SiNal FF - A night at Mahableshwar Hotel - PART-1

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Hi Guys, I have written a FF on Sinal for the very first time. I am not very good writer, but have tried something anyways. Hope you all like it. This is just one time FF because shumi has decided not to write it this week. From next week you regular FF update shumi will be back.

Do hit the button If you like it and share any suggestions you have to improve this FF.

I have written the second part of this FF as well. Below is he link to the second part of the FF:

https://www.indiaforums.com/forum/parichay-nayee-zindagi-kay-sapno-ka/2429151/sinal-ff-honeymoon-in-mahabaleshwar-part-2


Continuation from Friday episode -

Kunal is embarrassed as well as a bit angry at Siddhi for spotting him shirtless earlier. Even after Siddhi's clarification that she was listening to the music and really didn't hear him calling out for her, Kunal is not convinced and feels cheated. He feels that Siddhi intentionally didn't answer him and even expresses his displeasure about it to her. Siddhi, on the other hand, trying very hard to make him understand that she had nothing to gain from teasing him unnecessarily and it's not in her nature to do such things to people. Kunal is still unconvinced yet moves on arranging his clothes in the closet. Now it's Siddhi's turn to go and freshen up as the 4 hour drive that too in such unpleasant company, Vineet and Ritcha, has really tired them both. Therefore, she also starts going through her bags to find something to change into as she plans to take a warm bath to relieve her tiredness and doesn't want to end up like Kunal not having her clothes in the bathroom with her. While going through their suitcases, Siddhi finds Kunal's baniyaan in her suitcase which he had been looking for since he came out of the bathroom. Shocked and surprised Siddhi didn't want Kunal to see it simply to avoid Kunal's nagging behavior about the whole baniyaan fiasco that happened earlier; she immediately hides it behind her.


As quick as she was in doing so, she couldn't manage to hide it quick enough from Kunal glancing at it. The minute Kunal realizes what Siddhi is hiding from him, he asks her bluntly, "Is it my baniyaan that you are hiding"? Siddhi who is already very nervous and clueless about how it ended up in her suitcase, answers fearfully, "Nahi, nahi toh". "Nahi, toh phir wo kya chupa rahi ho apane peeche"? Kunal fires back at her. Siddhi,"Nahi wo kuch nahi hai". Kunal, "ager kuch nahi hai to phir dikhao mujhe", Kunal demands her to show what is she actually hiding? Siddhi having left with no other choice, but to show him the baniyaan. Kunal now has the opportunity he has been looking for to get back at Siddhi for last few minutes. Now very confident or may be a bit arrogant Kunal says to Siddhi, "Achcha toh yeh game khela ja raha tha mere saath, mujhe pareshan kiya ja raha tha?"

Poor Siddhi, still oblivious to the fact about how his baniyaan ended up in her suitcase starts to recollect her thoughts while walking towards the bathroom. Suddenly it hits her "oh! Seema bhabhi must have mixed up our clothes while packing by mistake". With that realization, came another thought to her already disturbed mind "could any piece of my clothing have been packed up in Kunal's suitcase?" With that thought, she decides to walk back towards the bed to check Kunal's suitcase as well. As soon as she turns back, she sees Kunal holding her sexy pink satin lingerie. She was so embarrassed that she just wanted to die on the spot. She ran towards Kunal trying to snatch the lingerie from his hands, but Kunal holds it even up higher. Siddhi being on the shorter side of the vertical growth, couldn't reach the lingerie at all now to snatch it from his hands. She is very upset and is about to cry, but decides to give it another try to get her sleepwear back. In that attempt she starts to run after Kunal who in turns make her chase him all over the room finally ending up on top of the bed. While trying to climb up on the bed, Siddhi stumbles and drops the clothes she already had in her hands. Kunal tries to help her collect her clothes, but instead of giving them back to her, he keeps them with himself. Just then he comes up with a plan to get back at Siddhi for spotting him shirtless earlier that too on purpose (well at-least that's what he still thinks). His eyes brighten up and has a big wide smile on his face as he knows his excellent plan is bound to trouble Siddhi and that's exactly he wanted to trouble and embarrass Siddhi just as she did it to him.


