Journey to the centre of my Earth (Shivi TS)(partly 18+)(pg7, 29/11) - Page 2

Originally posted by: IshqKaRang

This is soooo good!! The way you’ve portrayed their feelings, thoughts and emotions. I got sucked right in to the center of their earth!

And I’d do anything.. even sponsor a travel for the writers to the center of the earth for Shiva and Raavi to elope like this into their own little world!

Thank you for this!!

@bold Oh Neet!!! They've traumatised you haven't they😆? I'm pretty sure they'll never elope on the show, but at the very least we could hope for a solo outing or something? And thank you!! I'm glad you loved it❤️!!

Originally posted by: Anu_V

Love it! What a unique concept to write!

Thanks for the tag! waitng to read more of your work!

Thank you Anu❤️!! I will be writing more, but I feel like I should probably tell you that I'm a super slow writer though.... 😆

Loved it Sathya ❤️

Beautifully written !

Loved the binny star, moon and earth example .😳

I'm here!

And let me tell you what a pleasure it was to read this! Raavi's emotions, her heartbreak, her healing heart, and how she sprang into Raavi 1.0 with a lil bit of Raavi 2.0 was worth the read!

Shiva making an entry in her diary, as if he's a real person and called him Mr.Diary was so *squeals in cuteness overload* ❤️

Shiva saying that the diary knows Raavi more, and someday he'll know her better than the diary does has me all *faints in cuteness overload* 🌸

Point is, I loved reading this, please write more so that I can heal my heart when the show isn't treating my babies right 😭♥️

Originally posted by: VaishnaviG

Loved it Sathya ❤️

Beautifully written !

Loved the binny star, moon and earth example .😳

Thank you Vaish❤️!!! The astronomy was a favorite bit for me to write as well actually...😆Although I had to fact check everything because it's been too long...

Just pure magic

Originally posted by: sillysatchel

I'm here!

And let me tell you what a pleasure it was to read this! Raavi's emotions, her heartbreak, her healing heart, and how she sprang into Raavi 1.0 with a lil bit of Raavi 2.0 was worth the read!

Shiva making an entry in her diary, as if he's a real person and called him Mr.Diary was so *squeals in cuteness overload* ❤️

Shiva saying that the diary knows Raavi more, and someday he'll know her better than the diary does has me all *faints in cuteness overload* 🌸

Point is, I loved reading this, please write more so that I can heal my heart when the show isn't treating my babies right 😭♥️

Oh Meg🤗!!! Thank you for the beautiful comment❤️!!! Raavi's emotions deserve this. And because I'm so tired of waiting for her monologues, I gave her some myself!

And yes, Shiva's a cutie pie in general and this track is butchering him... But I'm writing Shiva 1.0 here, so he can be pretty reserved, aag boy where he needs to be, and our original softie lattoo Shiva!!

Glad you loved it!! Will tag you in anything else I write as well... Do check my index out if you'd like to read a few older pieces though... 😳

Originally posted by: Anon21

Just pure magic

Thank you Sri!!

This is exceptionally amazing💕🥰, Love Raavi 1.0❤️💚

This was SO GOOD!

The main highlight for me the last one!

Specially when he said that he's a caveman and extremely possessive.. ❤️