ShiVi TS: Humraah - [Part 3 - Pg 9|12/01/22|Complete] - Page 9

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Posted: 3 years ago
#81

Originally posted by: EuphoricDamsel.

Charam Sukh has Entered the chat 🤡❤️


RES

UNRES


Chalo pehle chhootu sa sorry kyunki mtlb der hogyi unres mein...but life got in the way.

Moving on-


I KNEW IT! I just knew it had to be baingan ki sabzi. Inkling hogya tha mujhe pehle se hi ki aisa hi khurafat kregi dobi madam hmari.🤣

Shiva eating the sabzi even after professing dislike only to see her smile has my my heart.

I blushed SO HARD in the next instance...I can't with Kaddu Pandya's charm man.

'Main Utna hi Khaunga Jitna tu Plate me dalegi' .....HAYYEEE RE CUTIEE.

Raavi flustering afterwards was so so so relatable I went all - "I know Dobi behen. I know."🤡

Lattoo Raavi entered the chat pretty soon afterwards yo. Understandable hai.

Shiva Bhaiyya needs refund from Raavi didi. Pls dedo ASAP. Hm yahi chahte hain.

Itne mein hi scandalous hogya iska tho kahan hm aur bht kuch soch ke baithe hain.

Ughhh Dev babu is such a pain. His MBA crap got no chill. Always the one 'jataaoing his Bht sara dimaag' and how he's too good to work all this. (I honestly feel he doesn't want to work at all. Ghar ke kaam bhi nhi hote bahar hm dhoondhenge nhi ghar ka bahana maar ke.)

I was glad Shiva gave it back to him.

The hug again took my breath away. SO beautifully written.

Sach me aadat daal lo Chipkali we need the romance here. Sigh.

Loved this Blissy. LIght hearted-Fluff-cuteness all in one. It was a fun read.

Waiting for more content from you okieeee? 🤗❤️


Lol Ritu no need to apologize! Life gets in the way, I understand. Apne time mast lekar padho 😆


I knew you all would catch on 🤣

Baingan and ShiVi go hand-in-hand together :P

Raavi can't leave a chance to annoy Mr. Chattan 😎

And him being the ever-indulgent softie, just nods along 😆


I'm glad you hated Dev, because well, that was the point 🤣

He had been annoying me in the show so I decided to paint him as the useless insaan he is 🤪


And thank you for the long comment! Padh kar di khush hogaya!❤️🤗

And I'm super duper happy you liked this fluffy piece (I know that's all I usually write ahaa) 😛

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Posted: 3 years ago
#82

Blissy, this was so so so beautiful!! ❤️❤️


All of the mush in one side and the below on other. It made my mush heart pounding at 2x speed.


"S-Shiva? Kya hua? Main tujhse kuch pooch rahi thi? Tune aur khaana kyun nahi liya? Matlab hum dono ko pata hai tera dinosaur jaisa pet bhara nahi hoga..." Raavi trailed off.

Shiva rubbed the back of his neck before continuing. "Tujhe yaad nahi hai kya?"

"Kya yaad nahi hai?"

"Maa ne kya kaha tha? Ki main utna hi khaunga jitna tu mujhe degi." Shiva answered.


Oof, Bliss❤️❤️❤️❤️. He remembered that and followed that. Didn't eat anymore afterwards. And now Raavi will never forget it either. And even I forgot about it. But can we even hope for it anymore in the show? Loved how Raavi had Srikhand to make up for it.


And then Shiva letting Raavi tease her and flipping tables in her was love. Loved how calmly he took care of the balla situation. Plus the shade on Nalla. Yeh to 💯 kahi nahi Milne wala. But I loved how Raavi remembered the haldi scene and Shiva nonchalantly responded that he knows and entertains her pulling his leg. There was one little thing though. Near the end, I wish he pulled her back like he did during the first time for parallel sake and he also voiced about their haldi. And Raavi retiring back with how she vowed that day that he'll fall in love with her.


And then the kangi wale Scene ka AU. Yeh sav cheese Sirf khayali pulav hi rahengi. But if PS doesn't serve this is going to be my PS wali reality. Thanks for this wonderful TS!❤️❤️

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Posted: 3 years ago
#83

Originally posted by: EuphoricDamsel.


