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Posted: 14 years ago
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Rendezvous with Fate - Chapter 1



The crackling sound of his father's slap still echoed in Sarja's ears..... Although it didn't hurt externally but he was bruised internally........His father's words of calling him a rowdy and a useless character further aggravated his wounded heart..... He was still trying to figure out the mistake he had committed...... for getting to hear all those harsh words..... Why did his father fail to see the love and concern he had for him when he was arguing with his brother Damu for the way he back stabbed their father..... how much ever he tried pondering but he had no answer to that question......


He had vowed never to enter the house again...... he had had enough of it already..... as he slowly dragged himself to his corner...... the homely feeling which he felt at the corner....... never once did he feel when he was at home....... the small cupboard, his boxing gloves,table,chairs seemed to strike the right chord with him...... he never had to explain his things to them......
they were always ready to welcome him with open arms........


As he turned to see his house in the dark.... he saw the lights turned off.... which made him all the more frustrated.... he was cursing his life for the way it had turned out.... in his anger,he threw a chair away....... he was about the break the table when something stopped him from doing that........ it reminded him of his father's precious words...... as he recollected a childhood incident when his father had got him that study table.......


"Sarja ..... You have always made me proud son..... and this is a small gift for you...... always make use of this table whenever you make right decisions....."


He ran his hands on the table........ and quietly pulled one chair towards the table..... and placed his head firmly on it......... rain of tears started flowing from his eyes straining the table as he vividly recollected that one rendezvous with fate which changed the strings of his life forever........

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Posted: 14 years ago
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Sujju, marvelous words and brilliantly you mixed epi with ur thought.........

I would have loved to see this kind of scene in PMMKA...... Continue more.... 👏 🤗
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Posted: 14 years ago
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Sujji wonderful FF. as the cv are not showing his past, atleast tum hi dikha do apne FF mein. loving it and waiting for the nxt part
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Posted: 14 years ago
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Awesome start , Sujji ....wonderfully described feelings ..and scenario is just perfect ....well done ...keep it up :)
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Posted: 14 years ago
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Originally posted by: darshana23

Sujju, marvelous words and brilliantly you mixed epi with ur thought.........

I would have loved to see this kind of scene in PMMKA...... Continue more.... 👏 🤗

Thanks a lot diiii🤗...... . i'm narrating Sarja's story the way i wanted to see.😊...... i'm posting Chapter 2 today.......i'm building up his past....... hope you like it........ 😛
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Posted: 14 years ago
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thanks Usma... part 2 coming up.......... 😊
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Originally posted by: sudhalata1


Sujji wonderful FF. as the cv are not showing his past, atleast tum hi dikha do apne FF mein. loving it and waiting for the nxt part

thanks diii........ i'm still trying to build his past....... hope you like the start........ 😊
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Originally posted by: Faiza_sam

Awesome start , Sujji ....wonderfully described feelings ..and scenario is just perfect ....well done ...keep it up :)

thanks a lot Faizu....... glad you liked it......... 🤗
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Posted: 14 years ago
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Chapter 2


"Sarjaaaaaaaaaaaaa............. it's time for lunch son "


Susheela's calls fell on deaf ears........ she went up to his room........ to realise he was not there..... she was really worried and wondered where did her son go....... it was already 1.30pm...... and her son had not yet had his lunch........she rushed out of the house....... when she saw him sitting down in his favourite corner totally engrossed into his rack of books...... A smile lit up on her face....... as she walked down towards him.......many thoughts ran in her mind...... Sarja was in his study leave for his 10th standard exams....... she was pretty much confident her Sarja would score the highest marks..... and make them proud..... and raise their family name....... her elder son Damu was pretty average in his studies..... Neither Susheela nor Maruti expected much from him....... they were happy with his scores....... but Sarja...... he was born to prove something big....... there was not a single day when his teachers didn't praise him...... Seeing his budding intelligence.......both Maruti-Susheela were very happy but at the same time worried....... how they would help him financially as higher the degree higher are the fees........ but Sarja seemed to understand their silence as he was always acted beyond his age....... she knew he was tensed inside but always managed to keep a smile on his lips...... that sweet smile erased all their worries within few seconds....... but what bothered her more was he would get so engrossed in his studies....... that he would skip even his lunch for that...... she decided to drag him to the house......



"Sarja........... enough of studies.......... come & eat......."


"Ma........ just a minute....... I'm almost done........"


"You have been telling this for the past 1 1/2 hour........"


"Just 5 minutes ma......."


