Shivi TS: Yun Hi (2nd part coming soon) - Page 3

Originally posted by: sahapallavi

Honestly this hurts i can never like stories where raavi or shiva gets married to someone else like they parted away is accepted to me but not getting married to someone else

What r ur thoughts about shiva during divorce track is exactly what mine are but still i never want shiva or raavi to get married again to other persons

For me shiva needed time and space for clearing his thought which this family never gave him and that is also one of reason shiva behaved like a jerk

About apology part i totally agree with you but i m rooting how shiva behaves with her now and differentiate betwn bhabhi, maa and raavi

Even though I'm the author of this story and this whole thing came out of my brain, a part of me also doesn't want to believe in a universe where Shiva and Raavi aren't together 😳 But this feeling of not wanting them to ever separate is only reserved for the pre-marriage and early post-marriage Shivi! I have no such feelings for the Shivi we got to see after the separation track. I feel like the Shiva that we got to see in the past few months does not deserve Raavi.

I'm just hoping for the new education track to revive Shiva's character and make him see Raavi's worth!

Another main reason for writing this was to make Susu miserable (at least in my world) 😃

Originally posted by: Odette_delusion

I loved it❣️❣️

It was something i wish for raavi ehen shiva and suman behaved with her like she was a trash..........

Thank you ❤️ Same! I always hated Suman and Shiva for how they treated Raavi

Originally posted by: PoohNotFound

Wow, Yaar. what an amazing OS.👍🏼 Really happy that Raavi has got her khushiyaan. Honestly, though ShiVi is the OTP, their essence has been long gone and the makers have done nothing to restore it. Even now, I do think sometimes that Shiva doesn't deserve Raavi. They have completely erased the past 6,8 months of their lives.It is kinda unfair to the audience that they've just started the current track without any proper closure of the previous kaands they did.... but what can we do?😕Anyway, This story was a breathe of fresh air. ❤️

Though, now the story is slowly starting to pick up. If you can erase the past 6,8 months like they did, you'd be good.😆

Thank you so much! I completely agree with you! Trust me, I've tried to erase my memories of Shiva from the past but it's so damn hard! I'm just really hoping for his character to become better in the future 🥱

Yk sometimes I feel like Shivi would've gotten a good character journey if this was a finite show rather than an ITV show that must be dragged for the sake of TRP. Just imagining it makes me feel so happy

Bold: Oh my gosh it's so frustrating that the writers think that we will forget everything that Shiva and his family have done to Raavi! The poor child has faced so much mental torture in her so-called sasural that it's hard to look past it all. The part that makes me angrier is that they never even bothered to give a proper apology to Raavi. NO one said sorry for intoxicating her, calling her names (hate the name Markundi Gayi btw), insulting her, blaming her for trying to kill Susu, and not trusting her. The writers seriously tried to wrap this all raita by Shiva giving this ITTU sa sorry :( Like his sorry felt so insignificant and it seems like he didn't even mean it since he went on to demean her again (literally a few days after his apology)

After this rant, I feel like writing another separation story🤣

Originally posted by: Radhi12

Painfull but great os

Thank you so much! I'm glad you gave it a shot ❤️

Originally posted by: Paru95

This was sooooo beautiful...but painful to read

But Shiva and Suman can only fully appreciate Raavi if they have to go through some serious destruction....

Loved it♥️

Thanks for your comment! I personally wished for something big to happen so I could see Shiva and Susu scared as hell of losing Raavi but Choubey's humari sunte kab hai? lol 🤓

Originally posted by: Shivifan

Amazing story though it's painful but agree with you 💯. How Shiva and Suman treated Raavi they deserve all this

Thank you so much for reading this piece with an open mind! Also, I updated this on Wattpad as well ❤️

Originally posted by: Pritha_31

No body can hate this, I love Shivi from the bottom of my heart but trust me the ship became very toxic during that track, so much so that moving on was actually the best thing Raavi could do. I'm genuinely very happy for Raavi who grew and chose to give her life a new chance and get all the respect that she deserves, I'm definitely Raavi biased and this piece where Raavi fell out of love from a then toxic partner brings me immense joy❤️

That's so kind of you! 😳 Seeing Raavi get humiliated since the Disha track has been so hard to endure! And Shiva not taking any direct actions to confront those who humiliate Raavi has been even more frustrating to watch 😳 I actually liked Shiva's character way more in my beginning phase of Shivi obsession but my love has faded away. I know that relationships are meant to be flawed but Shivi's marriage became wayyyy too toxic...

I think I'll write another chapter from the POV of Raavi so stay tuned 😉

Originally posted by: mandira2

That's so kind of you! 😳 Seeing Raavi get humiliated since the Disha track has been so hard to endure! And Shiva not taking any direct actions to confront those who humiliate Raavi has been even more frustrating to watch 😳 I actually liked Shiva's character way more in my beginning phase of Shivi obsession but my love has faded away. I know that relationships are meant to be flawed but Shivi's marriage became wayyyy too toxic...

I think I'll write another chapter from the POV of Raavi so stay tuned 😉

Don't forget to tag me in that, I hope Raavi has fallen out of love with Shiva completely so that it won't be unfair to Mihir❤️

Originally posted by: Pottermeow

Mandira🤗!!! A beautiful, beautiful piece! Similar to yourself, I don't see Shivi as a hero and heroine anymore. They've both made mistakes, and the bad in their relationship right now seems to have overpowered the good....

I loved Mihir! And Shiva? I wish he'd actually gotten to see Raavi. His reaction would've been interesting. But on the other hand, I also appreciate what you've done here. Because if Shiva had seen Raavi without a warning, things could have gotten very bad very fast. And Raavi just doesn't need that in her life anymore, does she?

Also, very glad that Raavi, despite her unwillingness to get married to Mihir, has taken a chance with all her heart and reaped the benefits of it...

PS Would you ever do a second part where Shiva actually sees Raavi? Where things between them are platonic as all hell, but teaches Shiva to take chances with his life and look beyond saboot?

PPS I've updated a new chapter of my FF! Do let me know what you think of it if you find the time to read it!

The biggest virtual hug to you Sathya 🤗Thank you for always taking the time to write such lovely comments!

To be completely honest, I didn't think people will enjoy the character of Mihir or this story, but I'm glad that you've liked my creation! I personally decide to write this to vent out my frustrations and give Raavi the good life she deserves (because our bacchi is the real heera 😳)

In my original idea, I was actually going to make Shiva see Raavi but it didn't fit the flow of this story! BUT I am going to write an update from Raavi's POV (will try my best to incorporate your ideas)! 😉

PS I read your story! I enjoyed it a lot! ALSOOO, you have to update "When they Knew" soon!! This is a request

Originally posted by: Palak2812

Can I say I loved it

Call me sadist ir whatever but I always wanted someone else for Raavi.

I'm glad you loved it ❤️ No one was saying it out loud but we all highkey wanted someone new for Raavi. We just didn't want to let go of Kanwar so no one said it 🤣I got so desperate at a point that I didn't even mind if Mami succeeded in getting Raavi married to that NRI lmao