Siddhi finally gives up on getting back her lingerie and just wants to get on with taking shower and calling it a day which has been somewhat not too pleasant for her so far. With that intention, she requests Kunal, "Please mere kapade deejiye, mujhe nahana hai." Kunal, "Thik hai naha lena par meri bhi ek shart hai." Siddhi, "Shart? Kaisi shart?" Kunal , "Tumhe kaun se kapade chaiye thay?" Siddhi, "Wahi meri kurti aur jeans." Kunal, "Kurti aur Jeans? Matlab yeh'', yeh pink wali cheez nahi chaiye tumhe? " Siddhi, "nahi, nahi chahiye, bas wo meri kurti''." Kunal thinks to himself, "oh! So she doesn't like this pink thing." While looking at the pink lingerie he makes a face as If he had tasted something very bitter in his mouth. His thoughts continue, "to kya karoo?" pauses his thoughts for a minute then continues with it mischievously, "phir toh mai usay yahi doonga phanane kay liye, mujhe pareshan karane chali thi, ab pata chalega ki Kunal say panga lene ka kya matalab hai."


He had already put her suitcase on the top of the armoire which was way out of Siddhi's reach and had taken the only piece of clothing she had in her hands leaving Siddhi no other choice, but to wear what Kunal was demanding her to. Siddhi rejected his condition immediately and was ready to be in her old clothes even if that meant her not to be able to take bath. Kunal, "Kyun ab nahana nahi hai kya?" Siddhi, "Nahi mai thik hoon, usay pahenane se to accha hai mai gandi hi baithi rahoo" Kunal tried to instigate her to take bath and wear that pink cheez so he can take his revenge, but Siddhi is adamant not to oblige him with his demand.


It was now dinner time so they went to the dining room to eat instead of ordering the room service. However, Vineet and Richa decided to order the room service and stay inside the room. Siddhi complimented the waiter that the hotel food was very good; consequently, the waiter suggested Sinal to try their special wine which is very famous there and it would go really well with the Italian food they were having. Kunal ordered the wine while Siddhi settled for the soft drink. As they were enjoying the food and the natural beauty of the hills which was looking beautiful in the moon light, two young kids from the next table bumped into Kunal who was sitting only inches way from Siddhi ended up dropping his remaining glass of wine on Siddhi.


Now Siddhi is very disgusted with the smell of the wine that was coming from her clothes. She could not possibly go to bed with that smell? The smell would keep her up entire night. She again begged Kunal for her clothes which he had hidden but in vain. Finally she had to give into Kunal's conditions as she had to take shower to get rid of that unpleasant smell which was making her feel like puking. She wore the pink satin lingerie after a nice warm bath. It feels really very nice after taking the bath she said to herself. "How am I going to face Kunal like this?" her smile disappeared with this thought.


Since she had no other choice, came out of the bathroom feeling really uncomfortable only to find Kunal awestruck by her brand new avatar. Kunal, who had not left a single opportunity to trouble Siddhi so far, is suddenly in his gentleman behavior tries to complements Siddhi, "um'''.. wo'''.wo Siddhi tum'''...um'.. tum bahut achachi lag'''I mean achchi ''''." He asked himself "aray yaar yeh mujhe kya ho gaya? mai kuch bol kyun nahi pa raha hoon?". Siddhi sensing the awkwardness between them ran to the bed quickly and covered herself with the blanket. Kunal got up from his chair where he was sitting and reading a book while Siddhi was taking shower and goes to Siddhi and tries to finish the compliment he was trying to pay Siddhi earlier. "Mai kahana chahata tha ki tum''''tum iss pink cheez mein bahut achchi lag rahi ho." Siddhi, "Thanks, but I really don't feel comfortable wearing it." Kunal, "I can give you your clothes back, but I prefer that you don't change because as I said you look very nice in whatever it's called." Siddhi decided to keep wearing it as it was the first time Kunal had complimented her like this and she was also enjoying the stealing looks Kunal kept giving her from corner of his eyes in between reading the book.


