my future track wish

My future track

I am so upset with cvs but still I think some creativity can very well save the show and give us what we want

I am not a writer but i wish some track to see in the show so i am writing it

And also need some activity at week ends

I am picking the story from where it is now

Harjeet plants veer to kill naina in godbarahi but Veer fails then harjeet goons killed veer and ragav arrestd for it

Harjeet pollutes ragav mind in jail against naina saying that she is going to be mother of Reyaan child and Reyaan changed R sample from his so this report and they have trapped him in murder

Parallel reyaan got file of surrogacy detail from Austria and he saws the pic of naina so his doubt is confirmed and he confronts naina , he emotionally tells that he loved his wife a lot and want to keep her last nishani

she under pressure says that the child is his and tells that ahaana fears that they will kill her baby thats why she fled from Austria, Reyaan denies then naina says might be his mother but reyaan is not ready to listen anything against his mother , naina says the he does not believe last words of his wife whom he claims to love so he has no right on child, the day he will punish the culprit she will hand over the child to him

while they are talking may be they r close and Ragav who got bailed out sees them and believes harjeet words

so in drunken state he says a lot of bad things to naina and butchers her character and so dadi also comes to know the truth and ragav ask naina to leaves the house , dadi also blames naina

so naina leaves the house immediately

and goons attack her, they hurt her and when they were going to stab her, Reyaan comes and takes her to hospital

where doctor tells him that the child is dead

he shattered leaves from there

mean while naina leaves the hospital with the child in her whomb as she requested doc to say lie to save his child ( credit of this idea goes to vandana)

naina fleds from there.

One day reyaan over hears his mothers concversatio with armaan comes to now how she killed ahana and his child and how he framed ragav

So he uts her and armaan in jail and the case on ragav was removed

one day both R faced each other , reyaan in depression due to his mother fraud and gulit of not saving his child and not believing his wife and also naina was drinking in a bar and ragav also comes there and starts saying ill for women and speaks against love , reyaan says the women know how to love, how to live for love and how to die for it and how to cherish it and he realised it after his loss and it is better that ragav realizes it before he looses anything taht cannot be compensated . ragav as arrogant man says that he will not have any loss as he is a successful businessman . then reyaan shows him the pic of ahana and she him of he recognizes her , he says that she is his first investor . then reyaan tells him thats he is his wife and she is dead now , tells him his story and how his story is entangled with ragav stories , he tells everything how naina gave him the money for patent and how ahana invest the money in R business because of naina , and ahana gave all this money because naina agreed to be surrogate

Listening this ragav lost ground below his feet , he was depressed and said that he has to find naina then reyaan told him about that night , the child's death , and that naina is missing from that

ragav and reyaan both were in same boat and they started living together and sharing their business as brothers, with only one aim to search naina but all their efforts were fruitless

leap of 5 months , Naina developed some complications as it was not a normal pregnancy , doctor said that they cannot save child and her both but she said that she wants the child to be alive , she telephoned reyaan and called him to so that she can hand over his amanat to him, puzzled and happy reyaan was going to the place and he informed ragav also .

reyaan reached the hospital , doctor gave him the child and said that mother is critical, naina smiles seeing the child and father , then she starts loosing her pulse, ragav entry in a helicopter in hospital ground he rushes inside but when he reaches naina room she was declared dead

then as in EK show all melodrama and ragav crying confessing his love to dear naina says sorry and asks her to return back , that he is erady to face any punishment but not ready for loosing ehr forever then threatening her to come back or he will kill himself ,he will pick a knife to cut his nerve and then naina hand move ,she starts responding and was saved .

then ragav efforts to woo naina

naina not ready to leave the place and come with ragav then re entry of naina mother naina goes with her to their house in Mumbai, so raina in same city,

ragav cute efforts to to ask naina forgiveness , naina forgives him but does not want to have any more relations with him as she still thinks that he does not love her and does not want any forced relations with him.

Reyaan talks to naina and make her realize how much ragav was dejected and depressed in last months in her absence and ask her to grab the happiness otherwise she will be left alone

Naian goes to meet ragav , ragav was remembering the harsh words he said to naina and was letting his anger out on wrestling pad, his hand were bleeding( inspired from some scene i don't remember) , naian stops him, bandages his hand and ragav starts crying and confesses his love , naina also confesses and an emotional hug, they cried over all their grievances and then slept in each other arms

Naina starts to leave but ragav stops her and says that he is sleeping such a good sleep after months so don't disturb her

Lots of sweet raina moments

Then reyaan and dadi going to naina mother house to ask naina's hand for ragav'

So we will get whole marriage sequence

Engagement

Mehindi

haldi

Sangeet

Marriage

And raina dance in each one

Their cute romantic moments

Like

after engagement brides and bridegroom were not allowed to meet so ragav enters in night naina house like a thief, he wakes naina and takes her with him for a long drive, naian feleling sleepy and hero in full romantic sequence will be fun to watch

Trp will shoot up wil all this

Whole marriage sequence with fetch popularity and this time it will be pure honest and sweet as well

Then a long honeymoon sequence with some foreign locations shooting

What u all say add ur dream scenes as well

I know it somewhat rough but

At least we can dream all this

I thought u will tell a short future track but tum ne pura ka pura show hi imagine karliya 🤣

Originally posted by: ___Neha___

I thought u will tell a short future track but tum ne pura ka pura show hi imagine karliya 🤣

Bygod i was reading and reading and reading but end ni hora tha ye to 😆

and aftr this i req u stop calling ur self a Non writer!!

Bcoz u have become a damnn Good writer already! 👏

Way much better than the original writers!! 😉

Haha off!!

U just nailed it!

Someone Mail this story to sp plzz 🤣

Originally posted by: ddfanb

thanks for reading it and appreciating it 😊

i think it is too long actuaaly i am so frustrated , show and leads have so much potential but cvs 😡😡

so i just wrote and wrote wishing could see someting like this in show

Wow... I cant believe when u said that u are not a writer.. Actually u wrote the story way better than the original writer.. Kudos to you.. Im not happy with current track but im getting some inspiration after reading your story.. I hope cvs can write like this and for sure trp will rise.. Please keep on writing like this to avoid this boring weekends..

Originally posted by: ___Neha___

I was supposed to write a short OS on future track but u made me causious now

U wrote better tha wat i was Thinking.. 😆

Ab me iss delima me hu ki me apni story dalu ki ni dalu?

Originally posted by: Misspakistanii

Wow... I cant believe when u said that u are not a writer.. Actually u wrote the story way better than the original writer.. Kudos to you.. Im not happy with current track but im getting some inspiration after reading your story.. I hope cvs can write like this and for sure trp will rise.. Please keep on writing like this to avoid this boring weekends..

Originally posted by: ddfanb

pls write ur os

will love to read something romantic on raina

will wait for it

Nice dear 😃