Susheela gave him a false angry glare........ Sarja smiled in return knowing fully well that she was faking it...... but Sarja also knew one thing..... his mother won't eat till he has had his meal...... for her sake he decided to heed it..... he closed his books....... and turned to the gate........ Susheela knew very well what was going on in Sarja's mind...... it was time for her other 2 children Chandu & Sonali to return from school...... Sarja was waiting for the school bus....... he never had his lunch till his siblings had finished having it....... the loud sound of the horn was enough...... soon Sarja ran away to the gate to receive them........ Susheela smiled at Sarja's actions....... he was always protective about his younger siblings...... he held both their hands firmly.... and was busy listening to both of them..... his head kept turning right to left and again left to right.......as they narrated all the school happenings to Sarja.......


Soon all were home...... Susheela quickly served the lunch....... Chandu was very mischievious....... he would not eat when she gave him....... but he would always listen to Sarja....... Sarja often fed Chandu with his own hands before having his lunch...... while Susheela would get busy in feeding Sonali...... once they had had their lunch....... both Susheela & Sarja would put them to sleep........only after that they would sit together and have their lunch...... Sarja was always silent..... he would not share many things with them..... and always had the nature of keeping things within...... this bothered Susheela more...... she wanted Sarja to be more open about his feelings....... but how much ever she tried she could never change his nature........


This routine continued for some days....... soon it was time for board exams........ Sarja managed to write each paper well...... he felt blessed and at the same time happy that he'll make his parents proud......more than Sarja his father Maruti Rao was tensed.... he wanted Sarja to get the fruit of his hardwork..... and for his sake he would return home early.... so if Sarja needed anything....... he could be of help........ Sarja would just smile at his behaviour..... and would offer silent prayers to God about making him score good marks in his exams.......


Soon his board exams ended....... Sarja got busy in helping his siblings with their studies...... but soon their exams ended as well...... Sarja wanted to make full use of his vacation...... he never liked sitting idle...... that was never his cup of tea..... he decided to learn something..... He knew very well how his father slogged everyday to keep them happy...... and his fees would be really high..... he also knew his father would never compromise anything for his studies..... that disturbed him more.... he wanted to be of assistance to his family in some way...... but wondered how.....



One day while returning home from the grocery shop........ Sarja came across a garage shop....... Sarja was always attracted towards that kind of work...... working on gadgets,machines, vehicles excited him more....... that's basically the reason why he wanted to be an engineer...... he decided to learn that art too and at the same time earn for his family......so that he manages to help his father with the home costs..... this ended in Sarja always lying to his mother that he was going to play..... and would go to that place and earn money....... it didn't take much days for Sarja to learn the art....... soon he was skilled to do the job flawlessly....... his boss was very happy with his efforts...... as none of his customers complained to him about any problem after the repair work was done by Sarja....... Sarja managed to earn 10000/- in his 4 months vacation...... with no one coming to know about it.....


Finally the D day arrived....... the day when his results were going to be announced.... there was tension filled environment at Sarja's place.....although the tv was on....... everyone's eyes were on the show being aired....... but they were mentally absent....... Sarja's eyes were on the clock..... the timings alloted to him was 3pm...... he was busy counting the minutes....... no one was in a mood to eat...... Maruti also took a holiday that day...... he wanted to be a pillar strength to Sarja at this time...... but it was altogether reverse here...... Sarja's school was far from his house..... so he decided to leave early....... Once at school...... Sarja got busy in talking to his friends..... soon all were alloted different rooms based on their roll numbers....... Sarja silently sat in his room...... soon all the roll numbers were called out and they were given their marksheets...... but there was no mention of his roll number....... Sarja was biting his nails....... soon everyone walked out of the class........ Sarja was super tensed...... but somehow decided to speak to the teacher present in the room.........



"Excuse me M'am...... Why have i not been given my Marksheet.....??


"Name...???"


"Sarje Rao Bhosle......"


"Oh you are Sarje Rao....... principal is waiting for you in his cabin....... you have been asked to collect your marksheet from him........"


Before Sarja could question her further.......... the teacher left the room....... Sarja got all the more tensed..... his heart was beating fast...... he was wondering why did the principal wanted to meet him........ he somehow gathered up courage...... and knocked the principal's cabin.......


"Sir.... May i come in???"


"Who are you...??


" Sarje Rao Bhosle......"


"Come in son.......... "


The principal walked up to him......... Sarja lowered his eyes......


"So Sarje Rao..... do you know why have you been asked to come here..........???"


Sarja shook his head in negative.......


The principal smiled...... and moved his hands towards him to shake....... Sarja looked perplexed at his action.......


"Congratulations Son.... you have not only topped our school but also one of the state's merit holders.......and this has happened for the 1st time in the history of our school....... The entire faculty is proud of you....... and so on behalf of the school...... We are offering you a scholarship....... "
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Posted: 14 years ago
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sujju, have to go... i will read it once I am back

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