Asmaani Jodi, Shiva aur Raavi : A Series - (Chpt 3 - pg 7- updated) - Page 2

This is so beautiful✨

The words 🥺

The way you describe Shiva and Raavi's relationship was so heart touching ❤

You write beautifully Do write more 🌸

Aasmani jodi🧿

This is soooooo beautiful♥️

This is how we all want to see our ShiVi

Loved it🤗

This wass soooooo beautiful..A sheer beauty...perfectly crafted.....Absolutely like a going through a miracle story. ❣️

Maine kaha na, asmaani jodi ko zameen samjh nahi paati.... The reference had my heart...❤️❤️

I was so lost into this that when I realised that they are no more in this world... My heart broke... Okay..but still....this piece was absolute sukoooon....

Shivi would be just like that... Inke pyaar ke kisse zamaon tk sunaye jynge🥺🥺🥰🥰🥰🥰🥰

Jaise chand chahe jitna hi door kyu na ho dharti se, ghumta to wo dharti ke ird gird hi hai na, aise hi dur hokar bhi inki duniya ek dusre ke ird gird ghuma karti thi

Junoon ne nafrat ka libaaz nikal kar, ishq ki chadar odh li

These are my two absolute fav lines🥺🥺❤️

This is such a feel good drabble❤️

I can imagine the whole Somnath giving misal of Shiva and Raavi.

Jinki nafrat itni Kamal ki hai, unki aashiqui to misal banegi hi

Oh my god this was so so so beautiful fresh and emotional story 😍😍😭😭

It was like we r reliving their journey through old man words 💖💖💖

Loved loved loved it 💜💜

Do write more 💗

P.s i m pallavi from twitter i hope u remember me (tt use karna kaafi kam ho gya miss ur threads though)

edit - do tag me in ur future stories i m all in for it

Who can say rooh it's your first time as a writer

As much as I admire your tweets

No doubt that this chotu sa drabble is giving me so sukoon.......

Our #ShiVi is indeed the asmaani jodi

Swaym bhagwaan Shiv aur mata parvati ki tarah

Bahut hi masoom aur bahut hi jwalan sheel

Ek puri si dasstan hai inki kahaani❤️

Loved it

Ab aise hi write more

❤️

roooooohi, won't write any long comments, just because I don't want to 😎

but your words, shabd, alfaaz

the ones who inspired you to write this story must be very lucky, hmM 🤗

Originally posted by: Anu_V

my spot

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the fact that shivi's story is so fairytale like is making my heart go whoosh

in my head, this is the epilogue for the show- thats it 🤗❤️

this is so beautifully written, asmaani jodi

poetic, just like some of shiva's lines in the show

some of my absolute fav bits:

"Sab kehte the, kabhi ek saath nahi reh paayenge dono, ek aag to duja paani, inka kaha koi mel."

"Waqt guzra, ladaiya jhagde hue, itne ki kabhi kabhi lagta yeh dono ek dusre ko hi nahi, poori duniya ko apne saath bhasm karde"

"Jaise chand chahe jitna hi door kyu na ho dharti se, ghumta to wo dharti ke ird gird hi hai na, aise hi dur hokar bhi inki duniya ek dusre ke ird gird ghuma karti thi"

"Jo galliyan kabhi unke jhagdo ke awaazein suna karti thi, wo ab unke pyaar ka raag sunne lagi. Misaal ban gaye dono, aaj bhi jab do pyaar karne waale milte hai, to log dua karte hai ki unka pyaar bhi Shiva-Raavi jaisa ho."

THE WORDS! 😭

waise, who is the old man hmmm? srk uncle na? or pakka someone related to him? 🤣😎

ShiVi is our very own fairytale

aww epilogue ka honour me shy 😳

only words , shabd alfaaz for you 😛

the old man is............. main kyu bataun??? tum khud pata lagaao like sherlock pikachu Shiva 😎

Originally posted by: blissfulcanyon

Taking the second spot because someone stole mine 😭

arey tumhara to spot mere dil o dimaag main hai naa, rent free wo bhi 😎😉☺️

Originally posted by: sillysatchel

Whichever spot Meghu gets

Okay first of all

I'M SAD THAT THEY ARE NOT ALIVE OKAY? IT BROKE MY DIL SO MUCH. But the good kind of break.

The kind of bittersweet sukoon I got to read that Shiva and Raavi are their town's most famous couple, as they should be. Everyone knows about them, wants to be them, cherishes them, and that's a beautiful thing to read!

You've written it so beautifully, Rooh! Jaha se bhi inspiration mila ho, it's amazing, aur likha kar, this is as beautiful and insightful as your threads, I love it <3

awwww kaagaz, i'm so glad you loved it 😳

they may not be alive but their story lives on forever but in my head, they lived together happily until the end ❤️