Positive & Negatives of Fri Episode:My View

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Posted: 8 years ago
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I wanted to make this post Friday itself but damn IPL dint give me time to post ๐Ÿ˜ก๐Ÿ˜†

Anyways posting it now

Friday Episode was one of the best one in last few weeks with loads of RaIna moments and also something I wanted to see for a long time that is RaIna sharing the bed together and also their bedroom talk with RaIna showing concern for each other

But every episode has their share of positives and negatives and so I wanted to point out both so that CVs in future can take a note of what to do and what not to do ๐Ÿ˜›๐Ÿ˜†

Let me list out the Positives first

First RaIna sharing the same bed ..thank god no sofa-bed funda here ๐Ÿ˜ก..For once both behaved like matured adults ๐Ÿ˜ƒ..And I m glad CVs finally gave us a bedroom moment between them ๐Ÿ˜ณ


Second
their cute lights on-off moment ..Its quite common between a husband and wife ..one wants to sleep while the other is in a naughty mood ๐Ÿ˜‰ .. happens often in my case too and so I could connect with RaIna here ๐Ÿ˜†..This is what the show needs .. Scenes which can connect with the trp viewers ๐Ÿ‘๐Ÿผ


Third CVs keeping a proper balance of cute funny and intense moments between RaIna ..Just after the light on-off scene , we see Naina getting a horrific nightmare of Raghav getting shot .. She screams and gets up followed by Raghav consoling her and then RaIna's blissful hug ..One could clearly see the unconditional love that both feel for each other...Naina cannot even think of loosing her Raghav even in her worst nightmare and Raghav cannot see his Naina so restless ๐Ÿ˜ณ..They might keep taunting each other about their shortcomings , but in times of crisis they will always b there for each other ..This is the kind of balance we need to see in RaIna moments .. Some cute moments and some intense as well which can highlight their emotional bonding ๐Ÿ‘



Now let me list the Negatives as well

First I was not too convinced with the dialogues given to Naina and Raghav in the lights on-off scene .. I mean how on earth Naina can jokingly tell Raghav if he did something with her in Austria when she was drunk because of which she got preggy followed by Raghav taunting her about how she slept with someone else and so got preggy to which Naina dint look bothered at all and continued joking ๐Ÿ˜•.. My problem with the dialogues here is the way whole serious matter of surrogacy and sacrifice was turned into a silly nok-jhok between both ๐Ÿ˜•๐Ÿ˜•..And reason r those dialogues given to both .. The scene in itself was really cute between both like I said in the list of positives but what actually puts down the scene were those unwanted dialogues just to make it look funny which isn't the case with Naina's pregnency .. Dialogues play an important part in building up the characters and their chemistry .. So CVs need to b more careful about it ..


Second
When Naina asked Raghav about how the DNA reports changed , Raghav was like mayb Rehaan's doctor messed it up ,so all good .. Hein ?? ๐Ÿ˜• ..So Raghav actually left it to Rehaan's doctor messing it up .. How on earth was he so sure about it ?๐Ÿ˜•..If DNA reports dint match , what would he explain to his Dadi and family members then ?? ๐Ÿค”...Basically Raghav did no efforts to protect Naina's secret here ...Effort actually came from Rehaan's mother for her own reasons ..Not expected from a responsible man like Raghav ๐Ÿค”...Again I dunno if it was blunder in the writing or the dialogues because his carefree dialogues about Rehaan's doctor messing it up dint look convincing at all .. He should hv been more worried or sholud hv wondered how the DNA reports changed without him doing anything but he looked least bothered about it and just left it to assumption when he knows well that someone is trying to harm Naina and the baby ๐Ÿ˜•

So these are my positives and negatives for Friday episode .. RaIna scenes were beautiful to watch mainly because of AB and DD's super sizzling chemistry but somewhere I feel the writing and dialogues r letting them down ..Hope CVs hire better dialogue writers at least for RaIna scenes ..


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MF13 thumbnail
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Posted: 8 years ago
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well said.though raina moments were cute and funny but the dialogues had no logic..๐Ÿ˜•dd and ab amazing chemistry is what keeping the viewers glued.๐Ÿ˜Š.rest all very little logic..๐Ÿ˜”
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Posted: 8 years ago
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Nice post Jyoti! Agree both with positives and negatives..I didnt like when Raina so casually discussed the affair bit which is actually quite serious and the main reason of their seperation..I understand they are trying to keep things light but that doesnt mean everything has to become a comical nok jhok
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Posted: 8 years ago
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Jyoti ..awesome post..โญ๏ธ
seen your post in night only but my net ๐Ÿ˜ก starting acted weirdly ..
Now coming to post ..yes I also mentioned in my post that some scenes or things. ..we like ..some we don't ..sometimes their actions are not justified too..
Other than these mistakes done by cv's ..scenes and progression was good..
Last week Naina asked for Raghav's help ..๐Ÿ˜‰
She bite his finger ๐Ÿ˜†in laddu scene ..
She gave him flying kiss whether as a Part of teasing ๐Ÿ˜‰
They shared bedroom ..than bed also this time ..plus we got a blissful Raina hug too..โค๏ธ

Their concern is visible and their love and bonding too..โค๏ธ
But ya how can Naina raise a ques even in teasing way that Raghav took advantage of her ? and how can Raghav brush off serious ques of Naina that DNA test report can be a mistake by Khurana's doc? ๐Ÿ˜•
They are mature couple and cv's should write their scenes with proper logic ..and don't try to make intense scene funny and funny scene weird with these kinda convo..
DD-AB do every scene effortlessly but cv's should keep in mind that Raina's circumstances are what this point of time and where they can get funny and where they have to be serious.

