Shivi Drabble: Mauke pe Chauka (Bike Scene)

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Posted: 3 years ago
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Hello!


What a shame that they cut out the bike BTS. There was mauka and dastoor for it today, and unfortunately, the chances of it airing tomorrow are slim. Unless sbb or SBS airs an unedited version again.


So if you're upset about it, here is my small little lame attempt. It won't be the same as if you saw it in the show, but if you're upset, hope it makes you feel a little better.


Drabble- 12/2/2021


Background: Raavi hands Shiva her bike keys, and Shiva reluctantly takes it and swirls it in his hands.



Shiva pulls out the bike and brings it to where Raavi was standing. As Raavi's about to sit behind him, Shiva stops her.

"Ae chipkali, ruk."

Shiva forwards the keys to her and says, "Le, tuhi chala."

"Main?" Raavi questions.

"Kyun? Do din main tere bike chalana sikhne ka kwab ud gaya kya?"

"AbTuHaiTohSikhneKiKyaZaroorat?" Raavi dreamily blabbers.

"Kya kaha?"

Raavi come out of her trance and says, "Wohh...main toh tension main kuch bhi bolti hoon. Mera matlabh, iss waqt? Iss halat main chalau?"

"Iss halat main matlabh? Sikhne keliye koi muhrat nahi hota. Sikhna hai, toh beth nahi toh hamesha keliye bhul ja!" Shiva exclaims as he slides to the back of the bike.


As Raavi is looking at her bag and wondering what to do, Shiva tells her to give him her bag. She quickly removes the bag from around her shoulder, gives it to Shiva, and sits in front of him. Shiva smirks thinking, "Ab aya unt pahad ke niche", but quicky hides it as Raavi turns around to look at him. Shiva nods looking at the helmet signaling her to wear it. Raavi wears the helmet, inserts the keys, and reluctantly starts the bike remembering the past accident and falls.


Sensing her nervousness, Shiva leans into her left ear and whispers, "Iss bar kuch nahi hoga. Main hoon yahan tere saath." Then, he lifts both of her hands and gestures her to hold the handles. Raavi smiles gaining some confidence as Shiva smirks and leans forward to hold the bike handles for extra measures. And the two, ride away.

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Posted: 3 years ago
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AHHHH TWIN THANK YOU THANK YOU THANK YOU!

Thoda sukoon mila 😭💔


""AbTuHaiTohSikhneKiKyaZaroorat?" Raavi dreamily blabbers."


Imma imagine that he held her bag too and smirked as she wore the helmet based on the BTS.


LOVEEE! 🤗


EDITORS KI TOH 🤬

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Posted: 3 years ago
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Thank you jheelu. Thoda thandak mila dik ko. Insert gif : tum bahut sahi kaam karta hain from Munna bhai mbbs.

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Posted: 3 years ago
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Originally posted by: Anu_V

AHHHH TWIN THANK YOU THANK YOU THANK YOU!

Thoda sukoon mila 😭💔


""AbTuHaiTohSikhneKiKyaZaroorat?" Raavi dreamily blabbers."


Imma imagine that he held her bag too and smirked as she wore the helmet based on the BTS.


LOVEEE! 🤗


EDITORS KI TOH 🤬


Did he hold her bag? I'll go edit the drabble to add it.❤️

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Posted: 3 years ago
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Originally posted by: Mountains_Lakes


Did he hold her bag? I'll go edit the drabble to add it.❤️


twin dil lelo mera

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Posted: 3 years ago
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Originally posted by: Anu_V


twin dil lelo mera


Updated that bit. Go read that part again!

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Posted: 3 years ago
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Ab tu hai to sikhne ki kyaa zaroorat?

This is 🥺❤️

Raavi is nervous thinking about the accident And the way shiva assures her ❤️

Thank you for writing this hails, it was super cute ❤️

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Posted: 3 years ago
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Hails, I am super mad super mad at editors today, didn’t expect them to stoop so low. What was the need for Mami-Anita scene?

It is 6 thing not giving scene we would like to see, we can let it go. But they shoot a scene to go with tje storyline, show it in SBB/SBS segments and then not show in tje episode, how ruthless and irresponsible the editing team is? Do they even care about the show and the story?

Thanks for writing this drabble. i will imagine the dialogues and assume this is what happened.


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Posted: 3 years ago
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Originally posted by: Mountains_Lakes


Updated that bit. Go read that part again!


twin kal hi kaha tha that ill come to you when editors phail at their job.

you made me smileeeeeeeee


LOVEEEE ❤️🤗

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Posted: 3 years ago
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Originally posted by: mpks1

Hails, I am super mad super mad at editors today, didn’t expect them to stoop so low. What was the need for Mami-Anita scene?

It is 6 thing not giving scene we would like to see, we can let it go. But they shoot a scene to go with tje storyline, show it in SBB/SBS segments and then not show in tje episode, how ruthless and irresponsible the editing team is? Do they even care about the show and the story?

Thanks for writing this drabble. i will imagine the dialogues and assume this is what happened.



I know, I was mad too. Last week they chopped a scene after airing it in precap. Clowns.


And today, there was snow need to kirkit either. Bakwas main time waste kiya. 😡

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