PMMKA Written Update 11th Feb 2011!! =D

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Hey Guys!! Written Update 11th Feb 2011: (Full update coming soon..) 😊 But I must say it was a really cute episode!! Really liked it! 👍🏼
@Green: My comments!! 😆
@Brown: Need help with plz.. 😳
@Blue: Chandu
@Pink: Sonali (Chandu's sis)
@Red: Niru
@Purple: Niru's dad
@Light Blue: Albela
@Light pink: Sarje Rao
@Golden: Boy (talking to Sarje Rao)
@Orange: Chandu/Sarje's Mom
@Light Green: Chandu/Sarje's Dad
Scene 1: Chandu and Sonali! 😊
The epi started with Chandu saying:

'I just want that girl and if the heart says yes then only I'll go to her..'

Sonali: Hmm.. how will you find her?

Chandu takes her hand and puts it by his heart and says : this heart will show me the way..

Sonali: my God.. I cant believe it dada.. You have become all romantic all of a sudden.. I see so much happiness in ur eyes.. Im sure you will get ur love soon.. My heart says that..'

They both smile.. And then Sonali hugs Chandu saying: 'I love you dada.. Truly dada'

They both are really happy..

She suddenly remembers something.. (Guys am sorry for this as here they speak in some alien language to me.. Can anyone translate that so that I can edit this part.. I guess they both spoke in Marathi or something.. Sorry about it..)

She is excited and about to leave when Chandu stops her and asks her to give that Niru's (something ' guys help me with this too.. what does he have of Niru?) She hands him that and goes away..

Chandu is looking at it and remembering his moments with Niru.. 😍 Where he saved her, then brought her Baba, then that bye scene.. 😍 And he gives the cutest smile there (Haiilllaaaa!! Im all dead here... He's soooooo cute MAN!!) 😳 Ok then he moves out and this song sequence starts.. Where he sees someone behind the curtains.. 😆 He goes there and moves the curtain and sees Niru.. (Guys he is all imagining this 😛 btw Niru gives such an ausum expression here..) Ok then he keeps starring at her and the song keeps playing 'ik larki ko dekha toh aise laga..' As soon as he goes near her she has vanished.. He then sits on the railing and across he sees Niru doing Pooja.. The song is still playing.. The kids come and distracts him and when he turns back, she is not there again.. 😆 Ok this is the bestest part of the song!! 😆 🤣 I was ROFLing all the way!! He is standing in the volleyball ground with the ball, when he sees Niru coming with a policeman.. (She is looking really pretty here with hair open and red suit..) 😍 She is giving him smiles and he is all dreamy.. He thorws the ball and goes to her.. ChandNi has some great eye locking scenes, roaming around each other.. 😍 and also having a lil dance together.. 😃 This was sooo good!! And then when the song finishes he realises he has the policeman in his arms and not Niru!! 🤣 🤣 (I literally couldnt stop laughing!! Poor Chand!!) 🤣

Scene 2:
Niru and her dad sitting on the Jhoola

Niru: See dad.. I told you not eat that Gola ganda.. You now have cough because of that..

Niru's dad: No no.. I will eat Gola again..

Niru: How will you eat if I don't buy it for you?

Niru's dad: *Coughs*.. No problem.. He will

Niru: Who?

Niru's dad: Your friend who met us today in the morning..

Niru remembers her scene with Chandu when he was saying bye to her.. And says: No dad.. He is not a friend.. He was just a stranger who was a good person and helped us..

Niru's dad: No no.. Ok if you don't want him as ur friend then I will make him my friend.. He is such a nice guy.. You just see when he comes nah he will buy me that Gola Ganda..

Niru: No dad.. we wont meet him now.. But don't worry Im here nah with you.. Your daughter and friend..

Niru's dad: No no.. You stop me from doing things.. He wont.. You just mind it that he will come back..

Niru gives a smile and says: Ok baba, If you say then he will come back.. Come on now lets go in..

They both go in and Albela comes to the Jhoola and says: Now who is this villian in mine and Niru's love shtory?' (When did ur and niru's love shtory start?) 😆

Scene 3: Sarje Rao..

Sarje Rao is lying on his bike.. When his men bring in some boy..

Sarje Rao: Where is the money?

Boy: I used it to give my college fees. Im sorry..

Sarje Rao: Ur dad put you on duty so who told you to study?

