Jo aaye aap....On yday's episode...

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braveheartdoc

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Posted: 8 years ago

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Here is some piece of my mind on yday's episode. ...in the form of a shayari. ...hope I'll make sense...
My first here...

Dil ke darwaaze jo kab se the band
Aaj na jaane kya hua kaise hua
Aaye jo achanak aap humare saamne
Dil ek pal ko jaise ruk sa gaya
Socha na tha hoga aapse fir kabhi saamna
Dil ko bhi kitna mushkil tha yu thamna
Mere dil ki bas yehi hai aawaz
Sun le khuda meri yeh fariyaad
Jo aaye aap meri zindagi mein dobara
Na karna pade ek pal bhi tum bin guzaara...

Hope I could express myself...please provide me with your reviews...

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Posted: 8 years ago

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so beautiful...hope you will write more in future

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braveheartdoc

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Posted: 8 years ago

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Originally posted by: mariya354
Lovely

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Posted: 8 years ago

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Originally posted by: utopia88
Beautiful!👍🏼

Thanks dear😛

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Posted: 8 years ago

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Originally posted by: Snow_Angel
so beautiful...hope you will write more in future

Thanks dear...will try for sure😊

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Posted: 8 years ago

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Originally posted by: Geetdrashti
lovely

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Posted: 8 years ago

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Originally posted by: manju01
Nice

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Posted: 8 years ago

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wow!! nice yaar⭐️ Hopefully we will get to see many more in future😃

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Posted: 8 years ago

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Originally posted by: Keepdreaming
Lovely

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Posted: 8 years ago

Originally posted by: ...Rohini...
lovely 😃

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