Padh liyaaaaa 🤗

Bonfire OS tho aisa lag raha bhasm na ho jaye meri nazron se...kuch kiya hi nahi maine usme aage 1.5 scene bas....Pta nhi kya natak hai 😔


Mera bonfire OS 😭👎🏼

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Posted: 3 years ago
#84

Originally posted by: blissfulcanyon


Mera bonfire OS 😭👎🏼

Doob raha hai 💔😭

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Posted: 3 years ago
#85

Originally posted by: blissfulcanyon


Lol Ritu no need to apologize! Life gets in the way, I understand. Apne time mast lekar padho 😆


I knew you all would catch on 🤣

Baingan and ShiVi go hand-in-hand together :P

Raavi can't leave a chance to annoy Mr. Chattan 😎

And him being the ever-indulgent softie, just nods along 😆


I'm glad you hated Dev, because well, that was the point 🤣

He had been annoying me in the show so I decided to paint him as the useless insaan he is 🤪


And thank you for the long comment! Padh kar di khush hogaya!❤️🤗

And I'm super duper happy you liked this fluffy piece (I know that's all I usually write ahaa) 😛

Tu kuchh bhi likh main sbse pehle aaungaa padhneeee!

bhaaag ke 🤗

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Posted: 3 years ago
#86

Originally posted by: Mountains_Lakes

Blissy, this was so so so beautiful!! ❤️❤️


All of the mush in one side and the below on other. It made my mush heart pounding at 2x speed.


"S-Shiva? Kya hua? Main tujhse kuch pooch rahi thi? Tune aur khaana kyun nahi liya? Matlab hum dono ko pata hai tera dinosaur jaisa pet bhara nahi hoga..." Raavi trailed off.

Shiva rubbed the back of his neck before continuing. "Tujhe yaad nahi hai kya?"

"Kya yaad nahi hai?"

"Maa ne kya kaha tha? Ki main utna hi khaunga jitna tu mujhe degi." Shiva answered.


Oof, Bliss❤️❤️❤️❤️. He remembered that and followed that. Didn't eat anymore afterwards. And now Raavi will never forget it either. And even I forgot about it. But can we even hope for it anymore in the show? Loved how Raavi had Srikhand to make up for it.


And then Shiva letting Raavi tease her and flipping tables in her was love. Loved how calmly he took care of the balla situation. Plus the shade on Nalla. Yeh to 💯 kahi nahi Milne wala. But I loved how Raavi remembered the haldi scene and Shiva nonchalantly responded that he knows and entertains her pulling his leg. There was one little thing though. Near the end, I wish he pulled her back like he did during the first time for parallel sake and he also voiced about their haldi. And Raavi retiring back with how she vowed that day that he'll fall in love with her.


And then the kangi wale Scene ka AU. Yeh sav cheese Sirf khayali pulav hi rahengi. But if PS doesn't serve this is going to be my PS wali reality. Thanks for this wonderful TS!❤️❤️


I'm so glad you loved it ML!❤️ Especially elated to know that the whole part about him eating only how much she serves him made you 2x mushy!😆

That is actually one of my most fav scenes ever, especially because of how soft and subtle it was, so I thought to weave in here.


Meanwhile, Dev had been annoying me on the show for quite a while and I decided to take out my bhadaas through this 🤪


Raavi remembering the haldi scene was always supposed to happen, and I'll let you in on a secret, Shiva was supposed to remember their haldi scene but me being lazy ole me, actually ended up axing the scene because I didn't want to write any further 🤣


I absolutely adore long comments and reading about what everyone liked so thanks for leaving me such lambe commentsss! I appreciate it sm 🤗

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Posted: 3 years ago
#87


Nahi nahiiiiii, aisa mat karo 😭

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Posted: 3 years ago
#88

Originally posted by: blissfulcanyon


Nahi nahiiiiii, aisa mat karo 😭

jo likho sahi hi nahi baith raha...itna inconsistent sa...unsatisfactory sa...dekh post tho hoyega...but kuch acha expect mat kr ke baith...mereko billkul maza nhi aara 😔

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Posted: 3 years ago
#89

Originally posted by: EuphoricDamsel.

jo likho sahi hi nahi baith raha...itna inconsistent sa...unsatisfactory sa...dekh post tho hoyega...but kuch acha expect mat kr ke baith...mereko billkul maza nhi aara 😔


Oh no, that's the worst bubs 😭

Waise toh I love whatever you write, but don't post until you're not satisfied.

Main mazaak mein update ke liye bolti hoon, but only write and post when you feel like you've done it justice, okie?!❤️

I know that feeling of dissatisfaction that comes along with a piece that you feel is lacking! Take your time. Nahi bhi post hua toh koi na!

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Posted: 3 years ago
#90

Originally posted by: blissfulcanyon


Oh no, that's the worst bubs 😭

Waise toh I love whatever you write, but don't post until you're not satisfied.

Main mazaak mein update ke liye bolti hoon, but only write and post when you feel like you've done it justice, okie?!❤️

I know that feeling of dissatisfaction that comes along with a piece that you feel is lacking! Take your time. Nahi bhi post hua toh koi na!


Na Naa Ab chalu krra hai post tho hoyega hi brruuuhhh 🤪

But pata nhi kaisa hoyega 😕

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