ShiVi OS: When The Tables Turn - Page 3

Originally posted by: EuphoricDamsel.

Golly who is this cutie as Shiva Pandya?!

Awww. He such a coochie-coo.

Okay I understand Raavi being irritated very well. She should be seething Ngl but this Shiva is hard to resist.

The 'Humara' monologue made me blush so bad. OMG.☺️

It feels great to have the roles reversed for once.

For Shiva to be the one to work on everything and try to build their relationship from scratch.

The Khatiya bit had me cracking. Miyaan-Biwi aur bagal mein Kesar chudaael lol...sahi hai...this would have made a great crack-fic. LMAO.

All in all a nice feel-good and soothing piece//

Would have wanted to read an apology though...Can I expect a sequel to this? Pweashhh??!!

Keep writing. ❤️

Gimme the angsty one phastum phast.

Thank you so much, Ritu!! 🤗

Prequel ka idea hai (apology will be in that), not so much sequel. Will have to think about that. 😆

Angsty one in progress.

Originally posted by: mpks1

🤣🤣🤣

I am starting with a laugh emoji🤣 because you made your khayali pulav into an OS 😆

This was a fun read. I don’t want Raavi giving in easily. What goes around, comes around😆

Why don’t you make it into a TS and give us a part 2 as to how Raavi won the war🤣

Thanks, Akka!!

Ab PS wale denge ya nahi pata nahi, to socha apna hi try kar loon. 😆

Accho, wo last line aise hi chep diya. Now I have to actually think of something for the second part. Kuch aaya, to likhoongi. 👍🏼

P.s. The idea of push-Shiva-into-the-well-and-close-it, I got it from the EDT when you suggested it for Suman Kaki. 😆

Originally posted by: Ocean_breeze

Leh ye sab bhi sikhana pdta hai🤣

Haan!! Sab ko nahi aata. Then I poked around the forum, and found some links, and figured it out. 😎

Originally posted by: VNuts

Thank you all for your amazing reactions!! 🤗

Honestly, I'm writing fiction for the first time (reading is more my jam), so I was really nervous, but you all have been lovely!! 😳

We've discussed in the EDT about Raavi realising her craziness and Shiva acting like Raavi in love, so I thought I'll try it out. Besides, Shiva being the gigantic baby he is, it wasn't that hard a stretch that he'd be moony-eyed and want all of Raavi's attention all the time.

Once again, thank you all. ❤️

P.s. Part 2 ka abhi kuch idea nahi hai.

you did amazing job considering your first time i m no writer but i felt satisfied reading this 💖

let's discuss more on edt part2 ka idea bhi nikal aayega hamare kisi ek khayaali pulao se 😆

Vandanaaaaaa🤗

This is such an amazing OS🥰

And such an awwwwdorable one tooo

I loved the attention seeking Shiva and pissed Raavi😆

I cud literally see the pissed face of Mahasaas🤣

Loved it dear♥️

Waiting for more ffs from you😍

This is sooo good Vandana!
So refreshing! ❤️🤗
I loved it. You have to write another part for this!
Lattu Shiva another favorite of mine!
Such a beautiful role reversal which all wanted to see in the show!

Thank you, guys, so much!! 🤗

I'm glad you enjoyed these versions of annoyed Raavi and pyaar-mein-lattoo Shiva. 😆

Hilarious and super cute❤️

Love this update so so much

Show me aise shiva milne se raha.. Toh aise kaam chalana padega

Wow V, What a hilarious OS😆 I absolutely loved the role reversal you did.But Raavi shouldn't give in too easily. 😆

Can we get a part-2 pleaj?😳