Shivi drabble: First kiss

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Posted: 3 years ago
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Hey everyone,


Soooooo the kiss was a shocker on multiple fronts….the random girl ….Shivi relationship status….Shiva’s confusing (but hopefully still pending) reaction….also the potential screw up of Shiva’s first kiss. 😒


I’m not sure how well they will address the moral considerations….a part of me knows that they’ll downplay it…but that’s for the episode to show. For now, I decided to fabricate a past memory between Shivi to make myself happy.


Again, not a writer, so it's mostly conversation.

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Ae gadhedi, kya kab se first kiss, first kiss laga rakha hai? Kyu dimaag kha rahi hai?”, Shiva yelled at her in frustration. He was already in a terrible mood after his failed attempt to dissuade Disha, and now his chudail was hell bent on eating his head.


Raavi was furious at Shiva’s response. Here was another girl kissing her bhootnath, and he still thought that he could yell at her as if her questions weren't valid. She held his collar, and yelled right back at him, “Tujhe tera pehla kiss kal ki aayi hui ladki ne diya. Aur mai, tere bachpan ki dosti, kuch bolo bhi na?” Raavi played the bachpan card to hide her jealous anger.


Looking down at her tiny hands holding his collar, Shiva couldn’t decide if she should laugh at her selective memory, or cry that her questions were so off-topic. He thought she’d be mad about how another girl could even kiss him. But no, his ulti khodi chipkali was too busy being mad that someone else supposedly gave him his "first kiss". Since he’d given up try to reason out the inner workings of her mind, he decided it was best to honestly answer her question. Maybe then she’d leave him in peace.


“Raavi, agar yeh mera first kiss hai, toh tune aaj tak jo mujhe mere birthday par itne kisses diye woh kya tha? Pata nahi kaun si movie se seekh kar aayi thi, par pichle 5 saal se har birthday par aake mere dono gaal laal karti aayi hai mere birthday wish ke bahane. Woh kya tha?” He asked her in a calm voice. Raavi’s hands went slack on his collar as she tried to process his words.


Taking advantage of her silence, Shiva continued, “Yaadash kamzor ho gayi ho toh bol. Tere liye badam lekar aatu hu. Jitna bhi dur bhagta tha, chudail ki tarah mere peecha karti thi aur apni gatiya lipstick ke nishan chod jaati thi. Woh bhul gayi?” Unconsciously, Shiva’s gaze landed on her lips that were currently painted a similar shade of red. Though they were pursed in an angry pout right now, her lips were the only ones that he wanted on his body. He wasn’t interested in any other girl, and that’s exactly what he’d told Disha. Unfortunately, that girl wasn’t ready to accept his decision. He was so tired of no one listening to him.


Raavi was shocked at Shiva’s recounting of their past memories. He was right; she had kissed a reluctant Shiva multiple times. But she had forgotten those incidences in her anger at Disha. Since she still didn’t want him to know the real reason for her anger, she quickly pivoted to another line of attack. “Par woh kisses aur yeh Disha ki kiss mein farak hai. Woh birthday wishes thi. Aur yeh pata nahi kya tha.” She tried to explain.


Shiva was once again baffled with her ability to deflect to random things. He couldn’t understand what was really bothering her and why. He contemplated if the main reason for her anger was actually that someone else had kissed him. Was it possible that she was as possessive of him as he was for her? Since he had no more energy to figure her out, he decided to shut down Raavi’s babbling in his usual manner.


Pulling her hands away from his collar, he got into fer face and said, “Ae gadhedi, bohot bakwas ho gayi iss bematlab vale kiss ke topic par. Bhul ja isse. Kuch nahi tha. Ab chal andar. Bohot dimag kha liya aaj ke liye”. With that, he held her hand, and dragged her inside. Maybe tomorrow he could figure her out.

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Posted: 3 years ago
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Umm😳😳the new girl kissed Shiva🥺😢???

But still love your story, especially the past history between Raavi and Shiva🥰💕

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Posted: 3 years ago
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This was cute❤️Loved it!!

Do write more❤️

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Posted: 3 years ago
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It was cute❤❤

Loved it😍❤

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Posted: 3 years ago
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Originally posted by: Luvs_SanIsh

Umm😳😳the new girl kissed Shiva🥺😢???

But still love your story, especially the past history between Raavi and Shiva🥰💕


Thanks ❤️


Loll yes, the new girl is faster than the speed of light (Raavi's words) and kissed him on the cheek.

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Posted: 3 years ago
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Aww thanks ❤️

Since Shivi didn't talk about the kiss at all, I'm going to tell myself ki yeh sach mein hua tha 😆

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Posted: 3 years ago
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This is lovely! I'm going to assume ShiVi had a conversation about the kiss and they talked exactly this 😆

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Posted: 3 years ago
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Originally posted by: GrilledCheese

This is lovely! I'm going to assume ShiVi had a conversation about the kiss and they talked exactly this 😆


Thanks ❤️

Loll har baar ki tarah, we have to rely on ourself to survive the writers/editors ki adbhutness 😆

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Posted: 3 years ago
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AWWWWWWWWWW.

So freaking cute ❤️

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Posted: 3 years ago
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Originally posted by: EuphoricDamsel.

AWWWWWWWWWW.

So freaking cute ❤️


Awww thanks ❤️

Its Shivi that are cute, when the makers let them be 🤪

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