ShiVi FF~Nishaani~Part 7|updating soon - Page 12

Omg it was so beautiful 😍

Their beach moments were so surreal

Loved it

Knowing whats gonna be in chapter 8 .. I can't wait tatti. Bring on the angst and progresssss ❤️

Me melting in a puddle after these two updates.

Keya comment karu? You already know you much I adore the way you capture Shivi, true to their essence with all their nokjhoks and gussa and manaoying of each other. Would always pester you for uodates but now that this one is coming to end can't help bit feel sad. Will miss those days of eagerly waiting for new updates

and what if i say i need some more pester??

Originally posted by: barkhaa_tpm

Knowing whats gonna be in chapter 8 .. I can't wait tatti. Bring on the angst and progresssss ❤️

hahaha but what about surprise element, half you know, half you don't

Originally posted by: Barkhaa_JB

Barkhaa_tpm ka password phir se udd gaya had to somehow log in to this one to comment, yeh bhi 7 tries ke baad I dunno how tf this keeps happening

Anyways can I just start with the quality of your writing ? This has been a superior piece of writing .. one of your best yet .. the beach scene has my whole heart and its so vivid .. it was as if I was standing there myself .. watching them

And beach par toh tere saath hi aungi .. I see what you did there ... 😎 but Shiva bhi smart .. fatt se ussi point pe pakad liya usse. Smart boiiiii..

The fact that she can just .. jaamao her haq on him and he indulges her ... how beautifully you've got that interspersed throughout the story ❤️

Give geeeeli pappisss soon please ☺️

really? yeh vala itna achha hai that you're calling it superior??????????????

Update phastamm phastt❤❤❤waiting

Dunno what to do. I felt like I needed to give you space with your new schedule but since you yourself have asked me to kick your ass, here I come in your dm to scream in your ears : UPDATE DEEEEE