Take my breath away: ShiVi FF - Page 37

Originally posted by: VaishnaviG

Ha mein dobi nahi hoon samjhi na 😡

Isko observation bolte hai mein unko kabhi 18+ par comment karte nahi dekha hai isliye

Now that I know you're not yet 18, did you read this one? 😳🤡

Originally posted by: RainbowChaser

This part was so 🔥🔥🔥🔥

Also, I'm in love with your language.

Your voacbulary is pretty awesome !

Really looking forward to where this would go

Thank you so much for your kind words! 🤗

I'm so glad you want to read more! ❤️

Originally posted by: PoohNotFound

Lizzie, does it really matter? 😆 we're all here to support you,love.

It matters, yaar! I'm not here to corrupt innocents!

That being said, idk how many under 18 are actual innocents! 😆

But I do appreciate the support - all of you! 🤗

Originally posted by: LizzieBennet

Riya! I would always tell you straight up if I didn't enjoy the writing since I would love the same courtesy (you might not like me after, bit that's to be thought of if it ever happens 😂).

Prafulla does manipulates when she wants her way, emotionally but not always using the I took care of you 😂😂. The union was actually very much blessed by Suman (Shiva's mum) who was upset that her children had made a mockery of marriage and had traumatised a young girl (Raavi). She initially always wanted them to be happy together, but now it's changed (I'm quite behind in watching the episodes so i wouldn't be able to pinpoint when exactly it happened, but it was because Raavi insulted Shiva in public, however she stopped liking Raavi some stage after that).

As for the jumbled thoughts its not because of the writing (brilliant) or disconnect(i think i connected too much). Sometimes I have too many thoughts going through my head usually when watching something, because we don't always get to see what everyone is thinking, but this time round its because there are too many feelings involved for both Shiva and Raavi (which i love love loved, but it makes it harder to not feel for the characters. For me this is a great strength, feeling the feelings for a written character - I'm not sure if I'm conveying my thoughts sensibly).

Originally posted by: Miss.M

I think there are a few 16 year olds lurking around, but they're aware of the mature tags I'm sure. As long as you're tagging it they'll be aware 😊😊

Yeah, I really hope they're aware of what they're getting into, I don't want to be responsible for corrupting them. But at the same time, I hope they're responsible enough to not read content that might not be suitable for them. I believe in freedom of creativity - letting people write what they want to write with a fair amount of caution. And I hope readers are the same!

Originally posted by: Coleus

Riya I am in loooooooooooove with this story 🧡🖤

It was super hot🔥🔥🔥

Uffff... the sexual tension🔥

They both know they want each other but shivi being shivi are stuck in the mess..can't wait to see how they will sort this out with dev in equation

PS..there was a bike ride teaching scene in one of the recent episodes and all I could think of was your version of shivi ☺️

Alisha!! 🤗

Thank you my dear for reading! ❤️

ShiVi being ShiVi are stuck in this mess 😆! They're stuck only because I want them to be stuck 😈! Can't have things being too easy no? 😆

Yeah, I'm aware of the bike scene, I was actually presumptuous enough to think the writers might have sneaked it off the FF. 🤓Then someone informed me the Tamil original has it too! 😆

Originally posted by: LizzieBennet

Now that I know you're not yet 18, did you read this one? 😳🤡

Obviously 😆

Lekin chalta hai maturity is not when you are 18+, sometimes you gain that before becoming 18.I have read more mature stuff than this 😆. Bit don’t worry I only read .😆

I am mature enough so you can trust me 😳

If not you can ask Premziee 😆If I am mature or not.

Originally posted by: EuphoricDamsel.

Okay I know I might sound positively mad but I have a habit of eating up random quotes off the internet and I read this particular thing 4 or 5 years ago I guess and today when I was reading this chapter it FIT in SO WELL on Raavi (Or vice versa on Shiva even take your Pick). So Imma just gonna write this down here because I'm a show-off and I want people to read this 😳🤪🤣:

“All my most unreachable dreams were suddenly, so unbelievably, about to come true. But they were forbidden. The right thing to do would be to pull away, turn from him, run back to the house. My head screamed at me to flee, but my heart begged me to stay.”

― Cindy Ray Hale, Destiny

I loved this! ❤️And yes, this is apt for both Shiva and Raavi at this point in my story!

Originally posted by: VaishnaviG

Obviously 😆

Lekin chalta hai maturity is not when you are 18+, sometimes you gain that before becoming 18.I have read more mature stuff than this 😆. Bit don’t worry I only read .😆

I am mature enough so you can trust me 😳

If not you can ask Premziee 😆If I am mature or not.

You read it, phir comment kyon nahi kiya? Did you like it?

Yeah I agree, it's not age it's maturity!

I'd read a lot of mature stuff too by the time I was 18!

Originally posted by: VaishnaviG

Obviously 😆

Lekin chalta hai maturity is not when you are 18+, sometimes you gain that before becoming 18.I have read more mature stuff than this 😆. Bit don’t worry I only read .😆

I am mature enough so you can trust me 😳

If not you can ask Premziee 😆If I am mature or not.

Oh she's fine totally! 😆

IF did all the good by introducing the Mature tag in the website, it wasn't there before and even then everyone used to end up reading everything no matter the content! 🤣

So you putting up warning and IF putting up the tag makes everyone safe of any responsibility or whatever, lol.

Tension mat lo!

Plus...everyone chooses I guess these days what they want/don't want to read.

It's fine.