RaIna FF~An Unarranged Marriage(chap11 pg40 updated) - Page 4

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Posted: 8 years ago
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Originally posted by: lamia1210

thank u...and u don't need to wait long..

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Posted: 8 years ago
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Awesome update dear 😊 waiting for next plzz update soon 😊
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Posted: 8 years ago
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Awesome update
Wow raghav & naina already married
Naina remembering the past her wedding day
Poor raghav worried about wht will happen but can't do anything
Love it
Thanks sweety
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Posted: 8 years ago
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Originally posted by: nidhirastogi000

Awesome update dear 😊 waiting for next plzz update soon 😊

thanks and I will update veryyy soon.. 😆
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Posted: 8 years ago
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Originally posted by: simi91

Awesome update

Wow raghav & naina already married
Naina remembering the past her wedding day
Poor raghav worried about wht will happen but can't do anything
Love it
Thanks sweety

thank uuu...I m glad u liked...by the way raghav is going to do a lot of things now
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Posted: 8 years ago
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😳 😳 😆
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Posted: 8 years ago
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so today I am going to update the 2nd chapter...but I am a bit disappointed as the amount of likes and comments are quite low 😔..it will only take a few seconds for you to like or comment but it will mean a lot to me...by the way don't hesitate to criticize also...😊 without wasting any time I present you the second chapter...

Chapter 2


a girl comes in front of the mandap and says,"yeh shadi nahi ho sakti..."

the sentence exploded like a bomb in the hall...everyone except three persons became shocked...the three persons are veer ira and raghav.

dadi manages to speak and says,"arrey sanjana tum yaha kya kar rahi ho?tum toh India chali gayi thi na?"

"ha dadi mai chali gayi thi...maine socha tha ki apke khushiyo ke liye apni khushio ko bhul jayungi..."sanjana pauses for a moment.

"oh god...yeh drama queen!itna melodrama karne ki kya zarurat hai???" veer thinks to himself.

"lekin phir maine socha..." sanjana continues,"yeh mera haq hai..."

"jo kehna hai saf saf bolo..." dadi tells her in an angry tone.

"veer aur meri shadi ho chuki hai...aur veer yeh shadi nahi kar sakta..."

"yeh kaisa mazak hai sanjana?"asks sudha.

"mazak nahi chachi yahi sach hai...aur mere paas proof hai..."

sanjana shows them a paper and dadi snatches it from her...other people also come to see the paper finds out that the paper is nothing but veer-sanjana's marriage certificate.

veer was grinning all the time but he wears a sad look when dadi looks at him...

"veer kya yeh sab sach hai???"dadi asks.

veer remains silent...naina sitting beside him in the mandap is in complete shock but she looks at veer with hope.

"veer maine tujhse kuch pucha hai...jawab de.."dadi asks again..this time much louder.

"ha dads...sanjana bilkul sach bol rahi hai...hum apko batane hi wale the lekin apne meri shadi naina se tay karli...I'm really sorry dads...main..."

"khabardar mujhe dads bulaya toh..."dadi then looks at naina's mom who has started crying badly.

"behenji...mai apko bata nahi sakti mai kitni sharminda hu...mai apse hath jorke mafi mangti hu..."

"nahi...nahi ap kyu mafi mang rahi hai...isme apki koi galti nahi hai...galti toh hai meri beti ki kismat ki...shayad uske kismat me shadi likhi hi nahi hai..."naina's mom starts crying again.

naina gets up from the mandap and comes to her mother.

"maa yeh rona bandh karo aur andar chalo..."naina then looks at dadi,"ap log ab ja sakte hai...mujhe nahi lagta aur koi tamasha baki hai..."

Pam and sudha are enjoying the situation.

"pam tumne mujhe pehle kyu nahi bataya yeh sab hone wala hai..."

"bhabi mujhe bhi abhi pata chala hai...sanju ne mujhe kuch bhi nahi bola.."

"kher jo bhi hua acha hi hua..."

"ha woh toh hai..."

naina's mom continued crying loudly,"ab meri beti se kaun shadi karega?"

raghav is feeling terrible...coz he knew this would happen but he didn't do anything...he is feeling bad for naina's mom and mostly for naina who is trying to look normal...but raghav can understand what she is going through...

raghav didn't do anything earlier but now he can do one thing that will change everything..

"mai karunga naina se shadi..."raghav announced.

with this announcement...a kind of bomb exploded in the hall again...

a small smile ran across dadi's face...

"yeh toh bahut acha hoga...waise bhi raghav veer se zyada samajhdar aur responsible hai..."

naina's mom also stopped crying for a moment.

"lekin mujhe yeh shadi nahi karni..."naina says.

"yeh tu kya bol rahi hai naina beta?"asks dadi surprised.

"dadi mai koi khilona nahi hu ki apke ek potey ko pasand nahi aya toh dusre ko dedi..."naina is determined.

naina's mom takes the a step...

"tujhe meri kasam tu yeh shadi karley..."

"lekin maa..."

"agar tune shadi nahi ki toh tu mera mara hua muh dekhegi..."

"maaa!!!thik hai agar tum yahi chahti ho toh mai iss shadi ke liye taiyar hu..."

and thus naina and raghav's marriage takes place..



how was the chappy...it was too melodramatic,wasn't it?by the way don't forget to share ur views and hit the like button..
Edited by lamia1210 - 8 years ago
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Posted: 8 years ago
#38
Nice update... So veer's plan did work naina shocked and raghav wants to marry her seeing situation but naina doesnt want it .. She is also right in her place they cant treat her as a toy but her mom said her to marry raghav so she will agree
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Posted: 8 years ago
#39
interesting update
veer's plan is good so marriage didn't happen
but raghav came forward
and naina's mom agreed
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Posted: 8 years ago
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very nice update... so veer hired sanju for breaking his marriage with Naina...nice plan but too predictable.. anyway love the way naina isn't ready to get married to anyone just bcs her marriage broke with veer..Hate her mom so much so desperate to get her married... waiting for next.update soon
p.s=change the name from arjun to Raghav in last line😊

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