Waiting for more of their intense scenes and heart to heart talk.๐Ÿ‘๐Ÿผ
But loved how now their equation changed ..Naina trusting Raghsv for her and her baby ..and he too worried about them most.
Loved the Fri scene ..when Naina and Raghav equally worried for each other.and Raina pic in Raghav's room aww..hinting something.๐Ÿ˜ณ
Hoping for more good Raina scenes.

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Posted: 8 years ago
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Nice post
agree with ur points !
Raina scenes was adorable

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Posted: 8 years ago
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Originally posted by: MF13

well said.though raina moments were cute and funny but the dialogues had no logic..๐Ÿ˜•dd and ab amazing chemistry is what keeping the viewers glued.๐Ÿ˜Š.rest all very little logic..๐Ÿ˜”



they definitely need to work on the dialogues .. its important in a love story
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Posted: 8 years ago
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Originally posted by: Aguamenti

Nice post Jyoti! Agree both with positives and negatives..I didnt like when Raina so casually discussed the affair bit which is actually quite serious and the main reason of their seperation..I understand they are trying to keep things light but that doesnt mean everything has to become a comical nok jhok



Exactly .. the whole base of separation was this surrogacy twist .. so why make a joke out of it as if its nothing .. it just weakens the whole reason of separation and one will wonder why did they really separate if they r so casual about this pregnency ..
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Posted: 8 years ago
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Originally posted by: RM14

Jyoti ..awesome post..โญ๏ธ

seen your post in night only but my net ๐Ÿ˜ก starting acted weirdly ..
Now coming to post ..yes I also mentioned in my post that some scenes or things. ..we like ..some we don't ..sometimes their actions are not justified too..
Other than these mistakes done by cv's ..scenes and progression was good..
Last week Naina asked for Raghav's help ..๐Ÿ˜‰
She bite his finger ๐Ÿ˜†in laddu scene ..
She gave him flying kiss whether as a Part of teasing ๐Ÿ˜‰
They shared bedroom ..than bed also this time ..plus we got a blissful Raina hug too..โค๏ธ

Their concern is visible and their love and bonding too..โค๏ธ
But ya how can Naina raise a ques even in teasing way that Raghav took advantage of her ? and how can Raghav brush off serious ques of Naina that DNA test report can be a mistake by Khurana's doc? ๐Ÿ˜•
They are mature couple and cv's should write their scenes with proper logic ..and don't try to make intense scene funny and funny scene weird with these kinda convo..
DD-AB do every scene effortlessly but cv's should keep in mind that Raina's circumstances are what this point of time and where they can get funny and where they have to be serious.

Waiting for more of their intense scenes and heart to heart talk.๐Ÿ‘๐Ÿผ
But loved how now their equation changed ..Naina trusting Raghsv for her and her baby ..and he too worried about them most.
Loved the Fri scene ..when Naina and Raghav equally worried for each other.and Raina pic in Raghav's room aww..hinting something.๐Ÿ˜ณ
Hoping for more good Raina scenes.



Actually porblem is with the dialogues .. sometimes they r very good and sometimes they make no sense .. I hope they change the dialogue writer

but apart from the dialogues , I really enjoyed RaIna scene after a long time .. it was cute , intense and at the same time we saw that emotional bonding and caring side of both for each other ..

just hope Veer's death mystry track is not dragged for ages now because clearly the whole scenario suddenly came up to give farewell to the actor .. I feel the murderer is Rehaan's mom .. mayb she tried to take advantage of the situation and kill Naina but ended up killing Veer ... Now Raghav assumes Naina killed Veer and so takes the blame on himself .. just hope real culprit is exposed in a week

We need focus back on RaIna bonding ..
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Posted: 8 years ago
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Originally posted by: jyoti06



Actually porblem is with the dialogues .. sometimes they r very good and sometimes they make no sense .. I hope they change the dialogue writer

but apart from the dialogues , I really enjoyed RaIna scene after a long time .. it was cute , intense and at the same time we saw that emotional bonding and caring side of both for each other ..

just hope Veer's death mystry track is not dragged for ages now because clearly the whole scenario suddenly came up to give farewell to the actor .. I feel the murderer is Rehaan's mom .. mayb she tried to take advantage of the situation and kill Naina but ended up killing Veer ... Now Raghav assumes Naina killed Veer and so takes the blame on himself .. just hope real culprit is exposed in a week

We need focus back on RaIna bonding ..

Same here ..they are treat to watch ..
but dialogs are prob sometimes
I think Rehaan's mom and I have read someone's view that it could be Armaan...

and I also thought can sanjana be the one taking advantage ?her char.also not exit properly?

or Ahanaa's ghost ๐Ÿ˜†
anything can happen in daily soaps.




ya but hope they don't drag it much and we get our #Raina back.๐Ÿ‘๐Ÿผ






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Posted: 8 years ago
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Wonderful post Jyoti you said what all i felt totally agree with ur both positive & negative points about the epi...๐Ÿ‘๐Ÿผ๐Ÿ˜Š

& di same here i'm busy with IPL too ๐Ÿ˜†
for the 1st time i'm watching IPL bcoz of Rashid Armaan he is frm my country Afghanistan he is in sunriser team actually there are 2 boys frm AFG but the other one hasn't start the matches yet it's a big thing to see an Afghan player doing IPL & doing good in it he so young has just turned 18 so i'm proud of him he is doing so in such a young age
although it was not his day in today's match

coming back to the post i loved Raina scenes their intense & nok jok scenes are too good to see & great that they are supporting each other Naina is trusting him ๐Ÿ˜ณ
& raghav is really taking care of her & her baby a lot ๐Ÿ˜ณ
& i agree with the negative points hope cvs improve these things although in last few episodes they hv improve a lot which i really liked hope they do a lil more work on it :)

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