"Wow it's 11pm, I think I should sleep now as Vineet has planned an early morning meeting tomorrow", Kunal said it out loud. Both of them look around for a place for Kunal to crash, but there was nothing there besides the 2 chairs. "I will sleep on this chair." Kunal said it pointing at one of the chair he was sitting on all evening". Siddhi, "Par yahan toh ek hi blanket hai aur itani thandi hai, agar aap chair par soyenge toh thand lag sakati hai". Kunal,"I agree, but we have no other option as this hotel is full and we can't get another room either". Siddhi," um'''this bed'''bed is big enough for both of us. We can sleep on our sides and not bother each-other". Kunal,"who toh thik hai par ek hi blanket mein? Nahi-nahi mai chair par hi thik hoon". Siddhi,"Thik hai phir mai bhi doosare chair par so jati hoon." She got up from the bed and sat on the second chair shivering really badly as she was wearing very thin and slippery fabric lingerie. Kunal insisted many a times that he was okay sleeping on the chair and she should go back to the bed and crawl into the blanket mainly because he couldn't swallow the sight of Siddhi in that sleepwear, looking exceedingly sexy and irresistible sitting so close to him. Though, Siddhi was persistent that If you can sleep on the chair and be so uncomfortable in this cold weather, so can I.


Kunal eventually gave in as Siddhi seemed very determined to challenge his decision to sleep on the chair. They both slept on the opposite sides of the bed and are forced to share the only blanket they were provided by the hotel as well though maintaining the safe distance between them. However, those 30 minutes Siddhi had spent sitting on the chair in her tiny bitty nightie persuading Kunal to sleep on the bed had done numbers on her and she was shivering persistently even inside the blanket. Kunal being in the same blanket with her was able to sense her constant shiver and felt very bad for not agreeing to her request sooner and making her sit on the chair for 30 long minutes. He felt he has to do something for her as it's his fault that she is going through this at the first place.


With the determination of helping Siddhi, Kunal rolled towards Siddhi's side of the bed and came very close to Siddhi which made it almost impossible for him to be that close to her and not being able to hold her in his arms. "Siddhi you don't seem okay, is there anything I can do to make you feel better?" Kunal asked Siddhi with utmost love and care in his voice which even Siddhi couldn't help but to notice. "I am feeling very cold and my shiver is not going away either." Siddhi replied. Kunal, "oh! You don't look good at all". He said worriedly. "I can suggest you couple of things, but I am sure you won't agree to them so I guess I am going to call a doctor for you." Siddhi," No I don't need a doctor, I am ready to listen to your suggestions. Tell me what are they?" Kunal, "I am going to give you 2 tablespoon of brandy which I have brought with me and then I am going to hold you in my arms for a while until you feel better. Can you do this for me?" Siddhi was very hesitant of his suggestions, but was feeling very sick due to the cold and her wet hair after the shower weren't helping her either. Kunal told her that brandy was the best medicine for cold and even the cold syrups she takes for cold contain as much as 40% of alcohol so it's okay for her to drink couple of tblspoons of Brandy.


After the brandy, she felt some warmth in her body then came the moment when Kunal took her in his arms for the very first time. In Kunal's embrace Siddhi felt the warmth that couldn't have even from a volcano and she felt at home in his arms as if this is where she belonged all along. Jaise kisi udate panchi ko usaka basera mil gaya ho. The feeling was mutual for Kunal also as he felt If Siddhi belonged only and only in his arms. As the night progressed, their embrace became mutual and tighter and so did became their relationship.


