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Posted: 3 years ago
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This is so cute pritha...enjoyed reading it..❤️

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Posted: 3 years ago
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Prithaaaaa! Sweetomsss. 🤗


This was such a sweet and feel good piece. LOVED IT.

There was fun, intimacy, jealousy and emotion all in here.

I laughed SO HARD when Shiva went all Dinosaur over Raavi while she was still in his arms. Very Shivi. I totally expect Bael-Buddhi to do something err...Bael-Budhhi that will put a stoppage over romance in upcoming episodes. LOL.

You did wonders with adding "Ladkon Ki Line" in there gurrrlll I cannot with jelly Shiva. He has a special place in my heartttt.

Heart jumps at its best.

Congratulations on your first work!!!


Waiting many more to come in future. ❤️

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Posted: 3 years ago
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This is so cuuuute Pritha ❤️❤️

ShiVi in love, haaye!

Love Raavi's cute antics and Shiva's possessiveness 😆

Perfect balance of their nok-jhok and pyaar ❤️

Thank you for writing 🤗

Can't wait for the next one!

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Posted: 3 years ago
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Very very cute! This soft playful ShiVi is what I crave to see, and I'm sure with how the track is going wonderfully, I can definitely see something similar to this happening soon❤️


Great one! :)

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Posted: 3 years ago
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Originally posted by: deeps07

This is so cute pritha...enjoyed reading it..❤️

Thank you Deepa Akka ❤️

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Posted: 3 years ago
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Originally posted by: EuphoricDamsel.

Prithaaaaa! Sweetomsss. 🤗


This was such a sweet and feel good piece. LOVED IT.

There was fun, intimacy, jealousy and emotion all in here.

I laughed SO HARD when Shiva went all Dinosaur over Raavi while she was still in his arms. Very Shivi. I totally expect Bael-Buddhi to do something err...Bael-Budhhi that will put a stoppage over romance in upcoming episodes. LOL.

You did wonders with adding "Ladkon Ki Line" in there gurrrlll I cannot with jelly Shiva. He has a special place in my heartttt.

Heart jumps at its best.

Congratulations on your first work!!!


Waiting many more to come in future. ❤️

Thank you Ritu😆❤️

Yes, Shiva has all the potential for turning a romantic moment into a comedy one🤪

Jelly Shiva is probably everyone's favourite ☺️

Thank you for your encouragement😆❤️

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Posted: 3 years ago
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Originally posted by: nolee3097

This is so cuuuute Pritha ❤️❤️

ShiVi in love, haaye!

Love Raavi's cute antics and Shiva's possessiveness 😆

Perfect balance of their nok-jhok and pyaar ❤️

Thank you for writing 🤗

Can't wait for the next one!

Thank you Namrata ❤️❤️

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Posted: 3 years ago
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Originally posted by: sillysatchel

Very very cute! This soft playful ShiVi is what I crave to see, and I'm sure with how the track is going wonderfully, I can definitely see something similar to this happening soon❤️


Great one! :)

Thank you Silly satchel (I guess your name is Megha ❤️)

I am too hoping to see this side of Shivi ❤️❤️

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Posted: 3 years ago
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Array kitna pyaara thaa yeh ❤️


- Raavi pouting over how she gives him kisses and he only takes ugly pictures of her

- Shiva asking valid questions (No seriously, paao kilo toh uske khud ka wazan hai woh boree kaise uthayegi 🥲)

- Raavi promising to be by his side, throughout this new journey of his..


^ my favourite bits.


Waiting for the next OS / FF .. whatever it is you decide to write. Do tag me.

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Posted: 3 years ago
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Originally posted by: barkhaa_tpm

Array kitna pyaara thaa yeh ❤️


- Raavi pouting over how she gives him kisses and he only takes ugly pictures of her

- Shiva asking valid questions (No seriously, paao kilo toh uske khud ka wazan hai woh boree kaise uthayegi 🥲)

- Raavi promising to be by his side, throughout this new journey of his..


^ my favourite bits.


Waiting for the next OS / FF .. whatever it is you decide to write. Do tag me.

Thank you for such a sweet review barkha❤️

I'll surely tag you in the next one as well❤️

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