ll Kunal Siddhi FF : Kaisa Yeh Pyar Hai ll

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Posted: 13 years ago
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Heyya frnds! I am writing FF for the first time. Sorry if its not great! But do leave comments so that i can improve myself and my FF😆!


*For hindi readers only!





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Posted: 13 years ago
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Oh... yay! Chal I am your first reader!
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Siddhi: Kunal mujhe apse kuch kehna hai.

Kunal: Ha! Kaho na.

Siddhi: Kunal wo...

Kunal: Jaldi bolo.

Siddhi: Wo...

Kunal: Jab mann ho tab bata dena.

Kunal's phone rings(caller Mr.batliwala)

Mr.B/wala: Kunal! Hamare bahut purane client ne aaj party throw ki hai. Aur tumhe aur siddhi ko invite kiya hai. Aana jarur.

Kunal: Theek hai sir.

Kunal: Siddhi wo hamare firm ke bahut purane client ne aaj party throw ki hai aur hum dono ko invite kiya hai aur maine ha keh diya hai. Tum chalogi na.

Siddhi: Aap ke saath waqt bitaane ka mauka kaise chod sakti hu.

Kunal: Theek hai baje tak taiyyar ho jana.

Kunal weared Red shirt with Black coat and Siddhi in maroon saree.

Kunal: Bahut achi lag rahi ho.

Siddhi: Aap bhi bahut ache lag rahe ho.

Kunal: Ab chalen.

Siddhi: Kya hum kuch dur paidal(walk) chal sakte hai kya. Baad mein taxi le lenge.

Kunal(in his akdoo style): Theek hai.

Siddhi: Mujhe aapse kuch kehna hai.

Kunal: Tum phir se wo...wo...mat karna. Jo kehna hai jaldi kaho.

Suddenly siddhi's phone rang(caller Kapil)

Siddhi: Ha bhaiyya boliye.

Kapil: Siddhi ek khush khabri hai!

Siddhi: Kya! Jaldi bataiye na bhaiyya!

Kapil: Shilpa ki shaadi ki date fix hogayi hai.

Siddhi: Sach bhaiyya.

Kapil: Ha! 6th Feb. ko shaadi hai. Aur tujhe saari rasmo ke liye yahan aana hoga.

Siddhi: Ha bhaiyya main zaroor aungi.

Kapil: Baki ki saari rasmein 25th jan se shuru hongi.

Siddhi: Theek hai bhaiyya.


Kunal: Kya baat hai shaadi ke baad tumhe pehli baar itna khush dekh raha hu.

Siddhi: Kya matlab hai aapka.

Kunal: Kuch nahi. par tum itni khush kyo lag rahi ho.

Siddhi: Shilpa ki shaadi ki date fix hogayi hai.

Kunal: Sach mein.

Siddhi: 6th feb ko fix huyi hai par mujhe 25th jan se leke 6th feb tak wahin rehna hoga.


Kunal: Kya!


To be continued in next Post! Hope you all will like it!


Edited by --nIdHi-- - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Originally posted by: nancy1996

Oh... yay! Chal I am your first reader!


Maine post kiya hi nahi! aur tumne reply bhi kar diya! chalo koi baat nahi! ab padh lo😆
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Originally posted by: --nIdHi--

Heyya frnds! I am writing FF for the first time. Sorry if its not great! But do leave comments so that i can improve myself and my FF😆!



*For hindi readers only!


nice😊
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Thanx for reading it dear!
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Really nice writing, I love this style, even I use the same style coz it's easy to understand 👍🏼
Good plot 👏
Pls PM when you update
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Originally posted by: MsCeylon

Really nice writing, I love this style, even I use the same style coz it's easy to understand 👍🏼

Good plot 👏
Pls PM when you update


Thanx dear! yeah sure i will pm u when i will post my next update
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Posted: 13 years ago
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very very good..👏👏
CVs ka kaam aasan kar rahi ho.. 😆😆
unko sirf yaha se leke copy paste karna hai.. wo to kam se kam dhang se kare 😡
chalo.. waiting eagerly for the next part... jaldi jaldi kaam pe lag jao.. chop chop.. 😳😳
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Its really nice...continue writing
Plzz pm me the next part

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