Take my breath away: ShiVi FF - Page 65

Originally posted by: LizzieBennet

Yahan thoda alag maamla hai. All the masala is in the last bit ☺️😆

Hewhewhewhwhwhwheehewwhewww☺️

I am sensing a sneaking in...😈

everyone...literally EVERYONE on the forum knows how much I'm about him sneaking in Raavi's room.

I have advertised it so diligently🤣

Phew! It stands at almost 9000 words now.

Abhi editing aur proof reading baaki hai.

All going well, will post by end of day IST. Or else expect an early morning update tomorrow!

Now off to sleep and rest my tired fingers!😆

Originally posted by: LizzieBennet

Phew! It stands at almost 9000 words now.

Abhi editing aur proof reading baaki hai.

All going well, will post by end of day IST. Or else expect an early morning update tomorrow!

Now off to sleep and rest my tired fingers!😆

YOOOHOOOO!!!!🤗☺️

PLS PLS PLLSSSSS RAAT KO (IST mein raat ko)...Imma surrender to sleep in the high of the update. ☺️

Yahin hoon main... Yahin hoon main... Kahin na gaya tujhe chhod ke main🤡

Maine dekh liya hai.. You've woken up 🤪🤣

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Originally posted by: LizzieBennet

Hello Riv! Nice to meet you and I'm so glad you're enjoying this story!

I'm Riya, but most people here on IF call me Liz or Lizzie. I'm okay with anything! 😳

I'm still working on the next one but the last couple of days have been so busy, and this might be the longest chapter I've written so far so you'll have to be patient! 😒

Thanks for reading! 🤗

Hey Riya ! Good to know you too!❤️

Ah yes I get it it's okay take your time luv!🤗

I'm sure it's gonna be a treat for us readers when you post the next i.e the longest chapter!

Take care of yourself!😊

Originally posted by: EuphoricDamsel.

Maine dekh liya hai.. You've woken up 🤪🤣

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Editing chalu hai, babe. Soonish, if work doesn't get too busy!

Originally posted by: LizzieBennet

Editing chalu hai, babe. Soonish, if work doesn't get too busy!

Aree main tho jaga hua hunn...12:30 tk... 🤡

Abhi 9 bjne wale hainn...3.5 hrs hain...

Originally posted by: LizzieBennet

This chapter is soooo long. It's already 7000 words and not done yet. Maybe I included too much and should take some off 😒

Why not divide them in parts and give us an early update☺️

Update 8: What's the name of the game?

Summary: Shiva helps Raavi fulfill some things on her bucket list while they both struggle with their dreams for what they actually want from life.

So, this chapter has 3 distinct scenes

The first scene is Shiva with his family as they deal with the Dev situation. I felt the need to put this in because I wanted to portray Shiva in a different light than what he's portrayed in the show (I've been reading some updates, and have gathered some of the story from what you guys have told me). He's not spineless here, he loves and respects his mother but he can stand up for himself. And Raavi is the same. They are both respectful of their elders but are not afraid to seek what they truly want. I just wanted to send a message to the showrunners here that it's okay to disagree with your elders. You don't have to fall in with their emotional blackmail every time. It's okay to stand up for what you want. It doesn't make you disrespectful. In fact, it shows that you have a healthy respect for yourself, for how can you respect others if you cannot respect yourself?

Also, I want to reiterate here that there's no bad blood between Suman and Prafulla. There was some dispute about the land that Suman owns, but that's all sorted now and a new branch of the store is currently being built there.

Scenes 2 and 3 are about Raavi's bucket list.

I'll post this in 2 parts simply because the update is very long. And Part 2 will be marked mature. As always, please be aware of the Mature content warning. I'm resing the next two posts for the update.

Looking forward to your reactions - good, bad or ugly! 😳