Boy: Mum said not to leave studies..

Sarje Rao: Those who work do not study!! Do you get it?

Boy: Im sorry.. I will..

Sarje Rao interrupts: Now you must pay the tax..

Boy: What tax?

Sarje Rao says to his men: Go, take his tax..
And then we hear the boy gets beaten up by Sarje Rao's men.. (I feel soo bad for the boy, poor chap) 😭
Scene 4: Niru and Her dad again

This time Niru's dad is sleeping on her lap.. Niru is happy to see her dad happy..

Niru: Chalo.. After so long atleast you remember something and someone.. That guy will come back to become friends with you..

She then remembers her moments with Chandu.. When he saves her from the truck, brings her dad to her, and says bye to her.. She is very happy to remember those and suddenly she remembers the promise she made to her aunt.. That she will never get married and will always stay with her dad.. And remembering that she hushes herself up saying:

'What are you thinking Niru? You are not allowed to think that way.. You have ur Baba's responsibilities and you cant think of anything else than ur duties towards ur Baba..

Scene 5: Chandu's Mom, Dad and Sister (Sonali)

Mom and Dad in the kitchen..

Dad says: now I realise, not only us policeman but you woman also get tired working all day..
Mom tells him to stop romancing as he has two two sons in his house.. They come out with the food and sits to eat.. Mom tells Sonali to call Sarje Rao.. Sonali doesn't listen and keeps looking at the magazine.. Her dad shouts saying that he is totally against her working as an actress because the tv people make so fake news and destroys ur real image.. Her mom hushes him up.. Sonali tells her dad to chill out and have food.. She leaves to call Sarje.. Sonali goes to the balcony and calls Sarje..

Sarje: What re Sonali? You always disrupts my game..

Sonali: Whatever.. You just come here.. Aii calling for dinner..

Sarje: Ok, you give it to Chandu and Im coming in few mins..

Sonali: come fast..

Scene goes back to Mom and Dad.. Dad is eating food and thanks his wife for making his special food.. Mom says: yeah I made it for you and Sarje.. You both love it nah?

Dad throws that food and says he doesn't want to eat anything thats made for Sarje..

Mom: why?

Dad: He is a disgrace to me.. I wonder what sin did I commit that Sarje got born in my family..

Mom: Heyy.. Your are wrong.. Why are you cursing Bhagwan for this.. If he has given us Sarje then he has also given us Sonali and especially ur dear Chandu..

Dad: Yes thats why Im worried that my good son never ever has to pay for my bad son!!

Mom is shocked to hear that!

The epi ends here!! 😊

Love, Nattie! 😃
Everything updated.. Hope you all liked it.. Plz press the LIKE button.. 😊
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Posted: 14 years ago
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Scenes 1-3 Updated.. More coming soon.. 😊
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Posted: 14 years ago
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The written update is done now.. Thanks..
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Posted: 14 years ago
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maixie i like the way u write update👍🏼.......u put the dialogues so well

the song seq was awesome y'day- finally some real spark in the show
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Posted: 14 years ago
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@Shivani: Thanks for appreciating buddy!! 🤗 And yeah ur soo right it has some spark now!! As I just said in Nikki's post about Arjun's expressions was the real spark!! Loved the song sequence!! ❤️
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Posted: 14 years ago
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Originally posted by: WooHooHaha21

@Shivani: Thanks for appreciating buddy!! 🤗 And yeah ur soo right it has some spark now!! As I just said in Nikki's post about Arjun's expressions was the real spark!! Loved the song sequence!! ❤️



hehe.....i like urs written update the most.....😳

seriously i can't wait to watch the edited song seq vid & hq caps & siggies for it

jun is simply wow here!
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Posted: 14 years ago
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Thanks for the Update😃 You really put in so much effort for this update, so colorful😃

Niru, at least I thought, looked better in yesterday episode in the song sequence.
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Posted: 14 years ago
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natty, policewala is his dad re😆.....

finally cute chemistry yaar, and neeru was looking wow in simple salwar .......

thanks for ur extra dose of comments,

ur right, ye chaman and neeru ki love story kabh shuru huae ? 😆
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Posted: 14 years ago
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Thanks for the lovely and colourful update Nattie....
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Posted: 14 years ago
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thnx nattie.........................lovely update

biting in form of taxes...thats really a blow in regulators face in a crude way...........................

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