I have written the second part of this FF as well. Below is he link to the second part of the FF:

https://www.indiaforums.com/forum/parichay-nayee-zindagi-kay-sapno-ka/2429151/sinal-ff-honeymoon-in-mahabaleshwar-part-2

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Posted: 13 years ago
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Rani.. It is simply superb.. amazing, too good... excellent...Whatever reservations you have abt not being able to write... throw them out of the window. You are also a talented writer... 👍🏼👏👏👍🏼👏👍🏼👍🏼 BTW I didn't know that cough syrups have 40% alcohol.. hmm interesting! But thank you so much for taking the effort to write this scene... A very very very very cute scene betwn Sinal... would love to see Kunal behave this way with Siddhi and Unpleasant company...😆 Really thoroughly enjoyed the FF.. Great Job once again...!👏👏👏 👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏
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Originally posted by: nancy1996

Rani.. It is simply superb.. amazing, too good... excellent...Whatever reservations you have abt not being able to write... throw them out of the window. You are also a talented writer... 👍🏼 BTW I didn't know that cough syrups have 40% alcohol.. hmm interesting! But thank you so much for taking the effort to write this scene... A very very very very cute scene betwn Sinal... would love to see Kunal behave this way with Siddhi and Unpleasant company...😆 Really thoroughly enjoyed the FF.. Great Job once again...!👏👏👏 👏


Oh, thanks. Glad you liked it as it is my first attempt. Didn't think you would be up this late to read it. You read it so quickly wow. From next week, Shumi will be back so I am just a filler updater I guess whenever she can't do it.

I will resend the PM with link in it, so please ignoreit this time.
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Staying up late paid off 😊 was so happy to see that you wrote this! Thank you so much once again! Very nice it is.. and Kunal deliberately troubling Siddhi... how sweet is that! I hope CVs are reading this and Shumi's FF too... kuch dhang ke ideas milenge unko!
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Hii Rani,,
Great job👏...Thumbs up for such a wonderful creation...!!!!👍🏼
Though as u said u don write much u wrote FF in a beautiful way,,as an accomplished writer!!!😊

Enjoyed reading FF throughout...esp the Sinal scenes were so cute...😳
Wish cv's take ideas from this superb FF..M sure if you try on writing such articles,,you can be a proff writer,,as you are so talented at it ...

Edited by angel001 - 13 years ago
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Originally posted by: nancy1996

Staying up late paid off 😊 was so happy to see that you wrote this! Thank you so much once again! Very nice it is.. and Kunal deliberately troubling Siddhi... how sweet is that! I hope CVs are reading this and Shumi's FF too... kuch dhang ke ideas milenge unko!


Yeah, when CVs don't show what we want to see, we have to use our own imaginations to tolerate the crappy tracks they show us right?
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Originally posted by: angel001

Hii Rani,,

Great job👏...Thumbs up for such a wonderful creation...!!!!👍🏼
Though as u said u don write much u wrote FF in a beautiful way,,as an accomplished writer!!!😊

Enjoyed reading FF throughout...esp the Sinal scenes were so cute...😳
Wish cv's take ideas from this superb FF..M sure if you try on writing such articles,,you can be a proff writer,,as you are so talented at it ...


Oh thanks Angel. I am just so glad you guys liked it. As I said It's my first attempt, so wasn't sure If I was on the right track or not, but you guys have assured me I am so I will keep doing it now and then If not on regular basis.
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Originally posted by: Iamrani


Yeah, when CVs don't show what we want to see, we have to use our own imaginations to tolerate the crappy tracks they show us right?

Totally...oh i also absolutely loved the way... Kunal suggested couple of options.. and how Siddhi agreed...so dreamy... 😍 😍
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Totally...oh i also absolutely loved the way... Kunal suggested couple of options.. and how Siddhi agreed...so dreamy... 😍 😍


Those are the 2 best things to try if you are feeling cold for sure😆 😆I know this is not going to happen in the show, but we are not loosing anything by imagining it. our Imaginations are free so we use it any way we want 😆
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Posted: 13 years ago
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superb dear...👏👏👏

dear u deed a good job👍🏼...i loved it 😳

wow..siddi in kunal's arms😍☺️

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