love..But yes immense pain coming out in the words..that is what made me sad i guess and not wanting to comment earlier. The first time you ahd translated only the happy parts right 😉

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purvi mehta

@purvimehta

Voyager

Posted: 13 years ago

Originally posted by: poshah
hey Purvi, I personally think that if someone is in love..he/she will never give up hope/wish for being together unless he/she is like Richa. And neither regret being in love..But yes immense pain coming out in the words..that is what made me sad i guess and not wanting to comment earlier. The first time you ahd translated only the happy parts right 😉

yes...you are right!! i know how it feels when you see or read something like that! normally, i am that kind of a person. i hate too much negativity and pessimist behaviour. and beleive me, these days whenever i watch parichay, i sit with a box of tissues and it affects me so much in my daily life as well. i dont accept the fact that these are just characters and not real people. dont know if i have anything to do with this kind of emotion in my past life or what!!😆 😆.

but when i read it for the first time, i was like, ok this guy is in pain and in denial mode he has accepted defeat but kahin na kahin, uski naa mein bhi uski haan hain. and though it ends on a sad note, its got that added unwritten unseen emotion where he is hoping that things will change for good for him. thats what i liked about it. but we all at this forum, i know are very positive people. i know we are soon going to celebrate Sinal's togetherness and their love!!❤️

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Kshiti

@Kshiti_Kunal

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Posted: 13 years ago

Originally posted by: purvimehta

yes...you are right!! i know how it feels when you see or read something like that! normally, i am that kind of a person. i hate too much negativity and pessimist behaviour. and beleive me, these days whenever i watch parichay, i sit with a box of tissues and it affects me so much in my daily life as well. i dont accept the fact that these are just characters and not real people. dont know if i have anything to do with this kind of emotion in my past life or what!!😆 😆.
but when i read it for the first time, i was like, ok this guy is in pain and in denial mode he has accepted defeat but kahin na kahin, uski naa mein bhi uski haan hain. and though it ends on a sad note, its got that added unwritten unseen emotion where he is hoping that things will change for good for him. thats what i liked about it. but we all at this forum, i know are very positive people. i know we are soon going to celebrate Sinal's togetherness and their love!!❤️

Pooja and Purvi,

I agree about the pessimist part and believe me i am not that. In fact this is my first ever sad post otherwise i am bubbling and bouncing with positively even when Parichay gets downright negative 😆😆

but this time when i saw him repeating Thakral's words over and over again, i felt sad for him. I hadnt felt this way even when Anand had died and Kunal was in pieces over that. I hadnt felt this way even when he broke down in Witcha's office when she blamed him for Anand's death and not herself.

For the man that Kunal is, his reputation and pride is everything. He is the one to prefer breaking to bowing and still today, he was sad not because he was restricted to fight for himself or because his own reputation was at stake but because he was wondering if he had actually raped his wife. its his love that has taken over his pride and believe me that is a huge shift in personality for a man to choose a woman over his own respect and dignity. Its only love that can make you feel that way and when you dont find it being reciprocated, you feel defeated and cheated. That can break any man's resolve.

I myself was not very sure of the closure but for me personally, he would have looked fake had he been positive even after all this. Doesnt matter how strong you really are, you do break down at one point of time in your life and be unhopeful for your future, That exactly is the state that Kunal is in right now.

He has not denied his feelings and longing but he is broken inside because of Siddhi's silence and what it implies that he did rape her or if not then whatever happened that night bears no significance in her life to the least. hence the ending.

I hope girls that i am making sense 😆😆

Purvi,

Brilliantly written!!! believe me i loved it in Hindi much more than my own piece. I will take lessons from you in Hindi and try to write atleast a page, atleast half decent as compared to this. 😳😳

wonderful writing.. and thats for doing this for me!!! loved it to the core! 🤗

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purvi mehta

@purvimehta

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Posted: 13 years ago

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Originally posted by: Kshiti_Kunal

Pooja and Purvi,

I agree about the pessimist part and believe me i am not that. In fact this is my first ever sad post otherwise i am bubbling and bouncing with positively even when Parichay gets downright negative 😆😆

but this time when i saw him repeating Thakral's words over and over again, i felt sad for him. I hadnt felt this way even when Anand had died and Kunal was in pieces over that. I hadnt felt this way even when he broke down in Witcha's office when she blamed him for Anand's death and not herself.
For the man that Kunal is, his reputation and pride is everything. He is the one to prefer breaking to bowing and still today, he was sad not because he was restricted to fight for himself or because his own reputation was at stake but because he was wondering if he had actually raped his wife. its his love that has taken over his pride and believe me that is a huge shift in personality for a man to choose a woman over his own respect and dignity. Its only love that can make you feel that way and when you dont find it being reciprocated, you feel defeated and cheated. That can break any man's resolve.
I myself was not very sure of the closure but for me personally, he would have looked fake had he been positive even after all this. Doesnt matter how strong you really are, you do break down at one point of time in your life and be unhopeful for your future, That exactly is the state that Kunal is in right now.
He has not denied his feelings and longing but he is broken inside because of Siddhi's silence and what it implies that he did rape her or if not then whatever happened that night bears no significance in her life to the least. hence the ending.
I hope girls that i am making sense 😆😆

Purvi,
Brilliantly written!!! believe me i loved it in Hindi much more than my own piece. I will take lessons from you in Hindi and try to write atleast a page, atleast half decent as compared to this. 😳😳
wonderful writing.. and thats for doing this for me!!! loved it to the core! 🤗

Kshiti,

Thank you so much...for liking it..i am not too sure if i could inspire you to start writing in Hindi 😆😆. I think I myself still need lessons in Hindi. but you definitely have inspired me to start writing again!! and I couldn't thank you enough for that. the way you have explained the reason for a sad closure, I mean every time u jot something down i just keep reading it again and again. i am most definite that you understand one emotion very well for sure, and that my dear is LOVE❤️

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shamrish

@shamrish

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Posted: 13 years ago

Kshiti and Purvi,

Awesome!!. Hats off to both of you. 👍🏼👍🏼👍🏼👍🏼👍🏼
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Kshiti , Definately you deserve a huge round of applause from all members ,for the original writeup.
👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏

👏👏👏Truly touched the heart. Words are less to describe what you have presented us.

Though Purvi's job was to translate, that itself is not an easy task either. It is not about just translating each word but putting them together to have the same impact as the original was truly amazing .

There is such an amazing talent on this forum, through ideas , discussions and such writeup's.
You just get automatically dragged to this forum becoz one can not only present their own ideas and viewpoints but also get to learn a lot from others in various aspects of life.

Keep up the good work.

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Kshiti

@Kshiti_Kunal

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Posted: 13 years ago

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Originally posted by: purvimehta
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Kshiti,
Thank you so much...for liking it..i am not too sure if i could inspire you to start writing in Hindi 😆😆. I think I myself still need lessons in Hindi. but you definitely have inspired me to start writing again!! and I couldn't thank you enough for that. the way you have explained the reason for a sad closure, I mean every time u jot something down i just keep reading it again and again. i am most definite that you understand one emotion very well for sure, and that my dear is LOVE❤️

Awww thank you so much Purvi... Jitna bal ki khal nikalne ki koshish karoge utne hi nusk nikalenge aur jitna jyada mehsoos karoge utna hi pyar paoge... now there goes my Hindi for a toss... 😳

if that didnt make sense then let me say that in English 😆 Love can be as easy to 'feel' or as difficult to 'understand' as you would make it to be! 😳😳

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