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Originally posted by: Nicky-nish

Ye kya toh rishwat de rahi hai...Aise nahi chalega🤣

Dedh mahine se aarhi hai ye rishwat tu tension mat le 🤣

Originally posted by: EuphoricDamsel.

DO you want me to cry because of the trip reference???

Because I WILL.

Isn't it good I'm actually reliving it? 😂 Also, maine kaha tujhe novel jitna chapter likhne ko 😂😂 kaha toh hai ki attention span hadd Kam hai mera

Chapter 1:

OMG!

Such an intricate depth of emotion!!

Two differently similar people being immensely attracted to one another. But on being unable to act upon it, they divulge in two different paths with their cores just being the same! Their globe keeps revolving around each other never the less! Such a bliss! Beautiful chap!

Damn it! Such a profound depth!

Loved their connect, they are piping their hopes right from the raw age of thirteen, already knotted by their emotions but are unable to come in terms with it. So so so relatable.

Every bit of Shiva's protectiveness towards her and Raavi's justifying guarding of her own emotions is so breathtaking to read. You have done justifications with their characters, especially with their ego-ego defence.

I just have one word to say BEAUTIFUL!

I bow to thee highness!

Wonderful writing! ❤️

Chapter 2:

You are one HECK of a writer!

A winsome work from your fingertips.

Few of the scenes gave me Yeh Jawani Hai Deewani vibes, but your work is much more wholesome than that. The turbulence in their thoughts mixed with confusion and love is pleasing to read.

They have easily been each other's hope for a long long time; the strike of realization, the confession, the fear of loosing each other....ufff!

Love Rishita here, such a true friend with a heart of gold! And what a wonderful friend is Siddharth! Beautiful piece of art!

Love how their emotional let out started with a spark of fight and ended up creating a lighting stricken outpour followed by a raw and passionate confession. This is marvelous!

The forehead kiss is a pure bliss! Such an intimate yet pure scene.

Every detailing in your writing gave me an insight of what was being transpired between the two. The blooming of their emotions has been written with an emotional maturity, bow down to you again! Thank you for giving this golden and artistic two shot! Love this to the moon and it's back! ❤️❤️❤️

- Dyuthi.

Originally posted by: ClumsyMe

Chapter 1:

OMG!

Such an intricate depth of emotion!!

Two differently similar people being immensely attracted to one another. But on being unable to act upon it, they divulge in two different paths with their cores just being the same! Their globe keeps revolving around each other never the less! Such a bliss! Beautiful chap!

Damn it! Such a profound depth!

Loved their connect, they are piping their hopes right from the raw age of thirteen, already knotted by their emotions but are unable to come in terms with it. So so so relatable.

Every bit of Shiva's protectiveness towards her and Raavi's justifying guarding of her own emotions is so breathtaking to read. You have done justifications with their characters, especially with their ego-ego defence.

I just have one word to say BEAUTIFUL!

I bow to thee highness!

Wonderful writing! ❤️

Dyuthiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiii 😭❤️

You gonna make me cry! Aise kaise!

I am known to ramble a lot while writing and hence this took me months not even kidding. I started off with the concept in January LMAO.

This Raavi is probably the most amazing one I have written everrrrr. She is firm on her decisions no matter what and is never swayed, whatever be the consequnces.

Originally posted by: ClumsyMe

Chapter 2:

You are one HECK of a writer!

A winsome work from your fingertips.

Few of the scenes gave me Yeh Jawani Hai Deewani vibes, but your work is much more wholesome than that. The turbulence in their thoughts mixed with confusion and love is pleasing to read.

They have easily been each other's hope for a long long time; the strike of realization, the confession, the fear of loosing each other....ufff!

Love Rishita here, such a true friend with a heart of gold! And what a wonderful friend is Siddharth! Beautiful piece of art!

Love how their emotional let out started with a spark of fight and ended up creating a lighting stricken outpour followed by a raw and passionate confession. This is marvelous!

The forehead kiss is a pure bliss! Such an intimate yet pure scene.

Every detailing in your writing gave me an insight of what was being transpired between the two. The blooming of their emotions has been written with an emotional maturity, bow down to you again! Thank you for giving this golden and artistic two shot! Love this to the moon and it's back! ❤️❤️❤️

- Dyuthi.

I'm blushing right now. ☺️

I was actually going for the YJHD vibes but bunny ain't my fav characters so I'm glad I did not create any of the characters according to that movie. These all are a figment of my own imagination.

Rishita-Raavi bond is the next thing everyone went Gaga over in this story and I plan to use it more in my future stories. Its wholesome.

Thank you so much for reading and both these comments. You took my breath away! 😭❤️

Originally posted by: EuphoricDamsel.

Kal Micro pracs hai meri. And it's my worst subject of the year. 🤪

PS I feel soooooooo exhausted!!!!!!!!! 😭😭😭

Originally posted by: Pottermeow

Kal Micro pracs hai meri. And it's my worst subject of the year. 🤪

PS I feel soooooooo exhausted!!!!!!!!! 😭😭😭

I WANT THIS EXHAUSTION.

I WANT

I WANT

Woww

That was beautiful! You should definitely write more. Raavi Yaha bhi chaa gayi. ❤️❤️❤️ Aur Shiva Yaha bhi gadheda kaisi harkat ki.

Ooof. I loved the trope. Padaku ladki, hearthrob ladka. Except here both always wanted each other and Shiva in his MU of her liking his brother pushed her away. He needed bits of jealousy for putting Raavi through unnecessary misery for 6 years because he assumed something. But loved the confession and the ending❤️.

Originally posted by: Mountains_Lakes

Woww

That was beautiful! You should definitely write more. Raavi Yaha bhi chaa gayi. ❤️❤️❤️ Aur Shiva Yaha bhi gadheda kaisi harkat ki.

Ooof. I loved the trope. Padaku ladki, hearthrob ladka. Except here both always wanted each other and Shiva in his MU of her liking his brother pushed her away. He needed bits of jealousy for putting Raavi through unnecessary misery for 6 years because he assumed something. But loved the confession and the ending❤️.

Awwwwwwww Thank you so much for reading! ❤️

I'm glad you liked it. This is the best version of Raavi I have written and I am super happy how she is stealing hearts.